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Review by hamcon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A good message about taking action to gt where you want to go and not relying on others to do it for you, or for their success to do it. Now I will admit that I do not know much about writing poems so I have no idea what style it is, so I was most likely off beat for it.
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Review of Good morning!  
Review by hamcon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Now I don't really read eroticas, but I do have to say that I like the pacing of this one, and unlike some other stories I have read, I find that this could actually happen. But I do notice that the first three paragraphs are oddly spaced, they do not match the ones after it. But other then that, an enjoyable read.
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