|Thaaat was so intense. Haha. I don't even know where to start, honestly. I'm at work listening to metal as I'm reading this, to get in the mood, you know? As I'm getting into this story, I can vividly picture the dreams that Gary and Eamon were sharing. It was extremely intense. Now, my only question is, why did Martin get tormented to death by the dream, and yet everybody else was just affected by decay? I was hoping this would go a little longer, with maybe the grandma massing like Martin did and then the world being affected, but I don't know. Wishful thinking on an addictive piece.
Regardless, this was a wonderful piece. You have a very unique vernacular which adds to the story and definitely drags me in. I can't wait to read more of your work!