This story is great. Batman has defeated Superman with kryptonite in an animated movie so this is sort of the same as that movie. Batman is definately my favorite hero. If I had Batman and another superhero fight each other then I would make Batman win also.
That is a great poem. I could never do a poem like this. I'm definately going to read your other stuff. I agree with you about summer being the best season expecially when school's out. Your poem seems very professional, not like something a kid could do.
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