Lucinda Lynx's (lucindalynx) Reviews

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Lucinda Lynx

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#4172874

Review of Poetry and stuff

for entry "The Tree (creativity assignment for Poet's Place)"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You can write. I like that poem of yours. But you could trim it just a bit. Ask from a native speaker, how. She can tell you, what to do and why and how. But I like it. Keep up the good work.

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#4170156

Review of Poetry and stuff

for entry "The Littlest Angel"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You can write poetry. But that your there should be 'you're there'. Don't ask why.Ask from some native speaker. But you can write all right.

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#4167152

Review of POETRY IN STYLE AND FORM

for entry "Work in progress assignment "I was created""

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

That is beautiful and touching poem.

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#4166324

Review of Writing.Com Contest entries

for entry "Another Day"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Some verses are...You should ask from someone, who really knows poetry....but maybe....It's not 'ing, king' - thing, but the length issue. I still got your point. And it was not hard to say the lines. From the reader's POV, that is.

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#4163310

Review of Writing.Com Contest entries

for entry "Breast cancer Letter for Susan G koman-- for the cure"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You have a talent!

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#4154412

Review of IMPROVE YOUR WRITING

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I dare to say I like this. It's very well written and very clear. I'm happy for your success as well.

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#4154084

Review of And Then

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

This could be straight from my life! Honestly, it could be. You sure can write. And if this is a song (that is what it resembles), you should let someone make a music for it.

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#4153604

Review of Baby Animals

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (3.0)

You can write. Some of the verses...I feel they are a bit 'off'. I mean the length. Ask from some native speaker, what I mean. But it's nice to read your poems, though.

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#4150878

Review of Newbie Hyperlinking 101 - Bitem Format

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Thank you for teaching me about those things! I may practice some of those things in the future.

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#4150867

Review of Death's Laundry

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Wow! Quite a story! But I got the picture. And the MC even survived! I mean he didn't die.

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#4149492

Review of Writing.Com Contest entries

for entry "If I were a fairy"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

That poem holds up pretty well. I like it.

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#4148460

Review of Poetry and stuff

for entry "Itsy Bitsy Kitty"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Pretty nice poem.

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#4148326

Review of Poetry and stuff

for entry "Where the grass is greener"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (5.0)

You made me emotional, even I can imagine you have written this to your husband. Some of the...lines....are..a bit long. Maybe it's just me. I mean maybe I haven't used to that long lines. But the poem is very nice. I like it.

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#4148112

Review of POETRY IN STYLE AND FORM

for entry "Paralellagram De Crystelline"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You sure can write! Those resemble a haiku. Don't ask what a haiku is. It's Japanese thing.

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#4147339

Review of POETRY IN STYLE AND FORM

for entry "connotation Assignment (Summer's End)"

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You sure can write!

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#4147328

Review of POETRY IN STYLE AND FORM

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Wow! I thought it was sing-king - type poem, but it was more modern. I like it, though. You can make this kind of poems too. That kind of flashes of a moment. I enjoy reading them.

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#3841147

Review of Wedding Day

Review by Lucinda Lynx

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Awesome! Perfect! So beautiful!

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