To tell you honestly, I didn't like the story. Instead, I loved it! You did an excellent job in writing this piece.
The story very much supported the title, and before I read it I was asking myself what could be in this piece of work.
What caught my attention was the finale of the story which is the last line: "Trying may not always be sweet, but at least, it's not as bitter as regretting."
It is very inspirational and overwhelming!
VERY GREAT! write on!
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