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Review of Nimrod  
Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (3.0)
Well, Bubblegum Jones, I totally agree with you. I generally think of them as delicate but I like Nimrod just fine. What I like by reading your work, I realize I can write about absolutely anything to get more comfortable. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (1.5)
I'm glad you get the chance to dream your dream. I mean that, truly. I found it to be very relatable. I can sense the passion to write. As a Newbie myself, I love it! I appreciate your sharing this so much. Really! I encourage you to continue discovering and expressing it in your garden!
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Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (3.0)
I should hope that you're proud of yourself because you should be! I'd say this is a success!
"Willie Pete was an absolute Misery Guts" is the Greatest line EVER! It appeared, too, that lots of folks loved him. I actually read the last sentence and chuckled aloud. Perfect way to end it!
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Review of Identity  
Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is Beautiful. Simple. Well written and thought provoking.
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Review of Intersection  
Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (3.0)
There are a few things I'd like to address. After having read the story, what I love most about is the title! It's Perfect. I love what I read especially when Marcie made the decision to leave, I was proud of her for knowing herself well enough. By leaving, Marcie will mostly likely be successful in her future endeavor. I was proud of her for not settling.
Great job to the author as I found myself curious about what's next for Marcie and that's impressive because I got the information I needed from that chapter.
I was able to recall my first big interview and the stress that came with it. Hats off for evoking that feeling of stress and anxiety! Seriously, thank you to the writer for sharing your gift with us.
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Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (2.5)
What a beautiful story! And, what a great accomplishment to take the reader out to the ball game. I actually imagined sitting and anxiously watching from the bleachers. Thanks for sharing!
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