In general, I think this is a very good piece of work. I don't normally like this type of genre, but this was pretty good. I think you should finish it. I only skimmed it, but it seemes fine, just a bit more detail could be used, and maybe a bit more informatino. Overall, I really like it, and I hope there will be more!
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