You can feel the tension rising in this poem. It flowed and was captivating. Your descriptive words capture the moment very well.
I have a few suggestions for the poem:
1) A final stand against loves potent pull, (should be love's potent pull
2)I would have liked it if the poem was staggered or broken up into short stanzas (2-3 lines each). This would allow the impact of each line to be felt more.
See below my example:
Eyes meet for but a moment, entranced,
Time's relentless pursuit lost in their gaze,
Vulnerable to eternity's dance,
Innocence fades. Natures primitive game,
Tentative fingers of two souls entwine,
Gentle, subtle caresses grace emotions,
A warm summer breeze felt without a sign,
Fanning the flames of the building tensions,
A silent groan from the changing shadows,
Pleasures manifest as tortures so cruel,
Two anxious bodies, trapped like stone statues,
A final stand against loves potent pull,
Violent passions exalt colliding hearts,
Bodies of skin and flesh embrace at last.
Hope this helped!
Good luck in your writing.
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