Travellinda's (iwrite56) Reviews

Travellinda

Review Requests: OFF

14 Public Reviews Given

14 Total Reviews Given

1

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4560783

Review of Change

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I'm not a huge fan of poetry, but I really liked this. It flowed well and had a message.

2

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4560782

Review of Sundae the cat

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love her already! Your descriptions of her antics are great, and although I'm not a cat person I think I would love her. I have a dog that keeps me entertained; how boring life would be without the antics of a beloved pet.

The only suggestion I would make is to edit some of the punctuation and line spacing.

3

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4560778

Review of The Coffee Shop

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Ah, young love. I enjoyed the story but felt it would benefit with less dialogue. You also might want to download Grammarly, a free writers tool that catches any and all errors. I'd be lost without it!

4

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4560374

Review of Rain is gorgeous.

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Lovely reminder to all of us to get out and experience the rain! There is no scent as wonderful as when it first starts to rain; that deep earthy smell has no comparison. You brought this all to life here. Very nice!

5

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4560373

Review of A remote

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Interesting but a little choppy in the beginning.

6

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4559957

Review of Bedtime

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

This made me smile. I personally LOVE to sleep and these are my steps to a perfect night's sleep. Big yawn, shh, not a peep being my favorite lines. I could see this on a grandchild's bedroom wall.

7

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4559956

Review of A Feigned Encounter (Flash Fiction)

Review by Travellinda

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Interesting scene here, and it makes me want to read on to see how Marissa handles the old man.

I didn't notice any edits needed, but I read through it quickly.

Thanks for the read!

8

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4559954

Review of Deceit

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You had me at Azure Ghosts; what a world picture of emptiness. Great job of showing not telling emotions.

9

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4559953

Review of Walking Away

Review by Travellinda

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I don't typically read or like poetry, but when I do this is the style and cadence that I really like. I would like to see more of your poetry. (I can't believe it; I don't think I've ever written those words!

10

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.