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Review of The Greatest Gift  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! Amazing poem you got here! I can tell you are a poet! :)

Even though your poem was so short, I felt more emotion in it than most poems three times as long! I also love how you added an 'In loving memory of-', it really just shows your purpose of writing the poem and how much you really care. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem!

-Khloe


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Review of how many Days  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (5.0)
Before I read or review your poem, I just want to say that I think this website must know I love reviewing poems, because it always gives me beautiful poems to review!

Wow! I really loved reading this poem! It is such beautifully written! I love it when poets, like yourself, start their poem with something, and then end their poem with the same words! In your case it would be:

"Till the sun stops shining?
How long for the well runs dry?"

I'm not sure why I adore this style of writing so much, I just think ending a poem like that really wraps up the entire poem, like a conclusion paragraph to an essay!

-Khloe
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Review of Inner Voice  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a wonderful short poem! The whole thing in very well written!

The second and third stanza crushed me. When I read those stanzas, I imagine a teenaged girl sitting in a crowded room singing out loud, and then everyone saying 'beautiful!'. But, then I see her switch back to reality and decide to stay quiet.

I would love to see a longer version of this poem! I am absolutely in love with it! Thank you so much for sharing!

-Khloe
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Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could really picture most of the writing in my head! For example, one of the first parts when Joan feel into Marc's arms, and then kissed him, I could truly imagine that! So nice job on that.

The whole story is also very well organized. I liked where you broke the text into paragraphs. When I see writing that is correctly organized, it makes me want to read it even more!

Unfortunately, towards the end of the first chapter, I was having a bit of trouble understanding what was actually happening. I found myself reading the same set of dialogue over and over again. However, after the first chapter, everything started clearing up and was able to clearly understand the text! :)

The dialogue throughout the entire story is amazing! I absolutely fell in love with all of the characters simply by reading how they talk!
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Sadly, I only have time to read up to chapter 4. However, tomorrow morning or afternoon I will continue reading the rest of the story, and write another review on it. Thank you so much!

-Khloe :)
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Review of Toothbrush  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (5.0)
Aw. What a cute picture! If I were to draw that, it'd be in poorly-drawn stick figures, so props for not being like me! I love the picture!
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Review of Restless  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (5.0)
I definitely enjoyed trying to figure out the theme of this beautifully written poem. I love poems that I need to break apart to understand! I just really love how the poem sounds overall!
You just definitely keep writing poems like this! Thank you so much for sharing! :)
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Review of Raising Rabbits  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow! This is great! For some reason, I really like short stories like this, with only dialogue. I can just imagine a couple having this argument, staring at three cute and scared rabbits. You really put an image in my head. Thank you so much for sharing!
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Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! I could really visualize all the characters and settings! You explained everything so wonderfully! Very, very well written. My favorite part was when you told about all the kids and adults squeezing together in the car. You explained that (and every other part) part so well! Incredible job!
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Review of The First Step  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: E | (3.0)
The story has such a wonderful moral! I think the story would be better if you described the characters a bit more. When I read, I like visualizing the characters and enjoy seeing them do actions in my head. However, when reading this, I wasn't sure how to visualize any of the characters. Very nice story overall! :)
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Review of The Lesson  
Review by Earthworm Sally
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so good! It's super short and filled with dialogue, which I really like about it. The short story has such a good plot, I'd really love to see a full story!
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