Ok, good start however you just plunge us into the story. No buildup, its like the story expects us to know what is going on. Next is your grammar and spelling. You're doing script style, however people will take you more seriously as a writer if you have it like a novel. With quotation marks and dialog actions like said and asked, that sort of thing. You have to review your story and fix mistakes. You just have to tweak it a little.
Lovely! Glad to have you back making chapters! I saw no flaws in here, so that is good. I also love the emotion you put into it, it made for a glorious read!
Ooooo now you got me excited! That was a nice introduction there, a very nice look into the mind of a troubled kid. You make sure to include something to lead on the reader to wait for part two. Now, we will just have to wait and see.
These are amazing, outstanding drawings! Curse me and my disability to draw and put pictures up on the Internet. Anyway, yeah, each and everyone is detailed and quite glorious. Hurray for these!
Bravo, perfect descriptions. For some reason, when you were describing Jerkasses with Hearts of Gold, I thought of Adam Sandler. I for one love all of them. Each one has major payoffs. Thanks for the clarification.
It depends on the villain. I have one that is a villain and a hero simultaneously. Just depends. You also have guys who are evil just to see the world burn or because they are mindless marauders and reapers of life. Thank you for the knowledge.
Actually, I have three interactives. I don't like it when they don't follow rules and have bad grammar. In fact, the first additions were just those two things. Anyway, those sound interesting. Tip: if possible, have the wolfess have a brother who WOULD'VE been the big bad wolf. Thought it could add some complexity, which is what all interactives should have if they have a plot. Thank you WDc for having them!
Jules Verne is practically Nostradamus. Anyway, thanks for the advice, great tips you have in there about Steampunk. I'm familiar with it, and I must say, I love machines with gears showing. Thanks for the knowledge.
Maybe I'll use giants and tinies one of these days. I do love brownies making stuffs hope I eat brownies made by brownies cut by a knife made by dwarves. Ah, classic little guys, why is it that they always play the roles of makers of some sort in fantasy? Heck if I know.
Gotcha, don't overkill unless you're Deadpool and do it just to be awesome. Also, make you characters use tech or magic in a believable and logical way.
Gotcha. I usually do this with cities and worlds more than people though. The way I do it is by using odd combination of letters that are uncommon and rare looking. Good info to know man.
Interesting. I always used or thought of the exatemes: humanized where they are different but act similar to Homo sapiens or Monsterized: nothing resembling what is logical, nightmarish or dreamy creatures.
Hmm, never was interested in them. Too warped from the originals and I much prefer weres and other creatures like that. Cirque Du Freak does a good job with them though.
Now that sounds cool. I always thought they were "Brains" besides on rare occasions like you mentioned. Good movie that one by the way. I may think of having a zombie good guy, who knows?
Sweet! I for one prefer Asian, English, Norse, and Miscellaneous creatures. One example would be the Oni, a ghoulish being that feeds on fear. In Norse, you have Ymir, the king of the frost giants and ruler of Niffelheim. England and U.S., phantoms and colossi, giant, slow beings, mostly made of stone in the legends I've read. I'll make sure to reach across the borders even more than now.
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