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Review of Prey  
Review by hamcon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Damn, I feel sorry for that girl, having to stay in an apartment alone for god knows how long with a 10 foot python, I was afraid that she would be the one to die, and was glad to see that she wasn't. Although I do have one question, why didn't she kill the snake while it was distracted?
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Review of Good morning!  
Review by hamcon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Now I don't really read eroticas, but I do have to say that I like the pacing of this one, and unlike some other stories I have read, I find that this could actually happen. But I do notice that the first three paragraphs are oddly spaced, they do not match the ones after it. But other then that, an enjoyable read.
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