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Review by DMLANGEL1101
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Very nicely penned. I especially like over our dark knots.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent suggestions. Thanks.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Good and if you don't mind a small suggestion in the Post Rod Sterling Twilight Zone Era, how about people try to die in wide variety of ways, because as good as life is, no one really wants to be sick for trillions of years or have one's skin fall off and be a walking skeleton.
I like your idea a lot though. Great job.
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Review by DMLANGEL1101
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good story and interesting, but it feels a little rushed. Perhaps a stop in one location for awhile and more showing so that the reader can make sense of the whole universe distortion and
the planet you and your crew landed on. The planets, animals, landscape and more discussion with the creatures on it, would be good. KEEP GOING! Interesting overall though.
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Review by DMLANGEL1101
Rated: E | (3.0)
Amen to that, brother! Bless them one and all. Nicely said. Keep writing.
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