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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Genre: Experience, Philosophy
Style: Monologues


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
You should put these in a book and publish it. They are really
true and some are humorous, some are sad, but they are all very real!

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
none
*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I am posting my favorites so others can view:

Thursday, January 10th, 2019:
People make up countries, not governments.

Monday, January 14th, 2019:
If the parliament or any sort of assembly is supposedly to present the people of the nation, its members are supposed to live in the level of the people of the nation as well.

Wednesday, January 23rd, 2019:
Take care of those who laugh a lot. You don't know how much sadness in their hearts there is.

Tuesday, January 29th, 2019:
How come there are anger management programs and not stupidity rehab programs?

Wednesday, January 30th, 2019:
How strange that we see the bright side of advanced nations, but turn a blind eye to the structure of their societies.

Sunday, February 10th, 2019:
Some look for the positive changes, while some look for goals and advance. Seldom I saw someone looking for peace.

Wednesday, February 20th, 2019:
Poverty is awful. Do not make it evil with bad manners. Fortune is a gift. Do not make it a curse with bad attitude.
Homes are the people in them, not how they look from the outside.

Sunday, February 24th, 2019:
Some people do not realize the effort I exert to not hate them.

Wednesday, February 27th, 2019:
Every life you encounter along your way, however mundane and quiet it might seem, is strange in some way.
And that who feels estranged in his own homeland, where to would he go?
One major problem with people in general nowadays is that they believe that their likes and dislikes is a form of a religion or a creed to be followed.
It is those little things that people tell you are useless which will raise you up further.

Sunday, March 3rd, 2019:
One of the disasters of modern times is that we justify bad manners, to the limit of becoming a norm.
Some people think that I brag about my birthday on social media every year. They don't know that I'm just celebrating alone.

Friday, March 15th, 2019:
How modern law works: Have the money? You will get the justice. You don't, then please don't bother the court.

Sunday, March 24th, 2019:
What is civilization but taking care of the people?

Monday, March 25th, 2019:
Democracy: Giving the fool the right to speak, and rule.

Sunday, March 31st, 2019:
Goodwill has become endangered of extinction to the limit of needing organizations to promote it.

Wednesday, April 10th, 2019:
What happens in the West stays in the West. What happens in the Middle East is everyone's business.

Thursday, May 9th, 2019:
Ever got the feeling that "success" is overrated?

Monday, May 20th, 2019:
It's easier to stand with the aggressor against the suppressed than the other way around. They call it "Politics."

Saturday, June 8th, 2019:
Let's not speak about values, until you realize that life cannot be learned from TV shows.

Wednesday, June 26th, 2019:
Do not expect those who make the law will abide by the law.

Monday, August 5th, 2019:
Stop producing stupidity, and calling it a culture.



Bright Blessings!
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Genre: Political/Essay
Style: Opinion / Book Review

*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Nomi Prins' is absolutely correct. If we don't break them they will break us, again. They have done it at least twice already. We are nothing more than slaves to their almighty dollar, and the only thing American's seem to make or create any more is DEBT. As the powerful Elite laugh all the way to the bank and line their pockets some more.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Paragraph 4 line 11 -- I think you meant America ilo American

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I find it interesting to learn of another author from the inside of the banker world writing an expose' of our government and the world banking power and control over everything we do. If you ever get a chance, read "The Great American Adventure" by retired federal Judge Dale, online for free download here: http://www.stopthecrime.net/docs/THE-GREAT-AMERICA...

I hope to read more from you Saakshi4. Write On!


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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Political / Philosophy
Style: Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
"Cry Freedom Cry! From deep inside where we all reside." "Human as to
Human, the Future is no place, to place your better days!"--DMB. Your poem
reminded me of the two songs above by dmb (Dave Matthews Band).

Oh how we long for freedom, and then take it for granted. Exchanging our
liberties for false securities. As they strip away each and every one of our
individual rights and liberties, one at time right under our very noses.
While we either sit dumbfounded and silent or are already fast asleep due
to an overwhelming amount of stress and depression, or too busy chasing the
almighty dollar to care.

I like your pen because it reminds everyone who reads it that FREEDOM
is not just a word written about in literature and song, but a very real
concept of human rights and dignity. Thank you for this read.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Nope I saw none. Free form poetry was the perfect medium for this.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
May many more people read and then write about a concept that goes back
to the beginning of time. FREEDOM! Yell it from pole to pole and
shore to shore! And please do WRITE ON!


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Review of Learn  
Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Genre: Adult, Drama, Experience
Style: Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
I like the formatting, as I have written like this on occasion. I
really like the subject matter as I too often think of what we have
become as humans in a modern age.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
No spelling or typo errors. Though it could use some punctuation
to end one thought and begin another.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
My favorite part: "We see, Vision Askew, No truth, No lies." Please do
write on Keaton Foster!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Cultural Opinion
Style: Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Your city of Bliss sounds like a Utopia alright. But there is no room individuality.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
It is well written with no typos or grammatical errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
I do like the depth you go into with everything. It's definitely blissful! lol
Please do write on!


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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Genre: Political
Style: Essay


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:

You have 'hit the nail right on the head', as the old saying goes. Your essay is very informative and actually newsworthy. The conspiracy of undermining our constitution has been going on since its inception in this country. So have the cover ups and secrecy of our fictional history vs our non-fiction history in our forced education and indoctorine, taught to us from the age of 5 and up to have us believing the fiction. "What is History But a Fable Agreed Upon?"---Napoleon Bonaparte.

It is difficult for people to believe that we have been lied to, conned out of our wealth, and our constitution shredded right under our very nose. You are correct. Many have lost confidence in our institutions and hopefully they don't believe everything they hear and see on the news channels. The problem is they won't DO anything about it. I personally don't believe that people believe they can DO anything about it. But if the government gets their authority from 'we the people', why are we asking for their permission to DO anything?

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:

Paragraph 4: "It's one thing build technology from scratch"
I think you meant: It's one thing to build technology from scratch

Paragraph 10: "it was not longer possible contain."
I think you meant: it was no longer possible to contain.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I just hope 'we the people' awaken from our long sleep in time to help ourselves out of this mess we find ourselves in. If we go to war again on a global scale, as in World War, where will the aliens place their alliance? Just asking.


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Review of Moment of Clarity  
Review by DragonBlue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Political/Philosophy
Style: Article


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Your 'call to arms' made me remember one of my favorite stories, "Stone Soup". To paraphrase;

Three soldiers where returning home to their village after a long war had ended, and knew by the looks of it, the villagers had less than they did. But they were hungry, so they built a fire, filled a pot with water and added a stone, hanging the pot over the fire to boil.

The villagers watched all this commotion with disbelief, and one came out to say, "What are you doing?" One of the soldiers replied, "We are making stone soup." The man replied, "Well that's just silly. You can't eat stone soup." He then returned to his home and brought back a ham bone, and added it to the pot saying, "I can't make anything with just one ham bone. So you can have it."

Another villager came out and said as they were adding their gift to the pot, "I only have two carrots. I can't use two carrots to make anything, so you can have it." A third came out with three potatoes, stating they could not make much from three potatoes. Soon all the villagers where gifting one or two items, which was all they had to the pot of stone soup.

They all stood around the soup pot and fire, laughing and joking with the soldiers. They realized that though their village was threadbare and rubble, when they all gave what little they did have, there was enough for all.

That is the moral to this story. If everyone gave what they had to give, there would be enough for all. No one would be homeless. No one would be hungry. No one would be illiterate. No one would go without. This was my moment of clarity.

But alas, that was 40 years ago, and still the world has not changed, except for the worst, as people have become even more selfish and self serving than they were when I had my moment of clarity. I have posted my belief on every public bulletin board available, and talk about it any time I am able, but nothing seems to change.

Please forgive my jaded opinion of people, but that is my paradigm of the world today.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I did not find any typos, grammar or spelling errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I hope you keep writing about your belief that we can think about our actions before they turn into a catastrophe. Hold onto your hope for a global moment of clarity, for though others may think you a fool, I think you are on the road to enlightenment.


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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Genre: Philosophy
Style: Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
This story was cute. If only the many princesses of our world were truly of like mind.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw none.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)I like your story, though I was disappointed that the tailors where not rewarded for allowing the Princess to present herself as she was. Guess the queen was a little furious, eh? Write on!


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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like your write of due
And wish it was so as it is true
that George Bush was guilty
his war crimes were many.

Alas, we the people are asleep
Can't seem to wakee, wakee
Allowing Bush & Cheney
to get away with treason anyway

His own consciousness is long dead
so he of course will feel no dread
or pain for the horrors he caused
and walked away free because

We the people have become convinced
that power belongs to those in politics
when in fact they are allowed to govern
by us, we the people, who are the governed.

we need to revisit our constitution
and declaration of independence
reading every word, sentence, footnote
and looking up any not understood.

Then compare it against our current policies
made into law by our lawyer/banker government
Then exercise our right & duty as legal citizens
to bring the corrupt cuds down with or without impeachment.

There you have it, there it is, and so it goes!

Write On!!!
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Genre: Family

Style:
Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
You are so fortunate to have this place you called home in your childhood. We moved so much, I never knew a home like this.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I found none. All your 'i's' were dotted and your 't's' crossed. No typo's or grammar errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
This poem is very well written, with emotion and visual descriptions. Please do write on!!


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Review of First Snow  
Review by DragonBlue
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Genre: Pagan belief

Style:
Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Wow! This was so very intense! I like the way you describe the birth
and death of the son and the Greenman, that happen simultaneously in
Pagan Lore. The description of the Goddess is very unique with your many
metaphors.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw none.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I don't think I have ever seen this ritual and
lore played out so dramatically before. This rendition will remain
in my memory for a very long time. Write On!


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Culture

Style:
Short Story


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Starting with your story entitled "Daughters of Odin-They brought a hammer" I have read through several of your stories and intrigued, I just kept reading till I finally ended here (temporarily). You are quite the story teller and I am so impressed with your use of language, metaphors and the like, I had to stop and tell you so.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Your 'author's notes' help fill in the spaces of wonder and curiosity to your
references. No typo's or grammar errors have I found, but I must confess I was too caught up in your story to look for any.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I am very happy to read that you are a published writer, as you know how to tell a story well and keep your reader enthralled. I can tell that through-out your war stories, the writing is very much therapeutic and it does help with the healing, as each story gets more and more engrossed in the details of the experience. Thank you for allowing me (and WDC) to read and get a glimpse into your paradigm of the universe as you know it. Alas....Write on! Right On! Write On!

(now back to reading your stories)


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-- George Carlin -- 1937 to 2008


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Review by DragonBlue
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Genre: History, Political, Comedy

Style:
Poetry - Free Form


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Good old Tricky Dick! You know, he did not do anything that any other
president hasn't done, he just got caught at it.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw no errors, typos or grammar.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I can't help wonder what the sad lament was by the
Midnight Cowboys. Was it "The Day the Music Died"? I like how you put
the thoughts out there, leaving a lot for the imagination of the reader
to complete and wonder. Will you have a part II? Please do write on!


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Genre: Political

Style:
Essay / Editorial


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
This pen reads like a vision into the future of our country. We the citizen of
these United States are the enemy to our government, and they prove it each and
every day, by passing their tyrannical laws and putting themselves above them.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw no typo's or grammatical errors in your essay, and I did look.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I like (if that is the correct word to use) your story,
as it hits home mine own opinion and warning with similar visions. It is such
a sad, sad home for you and me. Please do write on!!


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Genre: War

Style:
Poetry - Rhyming Verse


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Oh, this story is so sad, but I know it to be true. How can they do this to
our vets and ignore their pain?

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Your rhyme and rhythm were perfect and this pen flowed down the page.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
If only they would hear your plea to help with what they have done.
It makes me ill at ease to know that our veterans are so abused. Why
won't the government do anything about it? Are they that cold and
indifferent to the very soldiers they put in this situation? This
country is headed for a bloody revolution if it continues to treat
it's veterans in such a way. The people need to speak out against
this abomination and demand that they (our government) take care
of those who fight for our freedom, liberty and justice.
(only my opinion)


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Genre: Political

Style:
Essay, Editorial


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Can I say "Amen!" We have strict gun laws in place already and all they do is stop citizens from owning a gun when they need it the most. We can never let them take our guns. Guns don't pull their own triggers to kill people, people do. If not guns, it would be swords, knives, rocks, pitchforks, shovels, their bare hands, whatever it takes to kill, people will unfortunately always find a way.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
I saw none. I really like the way you formatted this essay with an outline and follow through. It was very well done and well edited.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) One thing these mass murderers have in common, especially the school kids is they are all on anti-depressant drugs. There has been no research into the long term effect of psyche drugs, and people just don't realize that mental illness is over diagnosed and 'way' over medicated, especially in adolescents, when their behavior is not what this society wants, they want compliant, docile children and are finding it difficult to keep the rebels down without their psyche drugs. Anything that changes your chemical balance or stops certain hormones from being produced is bound to cause some in-balance somewhere, especially when the meds are stopped without being weaned off of them. They cause psychotic reactions. Besides, I would not put it past our government in an effort to strip us of this right, to stage 'postal' terrorists in gunning down innocent people. It would not be the first time that the fear factor was used to deny us our civil right. That however, is for another discussion. Please do write on!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Though I have never been one to write in form poetry, I might try this form. I like it. I like how in your face it is. I am over joyed to read your content! Finally, someone else is writing about our planet and the damage we are doing to it. Mother Earth is the only planet we have to live on, so I believe we need to take care of Her and do it now! That is what your poem says to me! Thank you again for writing the truth!

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This essay is very well researched and notated as such. I enjoyed (if that is the right word to use here) your article very much, and it is refreshing to see someone actually writing about our environment and the effect we have on it by the hour. Thank you for raising awareness by posting this very important article on WDC. Please do, WRITE ON!

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Review of ABOUT TIME  
Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
**laughs aloud** **chuckles under breath**

I like your thinking processes in this pen. Write On!

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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Genre: Five Biggest Crimes Against Humanity

Style:
Essay


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
Write on! Right on! Write On! Excellent feed back on this very horrific subject. I like your solutions to the problem. And I would like to point out because it made it very obvious the way you listed it, more native americans were killed in the colonization of the Americas than the other 4 combined, with 100 million here in America and 30 million when combining the other four. So very sad to me. So very sad.

*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
Your writing was well edited. No typos or spelling errors.

*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion) I believe you are correct in your conclusion that only if we, the human race, work together to keep hate between us at a minimum, will we ever find a solution and stop the genocide. We can also draw up petitions to stop our government from involving us in any more genocide campaigns and we can leave writing everywhere about it. The internet is a very large space of real estate to post thoughts and ideas.
Thank you for entering my contest.


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Genre: Contest: 5 greatest crimes committed against humanity

Style:
Essay


*Bullet* How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
You are correct in assuming that it could happen to you. It very well can, especially in today's political atmosphere of 'big government' controlling everything and stripping us of our constitutional bill of rights. What can one person do? You hit the nail on the head with speaking out against it. Write an editorial and send in to your local newspaper. March in the streets, round up others that feel the same way, and make our government address your grievances. This is not only your right as a U.S. Citizen, but your duty to your country and it's constitution.


*Bullet* Structure Challenges:
none


*Bullet* Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing." This statement says it all! Please do write on as well, for it gets people thinking about it when you write about it and place it in many places to be read.


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Blue Fyre  (13+)
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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good story, that I could see published in Hilights or teen magazine. You had a great opening statement, then backed it up with the meat and potatoes to explain the opening paragraph. I only found what I thought to be one error:

Paragraph 7

I glared once last time at my mother,

I think you meant;

I glare one last time at my mother,

Other than that it was a quick and excellent read. Write on!

Blessed Be~
)O(
DragonBlue
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Review of Asleep  
Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
"...and someday, find that peace."

And let peace prevail within you. Awesome, incredible and fantabulous. You write with a passion I see seldom on this site. Thank you for a great read.

Blessed Be~
)O(
DragonBlue

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Review of Rebirth  
Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was downright beautiful~ I enjoyed and was enraptured from beginning to end. Thank you for a wonderful read.

Blessed Be!
)O(
DragonBlue

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Review by DragonBlue
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your poem is written from the heart and has a consistent beat through-out each stanza. I feel for you if this is written from personal experience, as I too have known a lifetime of broken promises and wasted the best years of my life with a person not worthy of my loyalty nor my love. Your poem brought that back home to me, as it should have, for what is poetry about; if not to raise the emotion and pique the intellect of the reader?

Write On~
)O(
DragonBlue
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