Dkay's (dadakay) Reviews

Dkay

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#2407898

Review of My Garden of Peace (Now with audio)

Review by Dkay

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

A beautiful well written song that couldn't be more true.
If everyone felt like this, we would be making love, not war.

I especially liked the part-

"Can’t they see, can’t they feel, that they don’t have to kill.
Their pride in their country it can survive still.
Can’t they see that they’re breeding generations of hate?"

Good job! Have fun writing.

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#2407886

Review of Mavis's Melting Pot

Review by Dkay

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Your blog is interesting.
The piece on Joy and sorrow is so true...and touching.

You write with such passion with a background of pain.

It's a pity about the son you lost, but we have to thank God for what we have.

Just a typo i noted though-
"I've been sick with depresion"
Should have been "Depression"

Have fun writing.

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#2391757

Review of The Martian Codex - Book One - Act Two

Review by Dkay

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

This is an Intriguing read with a complex plot that just drew me in, and when I got to where you stopped, all I could think was, NO, DON'T STOP NOW! The suspense...!

I like the characters, especially Grady.
The fact that he has a soul, but still does what he has to... even with some twisted humour attached.
The scene where he threatens Fatima is just too good, and then the fact that he fears Karma... I love Grady.

Just a few typos for correction.

"...his mouth watering as the translation to on meaning

"...And old man's dream

Generally, I think this is a must-read.