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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This is a very telling story. It is interesting but there are just a few mistakes, "she would married him" should have , "she would of married him". and there is there where it should be their because you are discussing ownership. Other than that this story was inventive.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Imaginative. Really reveals alot about the type of person you are. :)
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