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Review by Calli Seren
Rated: E | (3.5)
The beginning of this was powerful- it left an immediate feeling - I wanted to hear the struggle to hang on to the image- how did you lose everything - did you try to grasp it?
What did you feel as you "floated" - I think there is room to make this even more powerful, as even "empty" has body. You have a powerful voice, I look forward to hearing more.
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