|I have read so much of your work, I have come to click on your portfolio with expectations! I expect it to be well written, and it most certainly is. I expect it to be creative, and it most certainly is. If the topic calls for imagination, I am never disappointed.
I didn't find any problems to point out here. You were able to grab my attention in the first paragraph, and you held my interest throughout.
The last line summed up the story nicely: "Oh, and one more thing. Doubt my story if you must, but just know there is no way I could have gotten my story in by the deadline without my power. I, for one, do not doubt your story, OR your power!