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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
As usual, this is awesome! I can see you now, standing on the front porch, paper in hand...deserving to be congratulated for such a fine job and instead being verbally beaten for the "damage" you'd done to people's egos. I'm glad you started writing again!

great job and congrats on your win...then and now!

Vicky
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Review of AND GOD SAID -  
Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow. You have given me goosebumps! This is so very true, so very touching, and feels very much like it was written for me today.

You have been given a gift from God, in your writing....and I thank you for sharing it with us.

blessings
Vicky
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Review of The Giving Lesson  
Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI! I'm Vicky-one of the members of the Angel Army! What a wonderful story with a great lesson...especially at this time of year. Having young children I appreciate the value of a good story with a moral they can understand and enjoy.

Great job!

Blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another very touching piece. I could feel Missy's sadness that her desire to buy such a special gift wasn't going to be fulfilled..and I could feel the war within her to do what was right vs. what she wanted. I see only one place that I think might need something..you said "Momma, who worked long hours at the diner to provide their meager existence, was always thrilled years past with Missy’s homemade Christmas creations" I think you might need the word in...between thrilled and years...but just a suggestion.

keep writing!

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
That was just awesome! I could taste her fear mixed with her desire for the carmel apple! While I wouldn't share this spooky story with my almost 5 year old with a very overactive imagination...my gradeschooler would LOVE the thrills and chills within!

Keep writing!@
blessings
Vicky

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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I'm Vicky and here on a port raid with the Angel Army. Wow..what an interesting type of poetry...and you shared the depths of your feelings quite well in this. I can make no suggestions to improve, see no grammatical or spelling errors.

Great job!

Keep writing
blessings
Vicky
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Review of The Apple  
Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
What a very sweet story!

This has all the makings of a fairy tale...you could easily add to it...and allow Lucy to find her own love....

Great job!

Keep writing@

Blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sarah,

This poem is beautiful! You took me to your land of birth...I could feel the breeze and see the animals...I could feel your sadness and anger over the tradgedies that have occurred there.

I'm going to have to go do an internet search to see the trees you mentioned though :)

blessings
Vicky

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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Reviewing for the Angel Army...just here raiding your port!

This is a great piece...fictional though it may be there is a lot of truth here!

My favorite line "As he chuckled she quickly opened her eyes, and looked back at him in surprise. Death was laughing at her! Was that right?"

I enjoyed this piece alot! I see nothing that should be changed!

keep writing
Vicky

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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm here raiding for the Angel Army...:) and all I can say is .Wow...Nada..that's awesome...I can see it all...feel it all...the fear, the despair..the hope...the bugs.....I have no suggestions for any changes.

Great job! Keep writing
blessings
Vicky

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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW...I'm not sure what to say..but both the emotion and the determination resound throughout this! I wish you much strength and peace on this journey....and I will be praying for your family.

blessings and peace
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This piece portrays both the devistation and the facts well...with a bit of the humor that is necessary to survive poking through..

I make one suggestion-and it is my opinion only...this piece would read easier if there was more space between the paragraphs.

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I think this is a very pertitent topic for our society...my daughter is 10..I want so badly to give her the tools and self discipline to remain pure...the world,society, television, her friends will all fight against that..having the bible verses to back up the arguements is very helpful.

My one thought would be to add..what those who have fallen into temptation (might not have been part of the sermon) can do to find forgiveness, walk the straight path..etc.

Good job, thanks for sharing
hugs
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great read! I'm glad you've published it and hope it is selling well. Thank you for leaving it here for WDC members to read freely.


I look forward to reading more of your work...though I've not gotten much else done today..:)

blessings,

Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I don't like Colin-lol..though I understand his necessity..sort of anyway...

Very curious about the complaint and what's going on...

Also have me wondering if Sam and Walker will ever get together...Looking forward to reading more when you get it written...

Please let me know :)

Great job so far, in my opinion..

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
the plot thickens....great story!

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Bravo!
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am a dreamer..and this answers both the dreams inside of me and the desire to make it happen...Walker opens up that possibility.and while this book throws in your face the nastiness of humanity..it also offers up the answers to it...hope and unconditional love.

Personally..I think you have a wonderful book here.

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the way the story is unfolding...I sure hope you've written the ending...lol

You said "Within a few days, one of these abused and abandoned children would arrive to join Westbrook’s original six foster children. Amy Erickson would be the first but not the last." You gave me goosebumps and brought a tear to my eye..and I don't know why

hugs
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Again...awesome...you need to publish this..I"m hooked and don't want to put the book down! Seriously.

But..I do have one problem...I WANT TO KNOW WHAT WAS IN THE TRUNK!!! lol

another hook to keep me hanging...:)

Keep writing!

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
liking the budding romance..or two...secrets, secrets...adds to the intriguing nature of the story..is it mystery? is it romance? is it a thriller? Just when I think I know, I change my mind.

You have me hooked! Great wrting..keep on keepin on

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
another good segment...I like the way the scene is set up and the conflict that has been introduced. I saw no grammar or spelling errors...

Is there another book where some of the info (the nursing home, why there are elderly people living at the mansion etc)? I do find some of that confusing as it pops up without much explanation.

blessings, keep writing
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Good writing...my only issue with this segment is that there is very little about the children or the mysteries surrounding them..that's what got my interest in the first place. Still I understand the need to set the scene and you've done a good job

blessings
Vickyk
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
OK...I was a bit hesitant to start something that seemed so long...but I have to say I love it, I'm addicted and I"m going to read some more. This is definitely a book I would read! I want to know more about the characters and what happens.

Heading on to the next section! Great writing!

blessings
Vicky
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Review by hoosiermomma2
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoy so much stopping by your blog. Whether an entry on your sermon notes or just the daily happenings in your life and yoru fight against "fibro fog" You light the way for those who stop by.

Thanks for sharing who you are!

blessings and peace
Vicky
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