this is BEAUTIFUL! I felt a connection with it. and the comparason to the battery kind of made me giggle. I really felt the love you actually have for this person. may it be man or women I really loved this piece. it really feels like you put your heart and soul into this piece of work.
this is really intense. its like I'm watching a movie and cant wait for the end. But then I get to the end and its kind of a disappointment. I believe you should stick with the theme. but this is almost like its a dream so go more on with that like the dream part of it.
I myself am a teen ager. I know this song and really enjoy it. When I read this I felt as if it was my mom talking about me. The way you worded things was very enjoyable. I like how you described the 40's and 50's it really painted a picture for me.
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