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Review of XXX Almighty  
Review by Swiper89
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I found this story from a review of my interactive "Reality Manipulation" Overall I like the plot of the story but was taken back a little by some of the rule (I understand its your story you make the rules completely) With that said ... it seems that since I have taken gods powers I should be able to do anything and that may include some bad things that you have left out (Vore,toilet,ect) Maybe if it did not involve death as one of the rules that came with the powers was that no matter what the victim could not be killed to allow some one to be eaten or as a way to make the plot me realistic as since you could not kill anyone with these powers then those such actions could not happen.

Otherwise its a great plot and a good way to explain how your able to shrink and or manipulate reality.

Overall a good start!

I will add some chapters when I get a chance and hope to see you continue to write more as well.

swiper89
(Reality Manipulation)
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Review by Swiper89
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I stumbled upon this story as you reviewed my story "Reality Manipulation" I would have to say this is one the interactives that needs a mention on writing.com. I like how you introduced a different area of cloning to the general shrinking scenario along with the other sub fetishes in most of these types of stories. And to make it over the top you have pictures!!

Overall a great executed plot and many good chapters.

I added a chapter and will add more I personally like others to add to my sub chapters on my interactive and will do the same here when someone writes to one of my options on the chapter I will write to that said chapter again. Look forward to seeing this story grow and will stop in and write chapters from time to time.

A++


Swiper89
(Reality Manipulation)
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Review by Swiper89
Rated: XGC | (5.0)
Many great chapters inside!! Wonderfully exciting!
I would have to say this is one of the best interactives of this type left on writing.com :).
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Review by Swiper89
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great Idea and many Great addtions to this interactive.
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