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17 Public Reviews Given
17 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
For larger works I tend to basically give an Editorial Review I am usually rather positive, but ask me to be critical; I will be.
I'm good at...
Poetry, and Those stupid rules we learn in english class.
Favorite Genres
Romance and Fantasy I am up for anything though.
Least Favorite Genres
Anything Hateful
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, Short Stories, Screen Play
I will not review...
Anything Over 10,000 words, like, what even are you doing...
Public Reviews
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Review of Until We Met  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
ERMERGAWERD!!!!!! :*
If you actually want to get serious with poetry and or writing I can definitely help you out with formatting (I know who odd this site is).
The stanza structure is good,
The message is clear. And to the point.

P.S. I love you, Octavia :*
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Review of Diary  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like where the piece is going.
One thing that we slowly learn in writing is our own voice.
A poem doesn't always need to rhyme, unless you want it to.
If you like what you write, our stars are of little to no consequence.
Personally this feels forced. In my opinion, emotions need to be more fluid.
SO! Good Start. Keep going.


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Review of Human society!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes Yes Yes! This Is my kind of poetry!
I Like it I like it I like it!
What I would do more: Look into the formatting options, Making a poem align differently can make the reading experience change entirely, Once you get a hang of the txt editor, you can do marvelous things!
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Rated: E | (3.0)
OK First; I like the content. Based on content I would give a four star rating.
Second; The Rhyming. It seems a little forced. Don't be afraid to go against the "norm", Poetry is your art though, so do with it what you will.
Third; "and..." Try to avoid using conjunctions to start sentences. It can quickly degrade good work.
Try using punctuation to help with keeping things more, "keep-up-able"
Third, I would say keep writing, but you obviously are lol.
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Review of Love Ends  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I have No Clue What I Just Read.
It kinda felt like an intro for an Eminem Song lol.
#1 This could be a Good Novella, Do not fear lenght of writing.
#2 Use Formatting Tools. I know this Site makes it a little confusing, But formatting can make a good difference.
#3 If you want more reviews do not forget to Review Random Pieces, Like I am For This.

You Have Potential. Build On It.
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Review of The Tenth Opus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very, Very, Very Unexpected. Weather or not purposely this is very similar to "The Divine Comedy" in that Walter got nothing better could be wished for.
I rate this a 5-Star piece. Sorry I'm not an english major with a vast knowledge in reviewing though.
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