*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/iwrite56
Review Requests: OFF
14 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Change  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not a huge fan of poetry, but I really liked this. It flowed well and had a message.
2
2
Review of Sundae the cat  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love her already! Your descriptions of her antics are great, and although I'm not a cat person I think I would love her. I have a dog that keeps me entertained; how boring life would be without the antics of a beloved pet.

The only suggestion I would make is to edit some of the punctuation and line spacing.
3
3
Review of The Coffee Shop  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (3.0)
Ah, young love. I enjoyed the story but felt it would benefit with less dialogue. You also might want to download Grammarly, a free writers tool that catches any and all errors. I'd be lost without it!
4
4
Review of Rain is gorgeous.  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely reminder to all of us to get out and experience the rain! There is no scent as wonderful as when it first starts to rain; that deep earthy smell has no comparison. You brought this all to life here. Very nice!
5
5
Review of A remote  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting but a little choppy in the beginning.
6
6
Review of Bedtime  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This made me smile. I personally LOVE to sleep and these are my steps to a perfect night's sleep. Big yawn, shh, not a peep being my favorite lines. I could see this on a grandchild's bedroom wall.
7
7
Review by Travellinda
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting scene here, and it makes me want to read on to see how Marissa handles the old man.

I didn't notice any edits needed, but I read through it quickly.

Thanks for the read!
8
8
Review of Deceit  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.0)
You had me at Azure Ghosts; what a world picture of emptiness. Great job of showing not telling emotions.
9
9
Review of Walking Away  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't typically read or like poetry, but when I do this is the style and cadence that I really like. I would like to see more of your poetry. (I can't believe it; I don't think I've ever written those words!
10
10
Review of Coronavirus  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really don't know much about poetry, but this is catchy. Just think, if he'd met with Lyme, he'd have Corona and Lyme...
11
11
Review of Nosedive No More  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love the idea, but it needs editing for grammatical errors. I could see myself reading this to my grandchildren and I know they would be delighted!
12
12
Review of Fight!  
Review by Travellinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love your energy!
12 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/iwrite56