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Review of Calling  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very easy to understand and very touching too.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written. I like your style. Those samples written in I - form, like that space traveler's case, they pull me. They are easy to understand.
Keep up the good work!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You can write! That is awesome! I've always admired those professionals, who know how it is done.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
for entry "The Review Mixer" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Straight and easy to understand.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very good article.
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for entry "Poetry from my Soul" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You are so talented with rhymes!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful.
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for entry "writing poetry" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You sure can write. You think like me. Poems just come. If one tries to squeeze them out, they vanish. And just like you, I hope someone makes sense of what I've written. Keep up the good work.
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for entry "summer at the shore" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You certainly can write. Some rows are a bit long, but some native speaker can help you with that. Awesome work!
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Review of C Note 1  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The picture is very beautiful and the text is encouraging.
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Review of Fear is Real  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am sort of relieved. I was sure your MC would join his friends and get into some sort of trouble. But it was his sister, who made him see the error of his ways. Well written! I like it.
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for entry "The Rose" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The poem as a whole is pretty, but 1st line bothers me. "In it's velvety" should be "in its' velvety". Ask from someone native speaker (I am not such) why. I just tell what I've learned. But you will tame this. I am sure about that. You're able to make beautiful picture.
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Review of Quantum Communion  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You can write. That poem gives a strong picture. When I read that, I thought maybe X has died and Y thinks of him.
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for entry "Reflections of Spring" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now I dare to say this would be perfect to read to your DH whenever you have your next anniversary.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can write. I like that poem of yours. But you could trim it just a bit. Ask from a native speaker, how. She can tell you, what to do and why and how. But I like it. Keep up the good work.
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for entry "The Littlest Angel" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can write poetry. But that your there should be 'you're there'. Don't ask why.Ask from some native speaker. But you can write all right.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That is beautiful and touching poem.
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for entry "Another Day" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Some verses are...You should ask from someone, who really knows poetry....but maybe....It's not 'ing, king' - thing, but the length issue. I still got your point. And it was not hard to say the lines. From the reader's POV, that is.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You have a talent!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I dare to say I like this. It's very well written and very clear. I'm happy for your success as well.
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Review of And Then  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This could be straight from my life! Honestly, it could be. You sure can write. And if this is a song (that is what it resembles), you should let someone make a music for it.
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Review of Baby Animals  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
You can write. Some of the verses...I feel they are a bit 'off'. I mean the length. Ask from some native speaker, what I mean. But it's nice to read your poems, though.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for teaching me about those things! I may practice some of those things in the future.
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Review of Death's Laundry  Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow! Quite a story! But I got the picture. And the MC even survived! I mean he didn't die.
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for entry "If I were a fairy" Open in new Window.
Review by Lucinda Lynx Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That poem holds up pretty well. I like it.
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