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Review of Home  
Review by Onenessinall
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A cute little poem.
Very beautiful imagination and the really journey of home and life that is depicted in a few words is amazing and that touched me.
I loved the way you ended up and leaving the readers to imagine the rest and whats best for them.

Please watch out on the punctuation and Capitalising the start.
You could have brought in some rhyming words after the 3rd line onwards too to bring a flow in the writing.

Overall a beautiful read..thank you for sharing


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Review of The Spring Fling  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.5)
WONDERFUL WRITING
one can really feel the spring blossoming from your poetic expression

i too love the nature and to see the seasons change and the whole change in flora and fauna with that and te human hearts too...

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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wonderful writing
Loved the intricate ways of the bees that you have narrated so detailed.
It felt so real and beautiful and giving again a reassurance that nature is so beautiful

enjoyed reading keep writing thank you
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Review of Towards You  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (3.5)
intense and romantic ...you really did a lovely work
keep writing
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (3.0)
emotional indeed
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Review of Alphabet Song  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (3.0)
nice attempt ...nice imagination
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Review of Badger Fray  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
cute and beatiful one
the author has given a very descriptive usage on the badger and his love is portrayed
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (2.0)
good attempt but please check for the grammatical usage and words

keep trying good luck
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Review of Pain  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
beautifully put the pain and the i dont know part

i hope and pray the other side of the coin of the pain i see the bundle of joy and a ray of hope and sunshine
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Review of Forgotten  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
oh wow this is such a true love and intimacy poured out from the heart
i would have appreciated if you went in a positive note to the reader as love is always there and not to love is something quite unimaginable ..just a thought ok

great flow of writing loved it
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Review of After  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
romantic and beautifully flowing lyrics
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
great going good luck to you
i am also here to improve my poetry and in general writing skills
i live in the french world and now becoming franglais ...lol

i think this platform and the community will help us learn and share and grow

thank you keep writing

please do go through my writings and provide your feedback
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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
Struggle and struggle
he works hard and fears for tomorrow
saddened for yesterday and he forgets to live today

Beautiful
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Review of rain  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
So true its beautiful the rains ..to sleep to the music of the rains is so exhilarating
mmm this took me back to the old childhood days playing in the rain and the glory of it
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
welcome to the community
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello a very interesting read on the topic..
A great flow to the story catches the readers interest till the end
Titillating and eye catching usage of the sentences to cover the adult interests.
Beautifully depicted the polyamourous way of life and how the couples are very comfotable in their way of life.
I really liked the way in which you brought out the relationship aspects and the care and concern for each other even if one is a prostitute for a man but she is his girl friend

Nice plot too especially for people interested in adult topics
Only point i felt a bit dragging is the same set of vocabulary being used so as we go a little later into the chapters would be good if you can use some interesting vocab to attract other reader groups too
thank you for giving me the opportunity to review
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Review of Come With Me  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
Crisp and clear directly the passion flows out in simple words.
could have been good to bring in an element of love and the aspect of present too..

keep writing ...romance is in the air ..good luck
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
oh wow such a cute and innocent imagination ..reminded me of my young son who used to be a dinosaur fan as a child
very descriptive and creative
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.5)
love this article...You gave the best and shortest possible desciption of the great work.

yes this book has inspired so many lives all over the world.
I love this quote of Be like a lotus leaf ...something i recently learnt about the magnanimity of the lotus plant ..the leaf is in water but it doesn't get immersed in the water ...live life with complete involvement but not attaching ourselves to our joys and our sorrows...

I think even when sorrows and joys are there in life krishna says it to take it in the same equanimity and surrender to our higher self or in the divine himself
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Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (3.0)
cute
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Review of Tough Love  
Review by Onenessinall
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful ...the writer tried to bring in both the melancholy and the uprising in this tough love
I would have loved to see this tough love end as a learning in life rather than give that wrong situation mood..

overall a very great attempt thank you for sharing
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