|Lmao, I did review of your work in the wrong place, and let me get into my earlier details:
- It was a good read, flow-wise story, wonderful skill and researchful dedication.
- The chemistry between the characters definitely were the strong point of the work, especially Marc and Seto went back and forth with their view of Joan or poor Roland got roasted... The conversation of Joan and Mokuba was honestly wholesome
- Somehow, the comedy stopped at being clever for me or good chuckle... maybe it was not my type of comedy when it got too "clean" (maybe your problem with "swear" or more "vulgar things"(not sth beyond the pleasure though))
=> I really enjoyed your work and hope you keep up your good writings :D