That was a beautiful story. A lot of emotion. You've captured the different emotions she felt for all the people in her life and made them come to life. Thanks for sharing.
Anyone who has ever been in love feels the pain you convey in your words and understands the confusion one feels. You expressed this beautifully.
Thanks for sharing.
Fates Future
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