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Good descriptions! It was smart to use things that people all know and love in order to describe love itself.
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The piece is very happy and bright, just like the Sun itself. I can imagine the song being very cheery and folksy.
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This is so short and simple, but I actually really like it. Great job! Keep using your emotions to fuel your writing, it is the best advice I could give.
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This is pretty clever, especially the 'get me' line. Keep up the good work!
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