This is a nice and interesting black op thriller and Johns role has been interesting and rather perfect assasin. I couldn’t possibly pass up a short story involving assassination, could I!
I am not sure if this story is corporate war. From the point of the Sci fi, it has to belong to the suspense genre, but the way you presented it and the way I look at it, the story has definitely a sense of thril. I think from now on, the way John handled Frank, I’ll wonder on what can strike me in stealth mode.
The point of view the story is told is brilliant. Who’d think of planning, acknowledge of perfect time to strike! Moreover, their dialogue is so believable, and as characters, they get to a reader; at least, they got to me.
The plot is clear and follows a logical and chronological order. The story construction as to the premise, setup, setting, and flow is excellent. The hidden conflict that fools the main characters (the assasination) is perfect, too, together with the outward reason for the story being of commiting a perfect assassination in corporate scenario.
I think your creativity is amazing, and I enjoyed it a lot.
This is a "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" May Raid Review!