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Review by Jazz
Rated: E | (2.5)
You might need to fix a few grammatical errors. But it shows that the character Zaara was a kind person.


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Review of My Church  
Review by Jazz
Rated: E | (3.5)
I think it just shows that God doesn't need you to be rich or perfect but just needs you to work towards his goal. Great poem. Very inspiring I don't think you need to change a thing in this piece.


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Review by Jazz
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Some spelling mistakes you could fix. Pretty good story line.I think you could make the POV a little more clear. A great ending and the beginning is very easy to relate to.


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Review by Jazz
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very touching. A sad theme? You achieved what you set out to do. I don't think you need any improvement.


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Review by Jazz
Rated: E | (3.5)
It had a interesting setting for what was happening in the story. There are a few spelling mistakes you could try to fix. It was a very hopeful ending for someone who had just experienced heartbreak.


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Review of Around The World  
Review by Jazz
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Great poem. But maybe you could make the subject more clear. Great lines though.


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