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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can write. I like that poem of yours. But you could trim it just a bit. Ask from a native speaker, how. She can tell you, what to do and why and how. But I like it. Keep up the good work.
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for entry "The Littlest Angel
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can write poetry. But that your there should be 'you're there'. Don't ask why.Ask from some native speaker. But you can write all right.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
That is beautiful and touching poem.
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for entry "Another Day
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Some verses are...You should ask from someone, who really knows poetry....but maybe....It's not 'ing, king' - thing, but the length issue. I still got your point. And it was not hard to say the lines. From the reader's POV, that is.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You have a talent!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
I dare to say I like this. It's very well written and very clear. I'm happy for your success as well.
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Review of And Then  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This could be straight from my life! Honestly, it could be. You sure can write. And if this is a song (that is what it resembles), you should let someone make a music for it.
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Review of Baby Animals  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (3.0)
You can write. Some of the verses...I feel they are a bit 'off'. I mean the length. Ask from some native speaker, what I mean. But it's nice to read your poems, though.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for teaching me about those things! I may practice some of those things in the future.
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Review of Death's Laundry  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow! Quite a story! But I got the picture. And the MC even survived! I mean he didn't die.
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for entry "If I were a fairy
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
That poem holds up pretty well. I like it.
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for entry "Itsy Bitsy Kitty
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (3.0)
Pretty nice poem.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (5.0)
You made me emotional, even I can imagine you have written this to your husband. Some of the...lines....are..a bit long. Maybe it's just me. I mean maybe I haven't used to that long lines. But the poem is very nice. I like it.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You sure can write! Those resemble a haiku. Don't ask what a haiku is. It's Japanese thing.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You sure can write!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! I thought it was sing-king - type poem, but it was more modern. I like it, though. You can make this kind of poems too. That kind of flashes of a moment. I enjoy reading them.
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Review of Wedding Day  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome! Perfect! So beautiful!
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