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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
four

This is a nice and catchy anecdote on proper attitude. I agree with your take and as a reader I can get a grasp your inner understanding on Almighty and the inner peace your have achieved. The word unnecessary and never be happy were indeed impressive. Please do post more work of yours to enlighten reader your pure and humble beliefs... sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DragonBlue

This is an impressive and rather appealing collections of c-Notes you have here. As a audience I can appreciate your inner finesse and eye for details to dispay eye capturing and yet popular themes with unique mixture of balance and inner belief so very necessary for such endeavour. I wish you all the best, and relish the creativity so sophisticated and appealing.. Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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J. Robert Kane

This is a nice and interesting thriller with nice and structured plot, the events described did catch attention of reader's from varied culture. I must commend you writing such strong and yet subtle plot to keep reader's guessing till the last moment about the interconnectivity and defined unfolding of the event. The accident and it's summarisation did leave some room to exploit the inherent issues causing the same. Overall a thrilling take with room to introduce subplot to further elucidate the hidden agenda. A great take with perfect unfolding of events...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Ryan Bohannon

This is a nice and structured story I have savored. As a reader I like the anecdotes and single agenda of greed in the introduction. I am sure you will do justice to the introductory structure of the story. I am looking forward for reading and promptly posting my reviews as well. Wish you all the best...sindbad


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Review of Game Models  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Jeffhans

This is a nice and balanced take on game model. As a reader with limited knowledge about game and altered reality it brings, I was impressed with your grasp of experience and writing capabilities, and feel there is a room to expound and simplify the purpose of the game model. This story being a mundane one can unfold to a legacy that remains struck in your brain, however you need to jumpstart the adrenaline and happiness quotient. The dynamism of the story can really unleash the creativity that is so very well sampled here. You need to embrace every aspect of the game model that you have highlighted so well. In short the emotional and recall moments a reader needs, has to be finetuned for the target audience. Wish you all the best..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
This poem in my previous review was on talent and the reasons it goes wasted...however the new perspective is looking at this poem from life's perspective. Its a known fact that if we utilise 20 percent of our day productively, the chance of reaching our goal improves dramatically. In young age the talent wasted affects us marginally, however post 20-35 years are most productive year of our life. In these years we need a foolproof system to utilise our talent for maximum productivity. You have expressed this progressive methods to stop wasting talent from young age to middle age to old age in a beautiful manner. This new perspective was indeed worth noticing and appreciating as well. With all the regards...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
Fifthwood

This is a interesting and I will say the best among the sequels on corporate war. The way the suspense and flow of action of the event unfolded as a reader I remained glued and mesmerized till the end. The thrilling events like-

I took off running down the hallway to the stairs. On my way, I noticed a trail of blood on the floor, leading the way to the elevator. Mara must have been hit by one of the security officers. Five flights of stairs between me and the main floor. I took the steps down two at a time. Halfway down the flight, I would jump over the rail to the next flight of stairs. Even though they were grazes, each one seared as I pounded down the stairs. Adrenaline helped me move past the pain.

There were many thrilling unfolding of events that did leave a deep impression. Thank you for another excellent sequel. Although I love everything you write, your art of unfolding a plot and compartmentalizing 3 -4 events and once there is a unfolding of the plot, you give readers their money worth of thrill and excitement with no repitative quotient. I wish you all the best and its a matter of time before your popularity graph will rise. Its all due to spontainity you bring in your stories.

sindbad




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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Fifthwood
This sequel has your typical signature, as a reader I can fathom the things going on in Johns mind,did feel his spontanoeus action very unique like- I complied and the second guard approached me. He reached into my jacket and pulled both of my sidearms from their holsters. He then felt around my belt removing my explosive charges, knives, internet goggles, and cell. Then feeling down the length of my legs he stopped at my ankles. Whipping up my left pant leg, the Officer removed a small gun. He pulled up my other pant leg where he found my stunner grenade.

And I am sure will be popular once the sequels are accepted by much larger audience. As in the previous story, grammar, spelling and punctuation were perfect. I did think it seemed a bit creative in the end celebration in private jet, like in criminal minds a very popular TV series.


Overall: Thank you for sharing another excellent read. I love your characters as well as your writing style, its very suave, and I will definitely be going through the other sequels as well in corporate wars.

sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
Fifthwood
I have already reviewed two of your corporate war sequel and am very impressed with the diversity you bring in each of the episodes. This sequel John has suffered a personal loss, and yet there are underlying activity and dynamics going on you have captured all this is so few and interesting manner. I liked the fight sequence so aptly captured here like-
The standing officer raised his baton above his head. I stepped into him and crossed my arm against his raised hand. Reaching behind his raised arm and grasping my hands together I yanked down hard and fast. The officer yelped as his shoulder popped from the socket and he crumpled backwards to the ground.

As I said this is very well written, and not just in terms of spelling and grammar, but in the subject matter as well and most important of all, you did a nice job of gradually building up the tension and suspense with balanced amount of action. It almost reads like novel like Jack Ryan, and you obviously some writing experience in your background.
Very well done, my friend, and quite an impressive photo.

Sindbad


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Review of A Moment's Peace  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
J. Robert Kane

This is a nice and interesting paranormal story you have written and as a reader I did feel the plight of Angelo. The begining of this story with sudden twist did keep me hooked till the end. You did a great job with all of this, particularly the ending, but what I really liked was sudden mysterious events unfolding like -
Having made up his mind, Angelo hurried the fifteen or so paces it took to reach the dumpster. Frantically, his eyes swept the edges of the thick blue metal for his keys. He looked around it, then crouched as best he could to look underneath also. Sickly, cold perspiration wet his hairline, his upper lip. He could feel the rapid pounding of his heart reverberating in his ears, in his jaw and arms. What karmic justice it would be, Angelo considered, should he drop dead of a heart attack right here and now.

Such capture of essence of whats going on is indeed a rare quality. Great piece, Robert! The spelling and grammar was flawless, and the whole thriller read professionally! You obviously have some writing background, and I look forward to reading more of your items!
It was a pleasure to read this, and may your day be merry and bright!

Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
Fifthwood
This is a nice and interesting black op thriller and Johns role has been interesting and rather perfect assasin. I couldn’t possibly pass up a short story involving assassination, could I!

I am not sure if this story is corporate war. From the point of the Sci fi, it has to belong to the suspense genre, but the way you presented it and the way I look at it, the story has definitely a sense of thril. I think from now on, the way John handled Frank, I’ll wonder on what can strike me in stealth mode.

The point of view the story is told is brilliant. Who’d think of planning, acknowledge of perfect time to strike! Moreover, their dialogue is so believable, and as characters, they get to a reader; at least, they got to me.

The plot is clear and follows a logical and chronological order. The story construction as to the premise, setup, setting, and flow is excellent. The hidden conflict that fools the main characters (the assasination) is perfect, too, together with the outward reason for the story being of commiting a perfect assassination in corporate scenario.

I think your creativity is amazing, and I enjoyed it a lot.

Sindbad


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Review of The Diagnosis  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
J.E. Allen
This is an incredibly sad, but well-written medical story of your dealing with cancer and its cause of death. Your piece is well done, flows nicely and evoked strong feelings in me as I read it.I liked how you structured your piece like- " Duncan nodded and said, “One last thing. My wife will have some jewelry on top of her dresser upstairs and there is a bit of cash in my office, inside the wall safe. The combination, is 18-34-17. The police will think I told you before you killed me.”
“Did you bring the money?”
He reached into his pocket and removed the folded envelope and gave it to the man. As the envelope left his hand, Duncan experienced a sudden wave of calm. The feeling washed over him, just as he felt his problems fall away.
“Go home, McCafferty. Enjoy your last day on earth.” The man turned and walked away"

Thank you for sharing your touching story and congratulation for the recognition you received in this well structured story.

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!

Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu

Your poetry of different sports and their challenges are so creatively expressed in all your poetry. As a readr I can appreciate your passion for sports and its nuances that can be observed or highlighted by people who are intricately associated with promotion of sports and healthy life it advocates. Overall this poem entails quality and frame of mind and body to be at utmost level of delivery for any sucess or definative results in competitive sports..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a nice and yet strong poem inspiring under achievers and over achievers alike. The self beleif and its benefits have been beautifully expressed here. Passion, education, aspiration inspiration and all attitude and efforts have been expressed poetically and intelligently. Overall a nice and creative poem to promote some semblance of a last try by the underdogs...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Kieran1998

This is a nice and tricky story with a twist that leave a nice and positive impression to the readers. It is enchanting to look at tree trunk. Nicely written details with lovely reflections, good descriptions and like the way katie anticipated and handled the situation. Easy to follow, good tone and the words flow well like Just then a girl walking passed spotted the strange sight of Katie's lover half sticking out of the tree and decided to go over to investigate. Creative, impressive and a pleasure to read. Always..

Sindbad


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Review of Find a way away  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Arch

This is a nice and rather emotional take on song that has instrumental mainly piano and visuals leave a deep impression as well. Easy to follow with nicely written details as well as lovely reflections. Looks like you spent a lot of time enjoying your favorite music group like nine inch nails. Impressive and heart touching absorption of lyrics and mood. A perfect and well balanced poem..Wish you all the best..Sindbad


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Review of Cruel Fate  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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April Desiree

This is a nice and yet a rather sad poem that hits a reader on love lost. The subtle and perfect nuances of love and heart has been perfectly represented here. I love how, i couldn't stop thinking about my own situation while reading through, I am immersed in the words and resonate with them and what they mean shreds would rip me to if we’re to part and say....
well, i am just gonna read it again. A well balanced poem and I am sure will give you recognition as well...Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Rodney Grey

I have always fascinated with the way you bring up the basic structure in your book. I always adored your sensitivity to minor things that makes a story interesting and readers hooked on to go to the next sequel and enjoy the unfolding of unique and thrilling plot. Shadow of the dark one is indeed one such story wherein you have excelled in maintaining this balance. I am indeed eager to move to the next chapter, also thrilled with Rokos observation and perfect summation of the events so wonderfully penned. Overall a masterpiece being unfolded with lot of research and contemplation to make it interesting simple and reader friendly. Great job...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu

Indeed this is a nice and balanced poem on complex feelings. As a reader one does sympathize with not going the full length and faltering due to devil of a diversion the life gives with noisesome woes. I have always liked your direct shooting from the hoisted and giving reader the real deal in a simple and succulent manner. Did use some unusual words like undue or risque or traverse. All this shows the direct and yet meaningful take on feelings and their complexities. Overall a bold and rather poignant take...sindbad


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Review of Love Hurts  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
OOT™
This is a nice short and poignant take on love and its transformation to a heartache in so few and balanced manner. The creative fibonacci sequel gives this poem a commendable appearance. A beautiful piece of love that you have written here with a balanced route of broken promises to heartache. I see lots sentiments here, with mentioning of foundation and pivotal take on care,
overall this poem is beautifully done...Sindbad

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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu

I have beena great fan of your poetry and have read and reviewed all inspiring poem with motivating and refreshing take of different and yet critical subjects in our life. Your words in detail makes this piece come alive. It's amazing how the values and inner poise, maturity, quality, and ability takes over one's body makes our mundane existence special or turning red light into green. You made this piece come alive, showing the battle from within with performance driven for an athelete in a competetive arena. Amazing job!

Sindbad


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Review of Beautiful Inside  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Moomintroll

This again like your other writing is deep and highlights facts and inherent matter of people we have overlooked, our apathy to them has a hevy toll as well. The love of God shines through in your piece with words like-
He found joy, and true love, searched for God up above, knowing peace, yet enduring a war
A father, a son, a hero when young, supporting the poor and the tired
Once loved and adored, by many who saw, the man who is beautiful inside.
What a beautiful picture you have painted of His unconditional love and compassion. This is well written and I feel the love and beautiful soul not the outer appearance from this wonderful and to some extent emotional piece. Amazing job...Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Moomintroll

This is a nice and simple take on heaven, hell or earth with a truth-sharing piece delivering us from the concepts of imaginary hells and falsehood. I believe in so many ways, we all have been at this point of contemplation, about our existence. Your piece is so heartfelt and I know without a doubt this is written from the soul. I know deep down in my heart, whatever you have expressed from different religion captures the essence of our inner thoughts in religious matter. Your piece has hit very close to home on human beliefs and take on a subject that is more metaphysical. Thank you for writing this very amazing piece...Sindbad



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Review of I Live in a Box  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jace

This is a nice and balanced story on life in a small town, the basic inherent habits with controlled opinion. You did a terrific job of describing your character and their humoros relationship through imaginative style. You also managed to add couple of personal items that I as a reader could easily refer to. The smooth flow of writing was more than believable, and I could tell that you are well accustomed to the lifestyle so well articulated. You captured my interest with the first line and held it throughout. And the last line blew me away as I never expected you woulnt want to live there. Great job!

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Review of Cusp  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Catch-up Fyn
This is a nice and creative expression of nature and your sensitive observation. As a reader I can experience the cool breeze, or crabapple tree shedding summer, all this comes to a picturous and freezing moments so creatively captured. Excellent impression..Sindbad


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