|I personally think love can die and is a lot less "pretty", but I'm also a bit of a cynic.
That said, it's too clean for my own taste, and who else's opinion am I giving than mine.
Even though I'm clearly not the target for this poem, I think it's good to have opinions from different people, I hope you feel the same.
Oh, I almost forgot, I actually like it, if I turn my subjectivity off.
Well done, and have fun!