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Review by repguy
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice piece here. I always just seem to jump right in to writing before I make an outline. Book marked! ;)
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Review by repguy
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoy a good military fiction, and I have to say that this was very well done. I haven't seen many WWII stories from Russia's POV. With a bit of work, you could turn this into a great novel that me and I'm sure many others would enjoy reading.
The only problem is that first-person point of view, in my eyes, tells me that the narrator makes it out of their situation alive. Having the main character die was really something I did not expect, especially from a story told from the first person POV. This is also why I try to refrain from using first person POV when at all possible, because in my eyes, it kills the suspense. But that's probably just me being biased.
Great job, Geoff Cain ;)
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Review of The Sound  
Review by repguy
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is one of the funniest stories I've ever read on WDC. You created a great hook for readers to catch on to, they need to find out what the sound was, and after all your main character has been through, he still didn't find the source of the sound, but you managed to make his story entertaining enough!
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Review of Alter Your Ego  
Review by repguy
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I don't nesscessarily believe that two uses of the F word constitutes as being worthy of a 13+ rating,but a good poem nonetheless.
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Review of Live and let live  
Review by repguy
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Man, did I enjoy this little article. Reminds me of when I had to research child labor and argue against it for a school project. While I agree with the fact that kids need to have a work ethic installed in them when they are young, I am in no way in favor of underpaid children who can't make enough to feed themselves doing things dangerous for adults. Seeing as you are a newbie, I figured I'd put in my two cents because I am one myself and I know how much you would appriciate a review. :)
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