Great work! I love the despair in seeing everything around the speaker have interaction while the speaker isn't able to participate, followed by the sense of relief in finding someone reaching out to them. I also enjoyed how the general ideas switched from a description of a living, changing environment to describing an event, then to a wish for the future. It flows very well
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