A cute little poem.
Very beautiful imagination and the really journey of home and life that is depicted in a few words is amazing and that touched me.
I loved the way you ended up and leaving the readers to imagine the rest and whats best for them.
Please watch out on the punctuation and Capitalising the start.
You could have brought in some rhyming words after the 3rd line onwards too to bring a flow in the writing.
oh wow this is such a true love and intimacy poured out from the heart
i would have appreciated if you went in a positive note to the reader as love is always there and not to love is something quite unimaginable ..just a thought ok
Hello a very interesting read on the topic..
A great flow to the story catches the readers interest till the end
Titillating and eye catching usage of the sentences to cover the adult interests.
Beautifully depicted the polyamourous way of life and how the couples are very comfotable in their way of life.
I really liked the way in which you brought out the relationship aspects and the care and concern for each other even if one is a prostitute for a man but she is his girl friend
Nice plot too especially for people interested in adult topics
Only point i felt a bit dragging is the same set of vocabulary being used so as we go a little later into the chapters would be good if you can use some interesting vocab to attract other reader groups too
thank you for giving me the opportunity to review
love this article...You gave the best and shortest possible desciption of the great work.
yes this book has inspired so many lives all over the world.
I love this quote of Be like a lotus leaf ...something i recently learnt about the magnanimity of the lotus plant ..the leaf is in water but it doesn't get immersed in the water ...live life with complete involvement but not attaching ourselves to our joys and our sorrows...
I think even when sorrows and joys are there in life krishna says it to take it in the same equanimity and surrender to our higher self or in the divine himself
Beautiful ...the writer tried to bring in both the melancholy and the uprising in this tough love
I would have loved to see this tough love end as a learning in life rather than give that wrong situation mood..
overall a very great attempt thank you for sharing
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