Once again, no issues with grammar, punctuation, and dialogue flow.
For me, what is missing is emotions. The dialogue tells us quite a bit, but this young girl is putting herself in what could be, for most people, compromising situations. Tell me, as a reader, what she is feeling? What is she worried about? She comes across as a strong, very self-confident woman, and you tells us what she does, but what is going on in her head? She must worry more about Seto being perhaps abusive? Dominant? What does she expect and think about as she gets into these situations. What is it that she wants and how do her goals change throughout the story?
after ensuring that his alarm was set properly.
Do we find out what Laura wanted on the dance floor? Usually nothing happens without a reason in any story. But then, perhaps it becomes clear later. Maybe she was just about to offer the warning of the man in the red suit. It wasn't quite clear.
Anyway, overall good writing. Keep up the writing magic!