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I like to put a bit of light humor into my reviews. I don't really go for the whole format style, just a good old paragraph/letter format. I tend not to focus much on grammar, unless I am specifically asked or it is bad enough to take away from the story. I read it more as a reader then a writer, though I will put some of that aspect into it as well. If you like a casual approach with that personal touch to connect you to the reviewer then I'm your man.
I'm good at...
Pretty much anything except poetry. I'm open minded enough to be able to read erotica, gay/lesbian or pieces that make others squeemish or consider "radical" in its ideas. got a piece about how to fix the world by killing off half the population? I will take it seriously and give you feedback on it more then a "that's inhuman!" or "How can you even think that!"
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, fiction, sci-fi, entertainment, romance, mystery, drama
Least Favorite Genres
poetry
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Review of Skills  
Rated: E | (3.5)
It was short and very powerful in its own way. I'm not a girl, and I am not big into poetry. but i have been on the other end of the kiss and the looks that you describe. It reminded me of my first crush and the way I fumbled on my first date. That unsure feeling of whether to kiss her or not, or if she was really interested in me or not. And even of my first break up. I see a lot of poems that use a lot of words to get such ideas and points across. But i'm not sure if yours needs more.

Though it does sort of feel more like a random thought then a poem because of how short it is. (to me anyway) I can only comment on that aspect of it since as I said, I'm not big into poetry.
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