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Review of White Cutlass  
Review by Duke00
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
As I was reading this poem, the color I imagined the most is white. Sure it's in the title but I also refer to cleanliness. The words just keeps making me think of this car that is so clean. Then the last line showed up and gave me a wham on how it got dirty or perhaps I am thinking too much on it. It's just an interpretation is all.
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Review of Dogged Assault  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.0)
At first, I thought it would be a dob based poem until I started to pay further attention with the type of adjectives used. The word choices were very strong to emphasize how brutal the dog is and I was sort of frightened when I put a lot of thought on it. I might be wrong in my interpretation, but I felt that the fear of the poem really works if readers take the time to imagine it.
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Review of Lament  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, I find this to be very unique on the way you manage to make every line start with the letter "L". I would personally say that you are pretty clever since you manage to do so. Other than that, you did a good job in sort of combining a dark concept of a lament with some humor with starting every sentence with the letter "L". Though I am not sure if that is your intention.
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Review of Love  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well I'm glad that you bring in two perspectives about love. Love can be a good thing that give us this wonderful feeling and companionship. However, love can be a bad this as problems and challenges will arise from this. Good job on bring this up and I am not sure if this is the right interpretation.
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Review of party decorations  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, I'm glad someone is giving those out. It's pretty neat that we have those in this website. Now the only thing I want to ask is what can we do with these? Are they for decorations? Is this something for the website? I don't know, but I'm glad that we have that here.
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Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.0)
When it comes to being sad, everything around you has a chance to make things worse. This poem does a pretty good job in displaying that. Sometimes people would just ignore you instead of trying to do something about it. That's reality I suppose. Well I am not sure if that is your intention in this poem.
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Review of When Fish Fly  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, what I really like about this story or poem is that it describes fish in a unique way with some imagination put into it. Sorry, but I do not know if this is a short story or poem. Overall, you did an amazing job when talking about fish in this.
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Review by Duke00
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well one thing I do like about this interactive is that it gives a variety a choices. Despite it being dedicated to just one Pokemon, you can do lots of things with it when it comes to stories. Overall, I really like how you manage to open a lot of possibilities with only one certain character.
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Review of A Mouse's Tale  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well this was an interesting story about the perspective of a mouse. It sort of feels like those cartoons where we have a mouse protagonist, but a bit different. I would say that it is a bit more realistic without having the logic of Tom and Jerry. I find your decisions in this story to be interesting overall.
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Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be honest, I felt that the big balky bold font makes the story feel very different than the rest. The stuff it said is kind of true if you think about it despite being an advertisement for a television show. I am not sure if it is an ad. I just this for being different.
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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by Duke00
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, this is literally how I feel nowadays. Sometimes I do not look forward for tomorrow and want to stay at today as I was just relaxing for the last days of summer vacation. Your poem really speak to me and my problem. I like your poem on a personal level as I am dealing with a similar situation, but that's life for you. I have to face my fears and get back to school.
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Review by Duke00
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
For one thing, I think you have a very great concept as you feature a shop for body parts. Sometimes people want to change themselves a bit and they can just come here to do so. Storywise, I say that it does a good job at it. Overall, I like your story for the content and concept.
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Review by Duke00
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Well first things first, the story seems to be descent and pretty good. However, the only problem I have is spacing as I felt that at times the quotes need to be separated from the paragraphs to make it easier to read. However, this is just my personal opinion. You did a good job, just mind the spacing. Hope this helps.
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