PoisonIvy's (solace13) Reviews

I've had similar escapades with siblings. I could totally relate. But for this story you might want to have a more childish view since the narrator is six, after all

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#3611645

Review of As long as...

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I can feel your love of your father

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#3611626

Review of Into the Wild Black Yonder

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

you might want to change your wording of "My body is s p a g h e t t i f i e d, elongated beyond perception." Other wise I loved it.
Keep on writing.

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Review of The Fat Outlaw

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

This really made me laugh. I liked the way you made something usually so sad funny. Thanks for writing.

-Solace

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#3508845

Review of The Epic of Sigmund Leatherhide: Part I

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

please write part two please. Like now. iwant to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#3497578

Review of Self-Discovery at Midnight

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)

What is it about? this poem really left me confused so if you can please reply with an answer

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#3497572

Review of Pegasus’ Ordeal

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Excellent writing............... But you need to work on spelling.

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#3496633

Review of " YOU WERE THERE "

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Beautiful. Keep writing. The world shouldn't be denied reading your work with awe.