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Review of The Garden Calls  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear, this was an amazing story. Wonderfully written, well executed, a fabulous crescendo to the final climax of the story. Let me simplify.
*Flower6* What I Like the Least? = Answer: Nothing, I liked it all!
*Star* What I liked the most: = Answer: Everything, but let me pin it down, my favorite part? This would I guess refer to the whole story ... the imagery in which you paint like an Artist paints on their canvas. You painted here a scene in which I could see it virtually before my eyes, I saw and narrated the whole scene. This is a real typical Saturday morning of home, with Mom. I loved the scene of the beautiful green grass, I could almost smell the grass and flowers in the yard and smell that sea salt air...I have smelt this before when in Panama City Beach...yes, I can smell that smell you painted here for us all. Your Mom seems like the sweet Mom that everyone wants in life right?! I love that she loves her garden so much though and takes pride in it. That is a loving woman.
ERRORS/CORRECTIONS: None! I didn't see anything that would warrant any changes to this perfect piece. Well written !

WRITE ON! *Thumbsup*
Cissy

(just a reader of good writing.)

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Review of Werewolf Eve  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was so weird! *Laugh* I am saying that in a very (BIG) joking way, okay?! This story was absolutely fantastic! I love that you actually gave the ghost a soul, because for something to have feelings and being scared to death would be a requirement to have feelings, lol...this was great! To be scared of a werewolf? Total entertainment! I laughed at the end, but I was suppose to right? any way tell me What happened to the werewolf? Where did he go or end up in this story...also, just what was it that the farmer knew? Is there going to be a second part to this story? It should be...hey don't leave me hanging here okay? *Bigsmile* Thank you for a most enjoyable read. this was very fun. Many Blessings dear one,
just a reader...
Cissy

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Review of Marriage  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lina...now I have got to say...this was simply Wonderful!!!! I loved this piece! No error's, everything was dead on perfection! In my own made up words it was Fantablous! I really loved the shape in which you took to write this piece and the words spoke volumes to me as I read it. You know, what you wrote here is so true on and during the sacred ceremony of the wedding. Well written Lina, well thought out of the meaning of the wedding ceremony and the vows that two must take on their wedding day. Thank you for letting me read your wonderful writings, they are really good dear. This is because you won me in the " "Invalid Item" 

Many blessings
your friend *Heart* & *Peace*

Cissy White-*Wolf*





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Author: Dillon Thomas
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Review of My Freedom  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Lina, I am so sorry about getting this done so slowly. I am reviewing you on behalf of " The Lucky Leprechaun's Raffle" ... and that you have won my pkg. in that Raffle. Please know that this is only my opinion okay? Take part of it or none of it okay? No harm, no fowl.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:
I liked the fact that you were conveying your thoughts about your Freedom.

GRAMMAR/CORRECTIONS:
As far as I could see, and I reread this piece to get a better feel for it so-to-speak, I saw no grammatical error's.
Corrections? If you could pull in the sentence at the bottom, it would make for a better read and easier flow to this piece.

EXAMPLE:
" I wake the next morning, feeling free as the birds, and hear a small whisper " I have given you, your freedom".

(suggestion)*Up*I wake next morning, feeling free as birds, hearing small whispers,"I have given you your Freedom". As I say just a small suggestion of how to pull that last sentence in without loosing any of the meaning of it at the same time...what do you think? Hon take it for what it is worth okay? It was just a suggestion. Keep writing, and *Thumbsup* Write On! Thank you for letting us come by to read your wonderful writings. *Smile*

Many blessings to you *Heart*&*Peace*
your friend,
Cissy White-*Wolf*

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Author: Dillon Thomas
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In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Serious?! This is really Hemingway's workroom? Fantastic. I love Hemingway. I have one of his signed books, of " For Whom the Bell Tolls". Very old book but still great reading material. I do so love his writings. I have a few good writer's in my library. *Smile* Love your pictures of Ireland also. All of your images of Hooves and tHiNg as well, great album.

Cya later, I'll be back to read more at another time. Love your writings.

Cissy



REVIEWING on behalf of all of these groups. Many blessings there dear one. *Bigsmile*


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Author: Dillon Thomas
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Review of The Sun Also Sets  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello there again, Hooves! *Bigsmile* I have got to say my dear...this was a very fine piece of writing. I enjoyed it greatly! So sorry my dear, but I still do not review like the normal reviewing technical way. I read, then I just tell you what I liked, if it was so obvious of a mistake to be slapping me in the face to point out, then I would, in a very nice way, lol. Of course your short story didn't have any errors, or issues of incorrect grammar, or bad sentence structure or any thing that I could see that was wrong except one thing...you really did make me laugh so hard..hee-hee..I just about wet myself! Now THAT is a great story. It has been some time since I laughed that hard of reading anything! What a wonderful story! It was superfantastic! I like to make up words...so excuse me if I use a few of them ahaha..fantabulos writing there Hooves, I really did like this story. You had me from the title, and after I sat down in the seat to read your awesome story, I got pulled all the way into your story , I was right there with that bull, Hooves. I am so glad that I came by to read this fun, story, Thank You so much for sharing your writings with all of us dear, I do so appreciate it bunches! Wow..Keep writing dear, *Thumbsup* Write On! Many blessings to you....

Awww man! I forgot for a second...my bad *Blush* I am reviewing for many groups...let me leave their names okay? Have a great day there..*Laugh*ing still ..thanks for the laugh. *Wink*

Cya! *Smile*...I'll be back, just thought I'd warn ya...lol.
Cissy




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Review of Hollow Dreams  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now I have to say...This is off the Chain!!!! OMG! WOW Ken will you never cease to amaze me?! This my dear, I really liked this one and I love the structure and form that you took on this one, very cool young dude! *Laugh* Seriously though, What I loved about this in an overall read, you know I just love the rhyming thing right? I'm crazy about that type of poetry, (yeah, I know, I can smell your brain burning all the way here, because of what you are thinking, like, yep! This lady is realllyyyy off her noodle! uh-huh! Yeah man! She's really gone...out there! swoosh!) Anyway, I do love that you did the rhyming in this along with this awesome structure of it. I love the story of it as well of when she draws you in, while you're thinking that you're getting the best of the best with this woman, all the while she is playing you like a spider does with a fly, just long enough until she tires of you and then feast. you never see it coming, this is absolutely wonderful, and as you know there were no error's.
Ken, you have a muse that I simply love! Keep on writing! *Thumbsup* Write On!

Cya hon.,
Cissy

Oh yeah,,,wow almost forgot...haha, I must be completely brain dead tonight, lol. Reviewing on behalf of many groups....
Can't be selfish and just read because I like to read now can I ...These are the groups listed at the bottom of the page.
Many blessings dear one, *Delight*



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Review of My big dream  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW Izzy, honey you can sure tell a story! And if all this was true? Which to me it looks like it was, (from one abused person to another, I can tell the signs are there)...You made it outta hell and found you a new home and a place to write. This story brought back painful memories of my past but, it reminded me of how I should tell a lot of my on story, because hon., this stuff is a healer and it helps other's that read it and are still being abused. It's a good thing to write about the bad things in your life..it helps get it out of you so that you can move on a little at a time and start to heal from the emotional hurt inside of you. My! What a strong person you are dear, you are simply amazing. This story will help many people hon., believe me it will.you have been a braver person than myself about writing a part of your story here. Now, you have taught me something here today. I am a much older person than you and I have decided to take your lead and go back to that dark short stories that I was going to write and finally do it now. " Out of the mouths of babe's, they will lead us..." ' just a bible quote hon.' ...Sweetie, as I was reading you had me so engrossed in this story, I didn't look for error's, of grammar or anything else, so I am sorry about that. I was too busy reading to check for anything hon., so shoot me okayyyy?*Laugh*...Hey, you're the one that has a best seller on your hands here that made me forget that I was actually reviewing instead of just reading a good, excuse me, a very good book! *Bigsmile* wow! *Thumbsup* Write On! ... and I do mean...Keep Writing!!!! Okay? I will be reading more of your writings dear...you can count on that! Opps! Before I forget...lol...I was suppose to be reviewing, so on behalf of these group I will mention, I am reviewing on their behalf. *Hotair* *Laugh* I'll be back...lol.
Many blessings dear,
Cissy




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In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Glowz, this was a very emotional piece that you wrote here. This was a free verse poem that was done in that form as I can see. I am not good at rating free verse but I do love to read. As a reader you had me in tears all the way through, yes even at the very end. The parts I liked the best in this piece of writing was, 4th stanza down, 5th line down..:" No nothing can compare..." and the other parts that stood out to me that was the great finality of it all...fifth (5th) stanza down, part of the 1st line down to ...well let me show you what I mean...
" He was a spiritual warrior with a big heart.
He was a friend in a relative's body.
He was a Brother in Christ.
He was a joy to be around...
..He never failed to let to tell me he love me."

This kind of emotion that you have written about I know too well and for you to be able to write about it I know is a release and a healer to let it out, get it out of you...to anyone who will listen. I pray for your comfort dear, my sympathies my dear
on your loss. Write On! *Thumbsup*

Cissy
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Review of The Cube  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an extra pleasure to be able to come here to look around. You have something really awesome here. I am sure that many have been on the list of winners. I think that you are doing a great thing here, it promotes a positive attitude to the receiver as well as the giver. It is an inspiration. Well done on your hard work here. Congratulations on having a simply winning place. *Thumbsup* Thank you for letting me look around! *Smile*

Sincerely,
Cissy

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In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello Light, I saw that someone else came by your port to review this item of your writing. I didn't like what was said, and what they said peeked my interest. So, the very kittenish curious person that I am, I just had to come by to see. Do you think that you can take some kind information, reviewing, from an 'oldie' person like me? What I'd like to do is help you tune this piece up so that anyone else who comes by to read you, you will then get great reviews. Who needs the kind of garbage that I read. To me there is no sense in being mean, and having a holier than thou attitude. If you are here, it must be because that you like to write. What you said here actually made sense, but there are so many that cannot read between the lines of the incorrect spelling and I would like to show you how to do a sentence structure of writing. Something I learned Here at Writing.Com in a Writing Academy. Let me tell you hon., I was I thought, the worlds worst writer here. Didn't know about sentence structure, proper spacing, grouping into paragraphs, Capitalizing, and just plain proper grammar. I had no idea that it meant so much to the reading public. If you ever decide that you are going to write a book of any kind, then this is all of the things you will have to know, just so that it is a salable book. No matter what genre that you decide to write in my dear, these are technical points that you will have to learn and know. My suggestion would be to join a ' Newbie ' group here at Writing.com. There are many here dear, and they will help you every step of the way okay? If you would like to know of some, just drop me a email here and I will help you all that I can okay? Now, if you don't mind I am going to give you an honest review, but will be helpful in every thing that I am going to point out and say. Now please, remember, you do not have to pay attention to anyone's review here, and you can take what I say as help, and my honest opinion, or you can ignore it completely. *Smile* I am going to show you the way I would write this piece after I put yours up first, and then you compare the two, and then yell at me all that you want okay?*Smile*
Yours:
Sometimes it feels like life is very precious each and every second we have is a gift of life.when a person dies either we know him or not for sure he will  not come back alive. Dear ones who love him will always remember him but continue their lives living in his memories.. thats the end of life..and  life after death is living in ones memories forever..life is  precious thing it comes only once.it is we who have to make it beautiful and it is we who always a part of it. Do always good and live happy with whatever you have.live content for  you are alive now..enjoy each and every part of it(life).what i say is even if u die,we have to live in death that is we have to be in a position to accept it whole heartedly.we should welcome death when time comes..to achieve that stage one have to live in a life..there is a quote saying"may you live life" i donno who quoted it..i found it somewhere else..but it really have a meaning,one should be a life of thy's life...rather bothering of worldly possessions,craving for bad things...just smell  your life as your smelling the just blossomed bud!! Do always good,make your parents happy.love your spouse,give some charity,pray always,love your friend..for these always gives you a pleasant and peaceful life..and also make u r valuable life meaningful..that one day when u ask your self what i did to this world and what is my contribution from  my life to this world...?when u got answer in urself..then u can happily leave your last breath...that is what everyone wish for and i wish for...!!! 
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Now if you don't mind, I am going to try to use all of your words and do the meaning just exactly how you meant, okay hon. ? This is my version of your “ How-To/Advice” article. As I said, you can completely ignore all of what I say here. This will not hurt my feelings at all and if you feel the need to tell me off, then Honey, please do, vent, let it rip...let it out of you, it's a release, and a very good healer! *Smile*

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Sometimes it feels like life is very precious. Each and every second we have is a gift of life. When a person (that) dies we know, we are not sure that he will come back alive. Dear ones who loved him will always remember him, but continue their lives with him living in their memories.

That is the end of a precious life, and life after death, ( after all) is living in one's memories forever. Life is a precious thing, it comes by only once (in our life-time). It is we, (ourselves)who have to make it beautiful, it is “we” who are always a part of it.

Do (good) always, live ( a) happy (life) with whatever you have. Live contented, for you are alive “now”, enjoy each and every part of your (life). What I (am) saying is even if you die, we have to live with the acceptance of death, we have to be in a position to accept it whole hardheartedly! We should welcome death when our time comes to achieve that stage, one has to live in that life.

There is a quote...” May you live life...”, I don't know who wrote it at this time, I (remember) I found it somewhere on the Internet, but it really has great meaning to it. One should be an example of one's life rather than bothering with worldly possessions, or craving for the bad things in life.

(Stop) and just smell your life, (as if) you're smelling a new blossoming bud. Do (good) always, make your parents happy, love your spouse, give charity, pray always, love your friends. These are the things that gives you a pleasant and peaceful life. Make (your) life meaningful, (so) that one day when you ask yourself...what did I do to give back to this world? What is my contribution from my life to this world?

When you have the answer within yourself, then you can give this world your last breath, happily. That is what everyone should hope, pray, and wish for...that is what I wish for, for myself!

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Do you see the difference in how this one I wrote with all of your words but in a different manner reads exactly how you were meaning it to read still? I did not take away from what you were saying or what you were trying to relay to people of your personal advice...all I did was just clean it up a bit to make it a smoother read for the reader that comes by to read you and any of your writings. As I said in the beginning, you can totally ignore all of this too, okay hon? Hope that this review was helpful and did not offend. Just a helpful neighbor here at Writing.com. Wishing you many blessing on a promising career as an Author. Be well my dear. *Smile* This has been a review on behalf of many groups. Groups that I have learned from as well.
Cissy Nega Waya

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In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Okay hon, you asked for me to read this...and I hope that you will want a real opinion from a reader/writer of things as well. I am as I tell anyone that I read, a very hard sell on the reading of someone's writings. I try to stay closest to the Classic's as far as reading something good that I like. I do read people here, and will tell them the truth of what I think, and will point out to you what I liked and disliked in your writings. I am after all just a reader of your writings, and Please remember, this is only my opinion of your Story. Take what you like from what I say, or dis guard everything, okay Jen? *smiles*

1. I liked how you opened the story, it catches your attention from the start and keeps you reading it.

2. Your History on Vlad The Impaler was dead on correct History account. I liked that as well, putting fact into a fictional Story..this made for a better read as a true Story. *Thumbsup* Well done on that.

3. In your writings, I see that you are talking, and we the reader assumes that this is you? You forgot to mention by name of who the dark figure was in this story, like...when he spoke...maybe you could put it like..Vlad spoke and said: " No, its quite alright I'm alone and would enjoy some company." (This was the fifth (5th) paragraph down, (1st) first line).Just a friendly suggestion as I said as a reader. I was taught in one of the writing classes here on Writing.com that we had to identify the person by name so that the reader would not get confused as to who that person is that we are writing about. Sweetie, I had an awful time learning this myself as a " Newbie writer". But I learned it and thankfully retained the information. As I am a Vampire buff of reading and watching of the old classic movies myself, " I knew who you were talking about here". The suggestion to name the character when he speaks is for the less informed reader of who he is. Just to make the Story clear and un-confusing. *Rolleyes* *Smile*

4. The ending was a bit confusing to me but, as I said...this is only one persons opinion. I am sure that you will get different reviews from some that are so much better at this reviewing than I am. So please for ' Christ sake's! ' Do not let what I say discourage you in any way!

5. This shows that you have a writing talent, or you couldn't have gotten my attention to read and stay until the ending. I think the way that you left it, it was some-what like a murder mystery, kind of leaving you hanging until the next Chapter comes out, now if that was the case then, you certainly pulled that on off and left me hanging at the end.*Wink*

6. What did I like about it in a whole as a story? I liked the true history that you added to the fiction of this story to make it more believable to the reader. *Thumbsup* Well Done!

OVERALL:
There a few things that can be tweaked here and there, but nothing much that would take away from this story. Just a few corrections in grammar at some places. *Bigsmile* Believe me, I was and still am at times...one of the few last writer's that still use incorrect grammar in my writings as well, I know, because I have been corrected on many of my writings as well...all I am doing is giving you what was told to me as a " New " writer. Hopefully I did not offend you in any way, I would never want to do that to anyone, honest. You HAVE TALENT! So Keep Writing! *Thumbsup* As I was taught, Write On!

Looking forward to your next Chapter Jen. I can send you that Dracula image through email or just give it to you the way to apply it to your Story. Let me know if you still want it okay hon?
Thank you for sharing your Story with me. *Smile*

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Be well my dear,
Cissy
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Review of Adequacy  
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Silent Writer, I can understand where you are coming from here in this piece. As a person who has been there and back...Honey, you decide for yourself...but do not decide in hast, step back as to look at yourself from another's point of view and just take a real good look at you. After all...who is the one who has to live with you the most? It is You! This was a Interesting piece about the thoughts that you have of people and outside influences such as the T.V. ad's of how they can make you feel less than what you are as a person. But dear...these are people that are only looking at the outside of you instead of knowing that the inner you is most likely beautiful. Okay..this is just my opinion as a reader that loves to read good writing. You can take it for what it is, just that...my opinion okay? *Smile*
1. You got my attention with the sincerity of the emotional part of it.
2. (just my opinion) I know that this is a free verse poem...so I don't know if there is a structure that you have to go by..and in saying this...the sentence structure " if needed for this piece" might need a little tweaking here and there, drawing it in at places so that it reads on a smoother basis.
" 4th line down on the first stanza it seems the line is a little too long. But it still get's the point across."

3. My favorite part of this piece are many, so I will just tell you of a few..

" A lover, a Mother,
A Father, a Friend..."

I love this because it is all of those, who thinks that what they know that is good for us, is better than what ' we ' ourselves thinks.

OVERALL:

I really liked this piece because I can relate to it very well, as many that I know of here would be able to also.
An Overall good read...very good style of the free verse poetry fashion. A lot of us cannot seem to get out of the box sometimes unless prompted to write in other area's. Dear one, if you can capture me to read something all the way through..other's will have no problem of reading it as well. Only because I am a hard sell as far as reading someone other than the classic's. Well Done! *Thumbsup* my dear..Write On!

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Sincerely yours,
Cissyccr
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In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a masterpiece! WOW! You are really a talented writer. Your free form poem flowed easy before my eyes, taking me deeper into your mind, of how the thoughts there were so vivid. Expelling imagery through out this piece, very nice rhythm... very well done and a good read. I do so much love to read. *Thumbsup* Write On my dear, an absolutely wonderful way to show us all of how the challenge to the prompt that we should follow!
Well done! *Smile*
Cissy
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Covers" 
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for all of your help to all of us here that are newbies or old new comer's, my health is very bad now, but I am able to once again come back, off and on.This is my home, and this is were I want to spend my last days....I am told this will be a slow process...so I may get to be here for a while again. When you're gone for awhile, you loose track of how to operate things, and sometimes thing change..life doesn't stay still now does it? WOW! Jack has really grown! He is so beautiful!!! I remember the blogs before his birth, and the quilt that I was lucky enough to be a part of. It doesn't surprise me at all knowing how smart his parents and grandparents are the he is a genius. My hands do not work well anymore but I can still get it done, it only takes longer to type something out. This little letter so far has taken me almost 45 minutes. Hey, that's okay huh? As long as I spell correctly, (grins). God Bless you all! Thank you for my Home!
Sincerely,
Cissy*Heart*
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Review of O Mohonk  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my! What a wonderful piece of work you did here my dear. I love how you make the reader actually smell the flowers that are in bloom, of the Lilacs I could almost really smell...oh what beauty that you painted here before my eyes, Such a breath taking surprise...I had no idea that you wrote so well. Such a wondrous surprise indeed to read a absolute very good read. As you would know my dear friend and sister, there are no error's that I could see...as you know I am a lover of poetry first, short stories next. When you tell a story like this in this kind of beauty for the world to see...ahhhh, what a glorious find that I stumbled upon. Thank you so much for sharing to all of us who likes to read a good read. Bless you!
Your words flow with a smoothness of silk, the free form was a great addition, leading you so ever gently into the climax nearing the end of little critter's dancing hurriedly out of site to only cast a luminous shadow by the Creator's night light of the moonbeam. Then descending with the finality
of reminding the reader of the place I call Mother Earth and what she does in just a day's time. Applaud! Fantastically written Webbie! Wonderful!
You really can't get much better than this. Just my opinion as a reader of fine poetry. Bravo! Love & Blessings, Cissy
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Review of Weekly Goals  
In affiliation with NAFP Reviewer's Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think that this community activity is simply wonderful! What an excellent idea in the way that you put forth to everyone to motivate a positive out come from them, also a great way just to motivate them. As an oldie here that has been gone for so very long, this is a fantastic way to motivate anyone that might have went stale or who hasn't been here for some time or to even the seasoned writer that has come up against a brick wall. Yea for you StoryMistress!!! WTG! So come on WDC community...let's get motivated! Let's write, review...be nice now when you review okay? Least but not last, have some fun here. Come on people...are you up for the challenge? Are you really gonna let an oldie like me come up beside you at the finish line, really?!? hahahaha! I know you have it in you...or you wouldn't be here right? See ya at the finish line on Friday! Wooo-Hooo!!! (giggles).
JustMe.
Love and Blessings,
~C~
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Review of Death of the Four  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A bone chilling story within this poem. How the four soldiers fought for their country but was against the killing because " God " held their heart so tight of what was wrong and right. Would you think that I might have the right slant ( idea) on this particular poem and the meaning of it? Very well written, strong sentence structure, rhyme, with an effortless smooth flow to it that made it a great read. It kept me captivated until the very end ! Well done G.Y. Lanov *Thumbsup* Write on ! *Smile*

A true fan
Sincerely,
Cissy
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You my dear are a great poet. As I read I could live each line. Wonderful story within the poem, which unless the reader looks closely they will miss the true story the Poet is telling. Well Done *Thumbsup* *Bigsmile*
Sincerely,
Cissy
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Review of Paper World.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really have to say that this one held me speechless for several minutes ! WOW! So emotional, spiritual, and awe inspiring. Reading this taught me that sometimes less is more. You my dear are a " GREAT " writer ! For anyone who second guesses " if " there is a higher Being/Creator, this short story should put that idea completely out of their mind. I got chills from reading it and found no errors. Keep writing! You are awesome!!!! *Thumbsup* *Delight*Sincerely,
Cissy
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Review of An Acrostic Poem  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Maybe I'm kinda dense on this one? I don't know, I'm not that great at giving helpful advice on Acrostic Poems...for the most part...your sentence structure is dead on target. The rhyming is as well the same...(perfect). A couple of lines threw me off while reading...but what do I know? I'm old and have been gone for a long time. Over all, this was a good read in my opinion. Great writing, don't stop! *Thumbsup*

Have a blessed day my dear,
your humble servant/reader
Cissy
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Review of Halloween Party  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My dear brother Lyle ( Sticktalker ) , I enjoyed your story of the Halloween Party. This was a delightful and fun read. You my dear have brightened up my whole day. Very well written, no errors as far as I can see, and vivid were the characters and scenery that you painted in this story that I could actually see this story as if it were a movie playing in my mind. Very well done! *Thumbsup*
Write On!

Cissy
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Muhahahahahahahahahaha! *Laugh*
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Review of HALLOWEEN NIGHT  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sherri....you captured Halloween at it's best ! What a wonderful mind you have. *Bigsmile* Horror is my favorite of reading material and I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. *Delight* Good luck in the contest and have a fun-filled fright-night! *Laugh*

Love ya bunches
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In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
WOW!!!!!!!!! Oldwarrior, I have got to say.....that I have not laughed this hard in too many months! *Laugh* What a wonderful poem!
Thank you for the laugh and for the gruesome picture that you painted before my eyes, *Bigsmile* Horror happens to be my favorite and you have captured my mind and my heart with this piece! *Thumbsup**Delight*

Love ya brother
Cissy
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Review of The First People  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My dear Old Warrior, I must say that this piece that you have written has brought a joyous tear to my eyes. What a wonderful blessing you are! You have nailed the true spirit of this wonderful group...right on the head with this awesome poem. *Thumbsup* Outstanding writing!!!!! Oh my!!!! What a fantastic tribute to The First People's Group! *Delight* You are a great writer, a blessed friend and a very loved brother. It would be my honor to put this on our group page.....after I talk to the other council. Love and Blessings dear one.

Always Cissy

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