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Review of TAZ Got Lost!  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this. I thought he was looking for the family dog or something to take with him. Emotional support animal or something of the like. This was funny. I love their relationship. I wish real relationships could be more like this. I think more people would be happier if they were.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the premise of this. I struggle at times to make poetry work out at times. Sometimes I can be inspired and make something good. And then to take that furtherand make a song out of it. Takes a bit of talent to carry it off properly. I give props to all who can make this work.
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Review of Childhood Home  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love this, really nostalgic. How we look back on childhood can be a bit biased. Because how you remember it and how it actually was can be different. I like the imagery here. It's very nice and gives good vibes. Nature is fun to use in poetry and I think that you really incorporate the use of nature well.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this. Gave me "Frozen" vibes but also a little of the elemnts, especially fire. Logically,you think,you can't really freeze flames can you? I like that it makes you think a little bit. I like the without you I was inconplete narrative gping on here. I like those and I think you pulled it off well here. Also, rhymes done well. Thank you for sharing.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This makes me think of "Brother bear". It has a similar vibe to it. Some of these stories are really interesting. It's interesting when you look at how certain stories have things in common or have similar elements. I like reading these kinds of things. They can be very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing this.
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Review of Off the Cuff  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Parts of this sound like you could make into a song. Well done getting the rhyme down. Not so easy to pull off all the time. I think you carried this off nicely. I also like the title for the poem. I feels like the speaker is free now and can move forward.
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Review of Don't I Know You?  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a lil bit hard to follow. Idk if it was someone had dementia and forgot or just had been sometime since they had seen each other. It was an intriguing way to lead things. Sounds like it could really pick up from here. If this is a short snippet, I think there's room to expand. If not, it certainly got my attention.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really loved this. Such nice romantic sentiment here. I really like idea of a happily ever after that may actually last. Reality can be a real bummer so I think that may be part of the reason I like a good happy ending. It's noce to see some optimism where love is concerned every once in a while. You carried this off really well.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,liked the rhyming in this poem. I like moon's shadows refernce. I think tthe face imagery was well done too. It's not alsways easy to make a decent rhyming poem. I think short and sweet is the right idea. I think you carried this off fairly well.
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Review by BlueMoon
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Honestly, I like the gif that comes with this. The intro helps draw you in. I wasn't paying attention and may clicked on something w/o reading it carefully. I feel you on the laundry front. I got laundry that needs doung that I'm mostly avoiding. Maybe I'll actually get arpund to it now you've mentioned it.

So thanks for this, it was a nice little distraction.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was really interesting and pretty straight forward as far as the do's and don'ts go. If you didn't know where to start, I think this would be a good resource to at least get a feel for things. It does seem to be a well- thought out and precise way to writing a query letter. Certainly food for thought.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
You know I pricked my finger on a rose before. Not a good time. That's how I learned roses do have thorns. I think it's sad alot of us feel we have to go through life playing make-believe. It's sad when you feel like there's no one you can just be you with. I'd hope most people would have someone to turn to if needed.
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Review by BlueMoon
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Now I'm hungry.I can definitely do an omelette. There's so many and they're very good. That's right up there with french toast. I don't usually see butterflies except now and again they pop up for a visit.It's nice to think of happier things. You've reallybgiven me a more positive mind now.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow,I'm not sure what to say after that.Sometimes people can be really awful. Hopefully, you were able to get some good memories with it.I'm glad you weren't hurt worse from that incident. Sometimes the actions of people can't be fathomed.

Welcome to WDC,hope you feel like part of the community before long.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, I think there's somerhing to say for being short and sweet and to the point.Trying to read some poems is a challenge.Shakespeare can be hard till you can get a handle on what he's saying.I don't consider myself a poet.I have to be rather inspired for that.

Thanks for sharing. I'll be sure any future poetry gets to the point.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Food allergies are definitely something you have to be careful with.I think people with nut allergies have something similar. It's amazing how many things you have to watch out for when you can only take in certain foods. It's usually not something you actively think about until you have to.

I wish you well and that you stay healthy during this time.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting, a little unsure if this is.I guess it's meant to be a translation of a rhyming poem. It sounds really sad and still very lovely. Any particular reason this stood out to you? Sometimes it can be for even English natives to try and tackle grammar and the like.Trying to explain all that isn't any easier.

Thanks for sharing.
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Review by BlueMoon
In affiliation with Mental Health Writers Alliance  
Rated: E | (4.0)
You know your poem really resonates with what's wrong with the world of today. It's very me centric and how does this benefit me. it's not supposed to be like that. Ideally, we're meant to help each other out. Make the world a better place then when we came into it.The world seems to have lost sight of that. Sadly, we live in the world that is and we all most make the best of it however we can.
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Review by BlueMoon
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Anything involving quests can be awesome. You certainly got my attention. I felt bad for Albert when he said ''By myself?'' It's harder to be brave on your own when you don't have the support. Certainly a good group of characters to keep the story going and worth while for the reader.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the idea of a hermit convention. But the hermit at the end is probably right. People who want to be by themselves will likely stay that way. Every once in a while people should be able to interact with others when they have a chance. Some may be more in need of it than others. Overall,an interesting idea and a good read.
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Review by BlueMoon
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was really lovely and so profound in a way. It really gets behind the idea of inner beauty. The soul of a person, their core inner being. Idk if I ever heard it mentioned in such a way before. It's all so peaceful and airy and I just like the tone, it comes off so light.
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Review of best friend  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I can relate to this alot. I also have two good friends. One of them moved to another state.It's harder to keep in touch when great distance is a factor. I'm happy for them but still.I hope you were able to have many happy memories and still have more to come in future.
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Review of Air Travel  
Review by BlueMoon
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
That's actually pretty good poetry.Getting it flow just right can be a hastle but you pulled it off quite well. Airports aren't alot of fun anyway.Then you add scurity and it can turn into a nightmare.I tend to opt for the aisle or at least the window seat. Never found the middleseat to be ideal.
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Review of build something  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Idk why but I found this rather profound. People can definitely tell alot more through your actions than anything that comes from your mouth.Be the change you wish to see in the world. You don't have to save the planet but maybe you can many small things that do alot of good. It doesn't always have to be a grand gesture. Sometimes little things we do can make a big difference.



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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The conversation between the narrator and the lion cubs is interesting. I don't know about the roaring/boring lines you could probably cut that out if you wanted to. It's not till the 'sphinxes' line comes up that this is more evident it's something more than just lion cubs. I guess the ending makes a bit more sense knowing that. So really, it's more a guy trying to pick up girls. Unique way of going about it. Idk how I feel about the last four lines but it could just be me.
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