What a wonderful and loving story about your father and his unique personality! The poem is an excellent blend between the sorrow of loosing such an important person in your life but on the other hand a tale about the precious time you spent together over the years. I can relate to your poem since I also had a father much like yours and when he passed away, despite my grief, I could feel a gratitude for the luck of having him as my father and for the years we had together. Again, I fell in love with your poem the very second I saw it!
I just want you to know that your poem spoke directly to my heart. I also lost my only brother and I will never be the same again. I wish I could give you a big hug! But when you are at your worst promise me that you never ever forget you are not alone. Please take care of yourself and I am sending you and your brother all my love...
Hi!
Your poem really touched my heart, I can feel your pain. My only suggestion is to add some description about how it feels when you have cried your eyes dry and screamed yourself silent. Very hard, I know, working on it myself. But those lucky people with no experience of tragic losses often doesn't know it's yet another stage in this kind of nightmare. Very good overall!
Take care
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