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Review of A Bunch Of Things  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (3.5)
The concept was actually cool...I think I was thrown aback by the sense of chaos in this piece. Maybe a softer structure, something that flows a bit easier. There seems to be many things going on that can be conveyed I guess, more gracefully. But honestly this was a wonderful write! I enjoyed reading it :) keep up the good work!
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Review of The Journey  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
great imagery~although I found myself searching for the emotional wording to be more profound. This was a great write and keeps one reading. "Fiery explosion of smoke" and "solid ebony marble" are very descriptive phrases that made this particular short write very interesting. I have read some of your other work awhile back and absolutely enjoyed it! keep it up~~
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
mesmerizing~loved it
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Review of Blades  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Moving piece-
my favorite line was
"My fan has a line
that he says all the time:
"My rhyme is my rhyme, and I am border-line"

I think "friends" could be respelled-
"My freinds and the feinds"-
but other than that this is a great piece to read-I hope to more of your work in the future

wonderful work-
write on!!
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Review of Piano Praise  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an awesome prose!! Loved every bit of it-the grand finale to the piece was the best (in my opinion, that is)

" reflecting evanescent moonlight in the night."

Absolutely beautiful

Hope to see more of your work in the future-
Judah (:

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Review of Transgressor  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good piece-it flowed wonderfully and the structure was awesome. My favorite line was "Paint the thorned poison plant that which was once 'The Rose'"-

Really enjoyed reading this-hope to see more of your work in the future-

Great write-Judah
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Another great write!! This one is truly awesome-my favorite line "Atonement comes to she who asks for help"-so true...

You are an awesome poet-I see no problems with this prose and am looking forward to reading more-
keep up the great work-
Judah
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
wow-what a moving letter! I really enjoyed reading this particular piece-I think it is very poetic and almost cryptic. "The silence of graves..." was a great visual line-I also liked "By August we'll be choking on dust..."- Awesome write-hope to see more of your work in the future-Judah

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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (5.0)
These are all awesome!! Love the colors!
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Review of Firefly  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Awesome-love reading your work-Judah
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Review of Dearest Monique  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is one of the sweetest letters I have ever read! It's so expressive and every word is phrased so beautifully. You conveyed honesty and raw emotion-absolutely breathtaking. Wow-enjoyed this letter very much-it left such a warm cozy feeling-great work! Judah
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Review of Redemption  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ahh!! Loved the story-wonderful beginning and great ending! Really enjoyed this story! It really keeps one reading-keep up the good work-Judah
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
kind of cute- rather violent-but it was well written and very much creative. This piece had a great visual element to it- what a fun song if someone is in that particular mood-good job- keep up the good work- I'm sure people are waiting on the update!Judah
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Review of Falling Up  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
For some reason my review for this song didn't go through the first time-anyway, great anst song- the piece had a bit of a Staind aura to it- the emotions conveyed through these lyrics were touching, and I'm sure many out there will be able to relate. good piece-Judah
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Review of Silent No More  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
very emotional poem-the system never really leaves a kids' heart-even after one is grow-anyway-great work-Judah
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Review of Reminiscence  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
what a sad time in your life-this writing expressed your feelings of loss so exquisitely-keep writing-Judah
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Review of Letters From Pa  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh-these are so sad! I was almost in tears! they tell such a story-judah
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought this was a very moving piece-"I'm terrified at the depths of my own faithlessness" such raw honesty. This piece made me really think about my stance on the issues you tackled. Wonderful work!
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Review of Sojourner  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a very inspirational essay!! My favorite part was " Lazarus awakening..." I felt this essay was upbeat,positive and very well thought out. It was very honest and it's emotional element was very well expressed! This was a wondeful essay and hope to see more work.
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Review of Liquify  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
wow- this is a very expressive writing! I found this writing very heartfelt and very well put together. It was to the point and mixed anger and pain very poetically. Bleed me dry was good-I've used that line quite a number of times and thought I was so original! Great work!
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Review of Without You  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a pretty sad song-but wonderfully expressed and the rhythym was great. It's hard to deal with loss-especially when it's a death because of the finality-but it's so healthy to express grief through poetry or song-or any artform for that matter-keep up the good work-wonderful piece.
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow- deeply thought out and very socially concious piece of work-it expressed your concern and hope wonderfully. The brains that get splattered part was a bit dramatic-but I think that's what you were probably going for to get your point across. Great job!
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: E | (4.0)
Were you really under the influence when you wrote this or were you saying it in a metaphorical sense? Either way it was a very expressive piece of work and I enjoyed reading it. Don't you hate those times when it's hard to think of something to write?! Great work-keep it up
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Review by *RaiN*
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Interesting poem. This poem seemed to come straight from the heart and soul, it is expressed well and had a sweet ending. The "just like me and you" line probably should have been "you and I"- but no big deal- I think this poem is pretty cool-write on!
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Review of The Sum  
Review by *RaiN*
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow..short sweet and intense. It wasn't sad or weepy- it was like "To infinity and beyond..." cool piece. I liked the symbolism used (final call, my story and it's sum) Being able to write about one's own death with such closure and in your face attitude is cool.
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