This story is intriguing and piqued my interest from the first glance. It contains a lot of hard truth that people usually are to fearful to confront. This piece is very brave and confronting of hard truths that lay locked up in people's closet's. I particularly desired the line "That bloody pen has taken everything from me- my love, my pride and my horror." This story should recollect some of the pride lost.
This is a very telling story. It is interesting but there are just a few mistakes, "she would married him" should have , "she would of married him". and there is there where it should be their because you are discussing ownership. Other than that this story was inventive.