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Review by George
Rated: E | (4.5)
An intriguing allegory, perhaps of Satan or of the Third Reich. Welcome to WDC.
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Review by George
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good rhyming and rhythm, and thought provoking, although the general message eludes me. I'll go back and read it again from time to time.
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Review by George
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an intriguing account of love lost. I won't comment on the possibilities, but I give it 5 stars for human interest. There were a few grammatical and logical errors. For example, "which one of us would die first, her or me" could be better expressed simply as "which one of us would die first."
All told, a powerful first entry to the WDC site. Welcome aboard!
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Review of Those Misty Eyes  
Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Vampires is not my favorite genre, but this vignette is as good as any I've read. It answers an interesting question: What happens when a vampire falls in love with his/her victim? Prosit! (Yipes!)
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Review by George
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful! Expresses my own feelings exactly. It was in last night's news that bunkers for America's political elite are being prepared during the present COVID19 pandemic, in case the nation is attacked and destroyed by a massive nuclear assault. The nations of the world MUST change their ways, or else ...

Thanks for sharing. Your portfolio is truly remarkable in volume and quality. I will certainly revisit it many times.
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Review of Homecoming  
Review by George
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very touching. I feel there's a special place for unforgiving fathers, and it isn't in Heaven. You might enjoy my own take on the subject. It's a short story called "Rafferty's Present", #2210331, and it could really use a review by someone with an obviously good command of the English language. I hope that Lottie's decision, after returning, brought her happiness. Best regards, George Dixon.
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Review by George
Rated: E | (4.5)
This an excellent first novel. It has some rough spots, some grammatical errors and a fewer number of logical ones. But for the most part it was solid detective story fare and held the reader's interest throughout. I felt the ending could have benefited by providing a more satisfying resolution to the fast-paced story. And the Epilog was essentially an ad for the author's next-planned book.

Bottom line: an excellent first full-length, hard-bitten detective story with lots of action in the tradition of Mickey Spillane.
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Review by George
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I thought Ana was a goner. Onward!
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Review by George
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Fascinating. The plot thickens even more.
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Review by George
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good writing. No erors spotted.
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Review by George
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Good. Last few paragraphs are centered.
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Review by George
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent. No errors spotted.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
No erors spotted. Excellent writing.
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Review by George
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Gruesome but realistic.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good chapter of several segments.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Viva Straight Arrow...a MAN who wrote poetry!
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ah, the courtship blooms. Good job.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Typos, typos. To paraphrase Albert Einstein, Good literature is 90 percent perspiration and 10 percent inspiration. I hope I'm not rubbing you the wrong way. I won't do it anymore. Old George. (Yeah, I know. You're even older.)
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow! GOT to read more. A few minor nits, e.g."there sirens silent" should read "their sirens silent."
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Huzzah to Ana. Spoken like a true Indian. The Earth is a garden, given to us by the Great Spirit, to use for as long as we respect it.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Perfect! And leaves the reader wanting to know more. 5 stars.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A few typos, but the story continues to hold the reader's interest.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ah, love in bloom. How sweet itis.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I LOVE terrycloth robes. But "Dread brubbed at me"? WDC's spell checker is equally puzzled.
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Review by George
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Getting interesting.
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