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Review of Can't Get Enough  
Review by Jennyj
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent story! And, in this day and age, potentially realistic! This is a great entry, and deserved to win! I was so pleased when I saw your name!! Great word choices and effective dialog make this an outstanding read. Very inventive use of the prompt; poses thought-provoking ethical dillemmas for us all to think about as we all age! How far is it really permissible to go with technology?? Great job!!
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Review by Jennyj
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a wonderful, heartwarming story. You gave that angel a run for her wingspan that day!! I like the way you describe your dilemma over rescuing the dog despite its refusal to politely stop and listen to you; your assessment of its fear of you and its nonchalance at the danger of its situation make the story a realistic read, rather than a gooet, sentimental tale with you as the hero--which you were!
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Review by Jennyj
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WHAT IMAGINATION!! Makes my little poem about old Tipton look rather tame and boring!! In case you ever see thoswe little heathens around, don't send them over for a snack!!!! Tipton IS a real cat; he is a PIECE OF WORK!! Your story is great and suspenseful--can"t wait to read your "WHODUNIT!" Great, convincing characters! Super word choices!! Sorry about Teddy. . . .
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Review by Jennyj
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
REVIEWED FOR THE INFINITY GROUP KEYWORD CONTEST

This is a magnificent story! It combines the perils of the modern teaching profession with the ackwardness of his breakfast adventure and the impact of the loud Christian music and preaching, out of context as it was. The three components weave together to make for a great picture of work-day chaos as he makes his way into the morning. An excellent portrayal of the modern schedule and current workplace quirks!
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Review of Independence Day  
Review by Jennyj
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent description of emotions and pain! The story was made dynamic by the alternation between her thoughts and the action. The Liz you showed me made me instantly dislike her and come up with unsavory descriptions of her. You did an excellent job of painting your characters with vivid words in such a way that they appear reprehensible without dis-ing them at all! Great job! Great story,also!
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Review of Warm Greetings  
Review by Jennyj
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Rated: E | (4.5)
THIS REVIEW IS PART OF THE INFNITY GROUP KEYWORD CONTEST

KEYWORD: Threat

Excellent poem full of strong emotions! I like the way you detailed your arrival home, and the feelings that flowed from it as your partner found fault with your every move. I especially like the part that begins with "not welcome in my own house"--that shows the reaching of the bitter end!! A super showing of pain and the resulting action and summary of the partner's guilt--I really liked the image of the guilt rack!!

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To the memory of a departed friend
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Review of "May I help you?"  
Review by Jennyj
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Rated: E | (4.0)
REVIEWING FOR THE INFINITY KEY WORD CONTEST--
KEY WORD: PATRON

This is a much-needed essay about the free availability of needed resources. Your point that we seem to be fixated on the electronic media is well taken, and well expressed. Your style is very readable; you relate to your readers well. One correction that I noticed is that you need to change it's to its. It's means it is. The appostrophe is not used to show posession with pronouns like "it." Thanks for the great read!
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Review by Jennyj
Rated: E | (5.0)
A really fun, informative read!! I have always seen those numbers, and have had no clue about their meaning. I am glad it is nutritional and not just the dimensions of the bag!! Just kidding! You presented this in a coherent, readable way guaranteed to educate and not just sell products! Good descrptions in the text!!
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Review of Whispers  
Review by Jennyj
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good rhythm and rhyme are great features of this poem consistently throughout the piece, The shortness of the lines adds inmtensity to the desperate feelings of the epeaker. The poem has a good flow throughout. When reviewing poetry, I usually try to let the poet know which line in the poem is my favorite; I like all of yours equally and can't single out just one "favorite." Great descriptive word choices make this poem pleasant to read and understand!
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