I love her already! Your descriptions of her antics are great, and although I'm not a cat person I think I would love her. I have a dog that keeps me entertained; how boring life would be without the antics of a beloved pet.
The only suggestion I would make is to edit some of the punctuation and line spacing.
Ah, young love. I enjoyed the story but felt it would benefit with less dialogue. You also might want to download Grammarly, a free writers tool that catches any and all errors. I'd be lost without it!
Lovely reminder to all of us to get out and experience the rain! There is no scent as wonderful as when it first starts to rain; that deep earthy smell has no comparison. You brought this all to life here. Very nice!
I don't typically read or like poetry, but when I do this is the style and cadence that I really like. I would like to see more of your poetry. (I can't believe it; I don't think I've ever written those words!