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Review of Early Poetry  
Review by Elle Dratwood Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I like it, but be more creative with metaphor, I know you're describing grey, but go deeper. You'll enjoy it.

Also, I think you can take itching further, really go for the sensation, I want to itch while reading it.
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