I have been intrigued by your deeper understanding and rather balanced and perfect hold on the title of story or poem you write. As a reader l was attracted to the unconventional title and rather sceptical on how well the story will hold. I was pleasantly surprised with such sudden and creative twist. The introduction on a kids present mental state and dilemma, along with the need to take journey with rich discription of the sorroundings with rich exposure to the emotional balance of the kid did leave a deep impression as well. Overall l liked the title and sudden change of event in the end. Great job and l look forward to read and enjoy the creative imprint you leave in all your work..sindbad
This short and yet balanced story captures the visual ruins of a beach perfectly. The description part of the delapidated state did leave a deep impression. I was able to follow each and every step of the description like l was watching a short movie of the beach and the person with his bony structure as well. I give you full kudos for capturing a frame of event so very perfectly and it did effect the emotional state of mind as well. As a reader l did wonder how a perfect and lively beach reached such a petrified state.I am a fan and feel there are lots of things you have captured in your imagination vis a vis the deterioration of planets eco system with humans and their insatiable consumption and utter negligence to nature. Overall a descriptive piece you have and I can suggest some more description of the emotional state of the old man to enhance the emotional component as well...sindbad
This is nice and brilliant way of expressing certain facts, emotions and inner beauty in so few a words. I like the title and the word choice like is now astoke or duller full of color, all these words enliven your poem with a charm that we can feel vibrating in this poem. Great job and I will certainly read more of your creative renditions. Great job..sindbad
This is a simple and direct expression of ideas and images on critics and stand that is easy to understand and implement as well. Kudos to your all out understanding of how different choice and indirectly pointing to gems and best in all events and environment. Overall the poem speaks a lot on selective and balanced vision. As usual one of your signature piece...sindbad
This is a nice and presentable detail on Elysian. I did see such a movie Elysium wherein Tom Cruise was protagonist and his decision to free the people in a estranged planet. I am excited about the sci fi technology and detailed infrastructure on the space ship. I liked the basic information and eager to explore more and post the reviews as well...sindbad
This is a nice and elegant take spritual matters. You have given two different scenario for soul the one in damnation will cause eternal bleeding. Wherein the souls salvation will in turn will have healing simply by working wonders of God. This matter of faith and the true identification of soul has been done with pure and spiritual intent. Excellent and short contest entry, I am sure will get recognition..sindbad
This is a nice and exhaustive way of expressing the things that happens to a addict once he takes the shot. All those details gives one uniform outcome. The inner adventure very dificult to evaluate or understand as we seem to remain in a stage wherein perfect capture of inner adventure becomes a challenging task. You have done all this and more by giving death a higher weightage than life. This is a nice and rather detailed picture you have painted for readers to appreciate the effort and creativity gone towards a trip on drugs..sindbad
This story exemplifies the nice and elegant way of making a deal, and this after exploring all feasable option weighing the inner shame and the consequence of admitting the responsibilty of and event.This short and eventful plot a reader takes 3 min to read shows us how the deal works. Indeed this is a nice and I am sure a winnable contest entry..sindbad
This is a nice and creative take on weathering time and its timeless role for natural order of dessimation or cremation. As a reader I did find the take balanced perfect and yet I feel it can be expanded to 24 syllables by including the dry enviroment. Overall a nice and intelligent take..sindbad
Thisis a nice and engaging story about getting buries. I was impressed by the way you expressed your predaciment in so simple and perfect manner. The upside position is indeed very uncomfortable and the way the different body parts felt and the effect of natural sorrounding and heat gave a plausible and interesting story here. You expressed the inner demons once a person is isolated in a upside down position and his life is leaving in a heaps and bounds. Such a desperate person and his perfect and balanced tale did leave a deep impression to me as a reader. Buried with efficiency is really very interesting to read, and I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and keep on writing..Sindbad
This is a nice and presentable information on a story that did appeal to me once I went through the prologue. I am eager and ready to go through the 20 chapters in a short future. I congratulate you for wirting such a exciting piece appealing to different age group and community. I just want more of this! I enjoyed it, thank you for sharing..sindbad
This is a direct and hard hitting take on a slang that has a negative innotation. This colourful and attractive write gives a new meaning and platform to this rather offensive word. I am sure you must have done creative and deliberate research to come up with such catchy words and make reader believe that bitch is no longer a offensive word to be used. I am sure if the readers go thorugh your article they will certainly have a different and unique take and understanding on this word.Thank you so much for the laugh and appealing ending. I couldn't possibly offer any suggestions. I'd rate it 6 stars if I could. Well done!!!
This is the first time I am going through your work, and I find it very organized and impressive. I enjoy fantassy with promise of a hidden threat to the fabric that holds the worlds together hence such realm and unfolding of story does ignite my curosity to delve into the whole story. Overall I find the intorduction promising and am eager to post my review once I go through this story. Thank you so much for sharing, and write on!
This is a nice and unique way for seeking redemption and acquintance from the sins or bad things commited simply because we are at a wrong place at a wrong time with no provision to execute our free will. It's so well written, simple, poignant and yet incredibly deep and touching. You're probably my favorite author around here as all your poetry comes from your heart...sindbad
This is a nice and inspiring poem for a dark and depraved soul with no sunshine or lust on which there is no control. All these fallies so beautifully and creativity covered by a pure, innocent and a beaautiful virgin. All this gives a new direction and perspective to your thought process and perfect yet creative solution to dark souls. This poem uplifts the mood and inner fallies of the readers. This is indeed a unique and rather inhent quality that can yield great results if nurtured in a balanced and perfect manner..sindbad
This is a nice and short poetry on intent and way the intent is executed to get the desired result. In this poem pigeons were used to conveyed the same, however in one of the sentence it should be the bird made instead of mase. Overall a nice short and inspiring poem. Keep up the inner fire so well expressed here..sindbad
This is a nice and rather fascinating take on a topic we felt is impossible due to our inherent choromosomes and genes that control both our weight and height. However the way things unfolded for Lucas did leave plausible cause and awe for your creative and rather random chance of event unfolding in a natural manner. I am sure you can expand on all this to enhance the readers reading experience. Good read though keep up the good work...sindbad
This is a nice and creative way of exploring thing fron pov of our sensitive and velnerable self and moving to level and fighting the inner demons and uncertainity. This is a poem on self introspection and to some level melting face signifies the changes our nature undergoes once facing challenging atmosphere. This poem is a rather brilliant debacle compared with modern times, which I rather enjoyed while wondering what a modern version would read like with all the technologies. Then I shuddered at the thought..
This is a nice and rather unusual take on rainstorm. As a reader I can feel your exposure to such force of nature a regular event. I liked your ineherent and sensitive expression in so few a words and fathom you are open to suggestion on moving to the next level with nature and rainstorm. Nice and perfect take..sindbad
This is a nice and elegant story with the main character Jack leaving a deep and a strange impact. I did feel the need to appreciate and express my appreciation as well. Fanatassy element here expressed in full eloquence. The style is elaborate. The expressions are strong. It is very touching the personal and yet distant take.
This i a nice and wholesome review of the ambiance of Felinis restaurant and as a reader I did get idea and understanding of what is expected and can accordingly enjoy the finer dining experience thanks to this exhaustive and yet balanced review of the restaturant. Certainly a rating on cleanliness, the warmth, the quality of food and the time taken to deliver a rating from 0-5 will go a long way. Overall a perfect and balanced review with address and phone number..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting read on a subject and topic that has remained controversial to this day. Any more revelation on that fateful day when the President if had read the newspaper, could have rescheduled the day leaves some pondering by any person going through this story. You have written it in a catchy and simple format to ehnace the thinking part of the brain to speculate..Great job..sindbad
This is a nice and rather warm story on return of Ambrosia the supply ship after so much of apprehension and uncertainity. So much unexplored in a virtuous write and can unfold sci fi imagination to include certain anamolies that can dampen the homecoming. I really think this could be fleshed out in a story great enough to be a novel or a movie. Overall a great story..sindbad
This is a nice and elegant letter written to Euphoria. The old fashioned and ancient flow of words wherein the best happiness can be bestowed by avoiding the prospect of melancholia, the richness of imagination enhanced with word choice that reflects aristrocity. We dont find suchlevel of intellect implied in writing very precious. The word choice and flow of thoughts expressed here deserves a meritrocracy this letter so well deserves. However I will advise you to write a simple and all encompassing note to advise layman readers like me to understand the richness of language and glimpse of high society life of that era. I am sure it will enhance the intellect and reading quotient of this letter. I will advice to trunciate the fourth paragraph and enjoin a 5th paragraph starting from- If Melancholia has his way, he would have us all believe in the delusion that all is dead and meaningless and without value: that Life and the Self are meaningless, purposeless and intrinsically valueless; that Morality is non-existent and void; that Faith is subjective, relative, and thus devoid of reality and meaning; that Anomia is the norm du jour and the ne plus ultra! “Deal with it,” laughs Melancholia derisively, “for your kind matter to me not at all. You are temporary, short-lived, transitory.
Overall this letter did bring revealing facts about that era with full repose to the social norms and hidden connivance. These are my take on this beautiful and rich letter. Wish you all the best...sindbad
This is a nice and elegant way of expressing thoughts that were considered a taboo not too long time ago. The friendship and the ideal it should be bound are sacrosant to the purity of inner emotion and attraction between the two. All therse erotic and tantalising things in media incites our impulse to cross the line and explore the sexual aspect. However it has been observed by wise people that all things that gos up suddenly comes down with a crash. Such moments all the external media and their artificial stimulate will serve like a major deterent. Hence its advisable once we are comfortable in each others presence and feel the subconscious physical attraction, that unfolds with time...Ovearall a nice and juicy poem you have here on cloud nine..sindbad