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Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (1.5)
I'm glad you get the chance to dream your dream. I mean that, truly. I found it to be very relatable. I can sense the passion to write. As a Newbie myself, I love it! I appreciate your sharing this so much. Really! I encourage you to continue discovering and expressing it in your garden!
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I should hope that you're proud of yourself because you should be! I'd say this is a success!
"Willie Pete was an absolute Misery Guts" is the Greatest line EVER! It appeared, too, that lots of folks loved him. I actually read the last sentence and chuckled aloud. Perfect way to end it!
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Review of Identity  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is Beautiful. Simple. Well written and thought provoking.
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Review by pwkom04
Rated: E | (2.5)
What a beautiful story! And, what a great accomplishment to take the reader out to the ball game. I actually imagined sitting and anxiously watching from the bleachers. Thanks for sharing!
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