|Some good ideas you've passed along here.
Errors & Solutions: This: your * Should be: you're
Zip through for spelling errors (and missing commas, that a spell check would miss. Here are a few examples.
This: to do it
Should be: to do is
This: It's facinating
Should be: It's fascinating,
What I liked/disliked: The formatting was okay (check through for text being wrapped some times and not others), but since the SM has created some great emoticons you might want to update this piece, and take advantage of some bullet points (or whatever) instead of the dashes.
In this section: "If you like other people's ideas for stories" it sounds reeeeealy close to copying someone else's work (and you want to be careful giving someone - especially if they are young and inexperienced in the writing arena - this advice). Maybe suggest: If you like an idea already out there, give it a new twist! Most things aren't original ideas, only the old recreated with new settings/ideas/twists/characters etc.
Overall Comments: You might want to mention to check the thrift stores for baby name books, to save money. I just bought a great one (AND I already have some!) that lists names through the ages. Nice job, Bernie
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