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Review of The Orange  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Genre: Emotional
Style: Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of: This story was very captivating. It kept my interest
from beginning to end.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I did not see any typo's, spelling or grammar errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
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I really enjoyed reading this story. It took me
back to a day in my past, long ago, and I am happy
you had someone to help you when you were hungry.

Bright Blessings!
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On the 31st of December 2019, the WHO was informed of cases of pneumonia of unknown cause in Wuhan City, China. A novel coronavirus was identified as the cause by Chinese authorities, on 7th January 2020 and was temporarily named “2019-nCoV”. So this was not November, nor was it President Trump that was notified, as your article indicates. The 7th is when the WHO was notified. The WHO made an announcement of an infection but did not call for a Global Pandemic until March 11th, 2020. The WHO was too busy playing cover up for the Chinese before that time. One March 13th, the President declared a national emergency under the National Emergencies Act, waiving federal rules to facilitate tele-medicine and increase hospital capacity. He also declared an emergency under the Stafford Disaster Relief and Emergency Assistance Act, asserting “the preeminent responsibility” of the Federal Government to take action to stem a nationwide pandemic. The U.S. CDC initially told the media that the threat to the American public was low.

President Trump and his team kept an eye on the infection coming out of China and decided on a travel ban from China on the 31st of January. All people arriving into the United States had to pass through a screening process to verify their body temperature and check for COVID-19 symptoms. These restrictions went into effect before the WHO named the coronavirus a pandemic on March 11, 2020.

February 26th the first community spread case documented a person in California is confirmed to have coronavirus without documented travel to hot spots or contact with another infected person. The unknown source of the infection confirms that “community spread” of the virus is taking place in the US. Vice President Mike Pence is named head of the White House task force and Dr. Deborah Birx is named response coordinator.

On March 4th, 2020, the House passes $83 billion emergency bill, Trump signs it on March 6th. The President announces a ban on travel from Europe which is seeing a marked increase in cases – specifically in Italy and Spain. President Trump states during the address to the nation that health insurance providers promised to waive all co-pays for coronavirus treatment.

On March 13th, President Trump declares a national emergency, granting access to $50 billion in funding for US states and territories.

March 17th, During a news conference, President Trump asks workforce to stay home, if possible, postpone unnecessary travel, and limit social gatherings to no more than 10 people. He was being told by Dr Fauci and the CDC that it should only be a couple of weeks to flatten the curve.

March 24th, Trump says he wants country to open by April 12, as the cure cannot be “worse that the problem itself”, as the US economy falters, Trump tells Fox News he would “love to have the country opened up and just raring to go by Easter.“ He had hope it would be so.

March 27th The House and Senate pass the largest bill in US history, which is then signed by President Trump. The bill gives up to $1200 per individual and $500 per child for households making up to $150,000 a year. Small businesses are given access to over $377 billion in loans that can be forgiven and corporations, state and local governments are given access to $454 billion. Unfortunately the Democrats had to bail out their Democratic states that were bankrupt long before COVID came along. The healthcare industry is given access to $180 billion.

March 30th, confirmed cases of coronavirus top 160,000 by the end of March. Healthcare workers and authorities across the country bemoan a lack of testing, due to the tests we got in were contaminated. Tests created in the US shipped during the early days of the crisis in the country contained tainted reagents, a component added to tests created chemical reactions. President Trump tells the nation to prepare for “hard days”.

April 3rd, Cloth masks are recommended by the President as it may help contain the spread of the virus, not mandated but left to the individual, but Fauci said it would not help people the way they think it will.

April 4th, President Trump advised that the medication hydroxychloroquine, previously used for malaria could be used to treat the symptoms as they were similar diseases.

April 7th, President claims testing increase. “We have now done 1,790,000 tests nationwide”.

April 16th, the CDC issues guidelines to states for re-opening businesses, local economies. These guidelines developed offer states a phased approach to reopening their economies based on reduction in COVID-19 cases.

He resisted wearing a mask because everyone was tested including himself daily for COVID. His political rallies were no more a spreader than the DNC's riots through BLM and Antifa, that destroyed businesses and killed cops and citizens. And by the way, the masks are about as effective as putting up a chain link fence to keep out mosquitoes.

And now we know, after President Trump actually developed the vaccine through his administration and Big Pharma, that a healthy person has a .003579 chance of contracting the virus, children catching this virus is 0.0000001. Hdroxychloroquine has proven to be very effective for treating in therapeutics which real doctors on the front line had to fight tooth and nail to get a hold of and actually prescribe it in the early stages of the infection, while big tech and the Marxist Democrats censored anything but strict lock downs and masks, while they did not adhere to any of the above and a large part of the deaths were from Democratic City Mayors putting sick people in nursing homes. If you can treat a disease there is no reason for a vaccine. And it is a personal choice, and should NEVER be a mandate.

Not to mention the PCR tests are faulty, giving false positives, so says the CDC who will have a REAL coronavirus test in December which is why Biden is pushing the vaccine, because the flu numbers will be back in their own column instead of being reported as COVID, and COVID will disappear. So Mr. Words Whirling Around, don't you dare blame this on President Trump! It is NOT a deadly disease for a large part of the population. Unless of course, you have co-morbidities. I want to know what they are using for tests for variants. More than likely the same faulty PCR test.
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I liked your halloween poem Bubblegum. The orange color font and the last 2 lines:

"All of the neighborhood host,
are waiting for friendly ghost."

I've enjoyed reading your tribute to Halloween, and hope you have a great time with your trick or treaters this year.

Write On!
)O(
DragonBlue
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Genre: Halloween
Style: Articles


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
This article reminded me of when I was kid, and how we used to dress up every year and go trick or treating. We never missed halloween, and my mother would curse the holiday the following spring when she would take us to the dentist and have to fix 1 or 2 teeth that had a cavity.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw none.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) Now I live across the street from a graveyard. I have the best halloween decorations in town. Yeah, a real graveyard. lol...I have nothing to fear from the dead however, just the living.

Unfortunately we don't get any of the little beggars on halloween. Two years in a row, I have bought a ton of candy, just to have to eat it myself, because no little munchkins came knocking on my door.

Anyway, good write here Bubblegum, you kept it light and cheerful. Thanks for the read, and Write On!


Bright Blessings!
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Genre: Halloween (Samhain)
Style: Article


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Samhain is a Wiccan or Pagan's most sacred of all our holidays. It is the day that we honor those who have passed before us. It is our new year as it is the last of three harvests. We also pay honor to the life stage of Crone. This refers to the triple Goddess as Maiden/Mother/Crone. The Celtics had a tradition of leaving a meal for the spirits, next to the Jack-o-lantern to light their way back to the spirit world. The Jack-o-lantern also served to ward off dark spirits that might find their way through the thin veil of this and the other world, that only occurs on October 31st, though our celebration starts at midnight, so technically, it is November 1st.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw none.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
You pretty much covered the basics of halloween, and I hope my input helps you understand a bit more. Oh, and witches don't fly on their brooms, (that information is all hollywood) they use their brooms, called a Besom, to sweep away negative energy from their magick circle or sacred space.

Bright Blessings!
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Review of Ghostly places  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Genre: Horror
Style: Articles


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
I used to live in Phoenix and moved in with my then fiance, and his house was a large rambler. In the master bedroom, it had a built in vanity table with two light sconces on either side of the vanity mirror. This ghost, who was the old woman who died there, was not able to see her family before she passed of cancer. But she would unscrew the light bulbs in these sconces as I was always having to screw them back into the socket. This went on for a couple of months before I finally got some time alone to help her pass over to the other side.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
In the last paragraph, 4th line:
and the world about ghost. I think you meant ghosts.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) This is really a fun way to celebrate Samhain in some ways. Sometimes that is all the ghost needs is someone to acknowledge their existence, and then they are able to pass over.


Bright Blessings!
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Genre: Horror
Style: Article


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
This is an awesome account of 4 separate ghost stories. I like all four, as ghosts are here for a reason.
*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw no typos or spelling errors. You edited well.
*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) These 4 stories remind me that Halloween or what I call Samhain (sowain) is a time that we honor our dead and those that passed before us.


Bright Blessings!
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Genre: Horror
Style: Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
This story reminded me of poltergeist, the movie. I have had many a run-in with ghosts. Your story was well laid out and I enjoyed the read.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
There were no typo's or spelling errors, and I did look.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I really like your story, though unlike you, I would have wanted to confront that ghost and help him find his way to move on.


Bright Blessings!
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I really like your chosen subjects for writing articles and poetry about. You make complete logical sense to me, and I agree 100%. Wokeness is about to murder my country of America, forever if we don't stand up to their bullying and cancel culture antics. They do not have the right to do anything they have done. And those who are being cancelled need to sue these self-righteous lying sacks of crap for libel and defamation of character. Because they are guilty through and through of lying about everything they get their hands on and are supported by our "journalists" in the network medias. (if you want to call them that, they are more or less practicing the oldest profession in the world, if you know what I mean.) We have to stand up to them or be cancelled out of existence as the United States of America.
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Genre: Political
Style: Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Your poem states a true state of affairs. We are not united in this the last surviving nation of the free world.
*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
no structure challenges were found.
*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I was glad to read one that was not frothing with Trump hatred. We need see what he really accomplished during his tenure and realize what he has exposed and why the left
hates him so.

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Review of A Nation Divided  
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Genre: Politics
Style: Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
This pen hits home one too many fronts. Will we have a civil war? The country is divided and no one is really offering any solutions to the problem, just punishments for being on the wrong side. It will not end well.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
No grammar or spelling errors

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I hope we can bridge this ravine of dividedness, but it does not look good. Too many people are being added to the list of the unemployed. And in other cities across our great nation, more people are being driven into poverty by greedy governors and mayors. All I've seen out of this new administration is punishment to the American people for hoping to be great again.


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Review of Who Would You Be?  
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Genre: Political
Style: Poetry - Rhyming
Verse



*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
If I believed in it I'd say AMEN. Your pen was well
organized; grounded in reason and common sense. You
are correct, the numbers did not add up, so they
started to count all deaths as covid 19. They
are so lousy at lying, I wonder why they continue
to try.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Your rhythm was sound and your rhyme perfection.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
The SCIENCE of the matter really is nothing is being
said about what really happens when you catch
a virus, and that boosting your immune system with
vitamin C, D, & A, can alleviate the worst of it.

It's not the virus that hurts you, it's your own
body's immune system over-reacting because our
immune systems have been compromised with dirty
water, dirty food, dirty air. Most of the people
dying from this disease have died because they had
prior, underlying health issues before the "pandemic".

Tell me; if the average person's age is 82 that is
dead from a disease and the average life span is 80
years, how is that a pandemic? Last year's flu season
killed 90,000+ people in the United States but we did
not shut down our entire country for it.

No, no pandemic. Not saying it is not real, because
the "new world order" manufactured it in their Wuhan
Lab, but it is not as deadly as they have been fear
mongering us about. More people have gotten sick at
home than those who were not on lock down.

What they have done is created more fear between us,
so that they can mandate expensive vaccines top down
that damage us more than we have already been.

Oldest trick in the book to divide and conquer. It
just scares the hell out of me how people are doing
what they are told to do, instead of listening to
their own heart and mind, and doing what they know to
be right.


Bright Blessings!
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Genre: Experience, Philosophy
Style: Monologues


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
You should put these in a book and publish it. They are really
true and some are humorous, some are sad, but they are all very real!

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
none
*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I am posting my favorites so others can view:

Thursday, January 10th, 2019:
People make up countries, not governments.

Monday, January 14th, 2019:
If the parliament or any sort of assembly is supposedly to present the people of the nation, its members are supposed to live in the level of the people of the nation as well.

Wednesday, January 23rd, 2019:
Take care of those who laugh a lot. You don't know how much sadness in their hearts there is.

Tuesday, January 29th, 2019:
How come there are anger management programs and not stupidity rehab programs?

Wednesday, January 30th, 2019:
How strange that we see the bright side of advanced nations, but turn a blind eye to the structure of their societies.

Sunday, February 10th, 2019:
Some look for the positive changes, while some look for goals and advance. Seldom I saw someone looking for peace.

Wednesday, February 20th, 2019:
Poverty is awful. Do not make it evil with bad manners. Fortune is a gift. Do not make it a curse with bad attitude.
Homes are the people in them, not how they look from the outside.

Sunday, February 24th, 2019:
Some people do not realize the effort I exert to not hate them.

Wednesday, February 27th, 2019:
Every life you encounter along your way, however mundane and quiet it might seem, is strange in some way.
And that who feels estranged in his own homeland, where to would he go?
One major problem with people in general nowadays is that they believe that their likes and dislikes is a form of a religion or a creed to be followed.
It is those little things that people tell you are useless which will raise you up further.

Sunday, March 3rd, 2019:
One of the disasters of modern times is that we justify bad manners, to the limit of becoming a norm.
Some people think that I brag about my birthday on social media every year. They don't know that I'm just celebrating alone.

Friday, March 15th, 2019:
How modern law works: Have the money? You will get the justice. You don't, then please don't bother the court.

Sunday, March 24th, 2019:
What is civilization but taking care of the people?

Monday, March 25th, 2019:
Democracy: Giving the fool the right to speak, and rule.

Sunday, March 31st, 2019:
Goodwill has become endangered of extinction to the limit of needing organizations to promote it.

Wednesday, April 10th, 2019:
What happens in the West stays in the West. What happens in the Middle East is everyone's business.

Thursday, May 9th, 2019:
Ever got the feeling that "success" is overrated?

Monday, May 20th, 2019:
It's easier to stand with the aggressor against the suppressed than the other way around. They call it "Politics."

Saturday, June 8th, 2019:
Let's not speak about values, until you realize that life cannot be learned from TV shows.

Wednesday, June 26th, 2019:
Do not expect those who make the law will abide by the law.

Monday, August 5th, 2019:
Stop producing stupidity, and calling it a culture.



Bright Blessings!
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Genre: Political/Essay
Style: Opinion / Book Review

*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Nomi Prins' is absolutely correct. If we don't break them they will break us, again. They have done it at least twice already. We are nothing more than slaves to their almighty dollar, and the only thing American's seem to make or create any more is DEBT. As the powerful Elite laugh all the way to the bank and line their pockets some more.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Paragraph 4 line 11 -- I think you meant America ilo American

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I find it interesting to learn of another author from the inside of the banker world writing an expose' of our government and the world banking power and control over everything we do. If you ever get a chance, read "The Great American Adventure" by retired federal Judge Dale, online for free download here: http://www.stopthecrime.net/docs/THE-GREAT-AMERICA...

I hope to read more from you Saakshi4. Write On!


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Genre: Political / Philosophy
Style: Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
"Cry Freedom Cry! From deep inside where we all reside." "Human as to
Human, the Future is no place, to place your better days!"--DMB. Your poem
reminded me of the two songs above by dmb (Dave Matthews Band).

Oh how we long for freedom, and then take it for granted. Exchanging our
liberties for false securities. As they strip away each and every one of our
individual rights and liberties, one at time right under our very noses.
While we either sit dumbfounded and silent or are already fast asleep due
to an overwhelming amount of stress and depression, or too busy chasing the
almighty dollar to care.

I like your pen because it reminds everyone who reads it that FREEDOM
is not just a word written about in literature and song, but a very real
concept of human rights and dignity. Thank you for this read.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Nope I saw none. Free form poetry was the perfect medium for this.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
May many more people read and then write about a concept that goes back
to the beginning of time. FREEDOM! Yell it from pole to pole and
shore to shore! And please do WRITE ON!


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Genre: Adult, Drama, Experience
Style: Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
I like the formatting, as I have written like this on occasion. I
really like the subject matter as I too often think of what we have
become as humans in a modern age.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
No spelling or typo errors. Though it could use some punctuation
to end one thought and begin another.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
My favorite part: "We see, Vision Askew, No truth, No lies." Please do
write on Keaton Foster!


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Genre: Cultural Opinion
Style: Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Your city of Bliss sounds like a Utopia alright. But there is no room individuality.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
It is well written with no typos or grammatical errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I do like the depth you go into with everything. It's definitely blissful! lol
Please do write on!


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Genre: Political
Style: Essay


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:

You have 'hit the nail right on the head', as the old saying goes. Your essay is very informative and actually newsworthy. The conspiracy of undermining our constitution has been going on since its inception in this country. So have the cover ups and secrecy of our fictional history vs our non-fiction history in our forced education and indoctorine, taught to us from the age of 5 and up to have us believing the fiction. "What is History But a Fable Agreed Upon?"---Napoleon Bonaparte.

It is difficult for people to believe that we have been lied to, conned out of our wealth, and our constitution shredded right under our very nose. You are correct. Many have lost confidence in our institutions and hopefully they don't believe everything they hear and see on the news channels. The problem is they won't DO anything about it. I personally don't believe that people believe they can DO anything about it. But if the government gets their authority from 'we the people', why are we asking for their permission to DO anything?

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:

Paragraph 4: "It's one thing build technology from scratch"
I think you meant: It's one thing to build technology from scratch

Paragraph 10: "it was not longer possible contain."
I think you meant: it was no longer possible to contain.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I just hope 'we the people' awaken from our long sleep in time to help ourselves out of this mess we find ourselves in. If we go to war again on a global scale, as in World War, where will the aliens place their alliance? Just asking.


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“Scratch any cynic, and you’ll find a disappointed idealist.”

-- George Carlin -- 1937 to 2008


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Blue Fyre  (13+)
Blue Fyre
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Review of Moment of Clarity  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Political/Philosophy
Style: Article


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Your 'call to arms' made me remember one of my favorite stories, "Stone Soup". To paraphrase;

Three soldiers where returning home to their village after a long war had ended, and knew by the looks of it, the villagers had less than they did. But they were hungry, so they built a fire, filled a pot with water and added a stone, hanging the pot over the fire to boil.

The villagers watched all this commotion with disbelief, and one came out to say, "What are you doing?" One of the soldiers replied, "We are making stone soup." The man replied, "Well that's just silly. You can't eat stone soup." He then returned to his home and brought back a ham bone, and added it to the pot saying, "I can't make anything with just one ham bone. So you can have it."

Another villager came out and said as they were adding their gift to the pot, "I only have two carrots. I can't use two carrots to make anything, so you can have it." A third came out with three potatoes, stating they could not make much from three potatoes. Soon all the villagers where gifting one or two items, which was all they had to the pot of stone soup.

They all stood around the soup pot and fire, laughing and joking with the soldiers. They realized that though their village was threadbare and rubble, when they all gave what little they did have, there was enough for all.

That is the moral to this story. If everyone gave what they had to give, there would be enough for all. No one would be homeless. No one would be hungry. No one would be illiterate. No one would go without. This was my moment of clarity.

But alas, that was 40 years ago, and still the world has not changed, except for the worst, as people have become even more selfish and self serving than they were when I had my moment of clarity. I have posted my belief on every public bulletin board available, and talk about it any time I am able, but nothing seems to change.

Please forgive my jaded opinion of people, but that is my paradigm of the world today.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I did not find any typos, grammar or spelling errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I hope you keep writing about your belief that we can think about our actions before they turn into a catastrophe. Hold onto your hope for a global moment of clarity, for though others may think you a fool, I think you are on the road to enlightenment.


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BOOK
Blue Fyre  (13+)
Blue Fyre
#1132365 by DraculaBlud-MMMAAAWWWHAHAHAHA


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for entry "Chapter 7
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Genre: Sci-fi Fantasy

Style:
Book - Action/Adventure


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Your story is excellent, and I like the way you paint the picture, then leave the reader hanging while continuing with other characters in the story, and continue to lead me, go to the next and bring the story around full circle. I'm not sure however, whom the dragons are fighting with as allies, only that they don't like the Dramiens.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Though I love your story, your editing leaves a lot to be desired. There are too many correction to list here, and they are very distracting as I read your story. I would suggest reading over every paragraph carefully and believe you will find your errors, one at time.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I love your story. You are a great storyteller and I look forward to reading the rest of your story. Please, please, pretty please, edit your chapters so that others can read your story without distractions and will take you more seriously as a writer.

I only have one other suggestion and that being you number your pages, so that when printed, they do not get out of order.

You know how to wrap your readers mind around your characters and their quests. Your character introductions as the story unfolds, flows elegantly. Please do Write On!


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"Scratch any cynic, and you'll find a disappointed idealist."

-- George Carlin -- 1937 to 2008


BOOK
Blue Fyre  (13+)
Blue Fyre
#1132365 by DraculaBlud-MMMAAAWWWHAHAHAHA
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like your write of due
And wish it was so as it is true
that George Bush was guilty
his war crimes were many.

Alas, we the people are asleep
Can't seem to wakee, wakee
Allowing Bush & Cheney
to get away with treason anyway

His own consciousness is long dead
so he of course will feel no dread
or pain for the horrors he caused
and walked away free because

We the people have become convinced
that power belongs to those in politics
when in fact they are allowed to govern
by us, we the people, who are the governed.

we need to revisit our constitution
and declaration of independence
reading every word, sentence, footnote
and looking up any not understood.

Then compare it against our current policies
made into law by our lawyer/banker government
Then exercise our right & duty as legal citizens
to bring the corrupt cuds down with or without impeachment.

There you have it, there it is, and so it goes!

Write On!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Genre: Family

Style:
Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
You are so fortunate to have this place you called home in your childhood. We moved so much, I never knew a home like this.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I found none. All your 'i's' were dotted and your 't's' crossed. No typo's or grammar errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
This poem is very well written, with emotion and visual descriptions. Please do write on!!


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Blue Fyre
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Review of First Snow  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Pagan belief

Style:
Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Wow! This was so very intense! I like the way you describe the birth
and death of the son and the Greenman, that happen simultaneously in
Pagan Lore. The description of the Goddess is very unique with your many
metaphors.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw none.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I don't think I have ever seen this ritual and
lore played out so dramatically before. This rendition will remain
in my memory for a very long time. Write On!


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Knowledge is Power  (E)
How will you use your power?
#2176829 by DraculaBlud-MMMAAAWWWHAHAHAHA


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Culture

Style:
Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Starting with your story entitled "Daughters of Odin-They brought a hammer" I have read through several of your stories and intrigued, I just kept reading till I finally ended here (temporarily). You are quite the story teller and I am so impressed with your use of language, metaphors and the like, I had to stop and tell you so.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Your 'author's notes' help fill in the spaces of wonder and curiosity to your
references. No typo's or grammar errors have I found, but I must confess I was too caught up in your story to look for any.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I am very happy to read that you are a published writer, as you know how to tell a story well and keep your reader enthralled. I can tell that through-out your war stories, the writing is very much therapeutic and it does help with the healing, as each story gets more and more engrossed in the details of the experience. Thank you for allowing me (and WDC) to read and get a glimpse into your paradigm of the universe as you know it. Alas....Write on! Right On! Write On!

(now back to reading your stories)


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"Scratch any cynic, and you'll find a disappointed idealist."

-- George Carlin -- 1937 to 2008


BOOK
Blue Fyre  (13+)
Blue Fyre
#1132365 by DraculaBlud-MMMAAAWWWHAHAHAHA
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Rated: E | (4.5)
designed by Dragon Blue's Poetry & Productions


Genre: History, Political, Comedy

Style:
Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Good old Tricky Dick! You know, he did not do anything that any other
president hasn't done, he just got caught at it.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw no errors, typos or grammar.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I can't help wonder what the sad lament was by the
Midnight Cowboys. Was it "The Day the Music Died"? I like how you put
the thoughts out there, leaving a lot for the imagination of the reader
to complete and wonder. Will you have a part II? Please do write on!


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"Scratch any cynic, and you'll find a disappointed idealist."

-- George Carlin -- 1937 to 2008


BOOK
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Blue Fyre
#1132365 by DraculaBlud-MMMAAAWWWHAHAHAHA
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