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Review by chantelle
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ok. First up, the way this begins was actually a breath of fresh air. It's an easy read and although not much is happening, I still kept wanting to keep reading. It had the something's--going--to--happen vibes. The format is amazing, really. Dividing it into these paras was a smart move, a hell of a smart move.
Now, the story in itself, NATIVE AMERICAN? Damn, you're a genius.The introduction of Tommy was pretty great, it wasn't that long and yet it did tell me a lot about him.That's pretty hard to create, I guess.
What I don't understand why you would let go of this in the first place. I am grateful you took it up again, it takes a great deal of bravery to do so. Honestly, I would love to see where this goes. I mean, if you intend to keep it going, it's pretty great. Not a lot of people, including me, know anything about the Native Americans. Basing a story off of something lesser known is awesome.
It was a pleasure reading this piece, I hope you continue writing this one. If it ever makes it as a book, I would buy it, I promise you.
Thank you for creating this.
chantelle
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Review of Drabble #1  
Review by chantelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
sometimes I wonder if all these things in my head will ever be put into word. An here you've done it. Thank you.
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Review of The Word  
Review by chantelle
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't know if I am qualified to judge poetry but I just have to say this one thing. It's pure genius and life is better with poets around. This one particularly struck my heart. Magic in poetry.
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