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Review by Lala
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This story is intriguing and piqued my interest from the first glance. It contains a lot of hard truth that people usually are to fearful to confront. This piece is very brave and confronting of hard truths that lay locked up in people's closet's. I particularly desired the line "That bloody pen has taken everything from me- my love, my pride and my horror." This story should recollect some of the pride lost.
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Review of His Queen  
Review by Lala
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This is a very telling story. It is interesting but there are just a few mistakes, "she would married him" should have , "she would of married him". and there is there where it should be their because you are discussing ownership. Other than that this story was inventive.
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Review by Lala
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Imaginative. Really reveals alot about the type of person you are. :)
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