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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow! If I what to say. I thought you were trying to say a name at first. After the volcano devastated Canary island, it hits a bit differently now. I think they debunked being hit by a ginat tsunami. So there's that. This could be an interesting short animation. I certainly wasn't expecting the ending.
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Review of For Kings  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,this is very good.Kings certainly had to make some tough choices.This was very vivid in my mind as I read it. You can just imagine being there,witnessing it all go down.

During this week,WDC is celebrating being able to be around for another year.Maybe you'll get a chance to look around and have some fun. I hope you stick around and continue to be inspired in your writing.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,
I'm always intrigued why there seems to be such a fascination with weight gain. Not sure what the draw is but to each their own. I like Pokemon so this could be interesting. I liked the thumbnail for this as well. Hope this goes well for you. I think it has plenty of potential to it.
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Review of [ The Machine ]  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the idea behind this. It sounds like something worthy of being a twilight zone episode. Humans try to automate or turn everything digital. Not sure how well that translates where love is concerned. Unless you count online dating. Seems a mixed bag. But the computer/program or whatever,is only so good as those that made it. Doesn't really leave you with high hopes does it?
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think that's an interesting concept. Some poems can be pretty angsty, so I think they may be great for songs if they got the right fit. I haven't found poetry to be the easiest thing, but sometimes when I'm inspired maybe. Don't know if I've ever written anything worth putting music to. But it's definitely something I'll be thinking of now.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,
Thanks for sharing your work.
I think the first two paragraphs set things off to a good start. It when we get to the third blurb things get a bit tangled. Maybe since it's altogether and I'm more accustomed to things being spaced out, but it looks like it could be cleaned up a bit. But otherwise, I liked this.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
We were coming back from an outing, and just the construction in progress. It's all over and some of it can be kind of scary going through it. I think we got lost at one point, since we missed a turn at one point. You can still see the water, and some greenery that's so far held out. I get what you're saying though. All this other stuff going on, can take away from the natural beauty all around us. It never does seem to ever get finished either.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's funny. I'm currently reading about a girl who goes to a quilting retreat in Scotland. I guess quilting block is similar to writing block. Maybe you could sketch a few ideas down, as you have them & look back on it for inspiration. I know quilts can be pretty elaborate. I hope your muse returns soon so you can return to doing something you enjoy.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello, I like your 3d figure near the end. I think the story was pretty cute. My brother likes turtles too. My 4th grade teacher had a turtle in her class. They're such interesting creatures and there's such a variety of them out there. This was really nice to read, near the end of my day. Keep up the good work.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the brevity of this. Short and sweet. It makes me think of a song. I do wish well for my friends and family. This has some really nice vibes to it. I hope you continue to share in the future. Poetry can be a hard thing to master. I think you're on the right track.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love haikus. They're kind of hard to do sometimes. I have to be really inspired for poetry. I can appreciate it others who have a knack for it. I like nature haikus. There's a lot to use there. I like that your haiku is about flowers. It's very nicely done.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this, I think I needed to see it. I just me ta group on campus that are teaching and learning about God together. It's hard to really find that, especially college. It got me reading the bible again. I think part of it is the socializing aspect. It's hard to meet people and grow your relationship with God. This way I can kind of do both.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I get what you're saying about self love. I think some is necessary to move forward in life. If you don't value yourself, it can lead down an unhappy road ahead. Grief takes all kinds of forms, and effects everyone differently.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was sometimes funny and also insightful. People will disagree on what's considered a classic. Just look at movies. I agree there's some books labeled classics that I don't think alot of people would miss if they were retired.I always worried if I did publish something if it would be a "bad book." But I guess that would vary by individual.How about something inspiring for future generations to look up to. Appreciate the food for thought.
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Review by BlueMoon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very profound. If I didn't read the title I wouldn't be sure what it was about. I never used to have a "phone addiction". But since I was upgraded I may change my stance on that. Technology has its uses. But if we allow ourselves to get sucked in, it can have a negative impact on us overall. I think it helps to cut down when possible or just put the phone down and take a walk. For our own sake and our well being.
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Review of State of Mind  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very true, especially in today's world. I feel sorry for young people that look at people on social media and feel there's some unrealistic expectation to live up to. Alot of it is either staged or misleading. It can't be healthy to have your life run on likes,or how active you are on social media. There's much more to life than that. I think your poem sums that up well.
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Review of Poetry's Faith  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was very nice Prosperous Snow. I like to think I feel God in nature sometimes. There's just kind of a peaceful feeling about it. I try and remember there's a world out there and to try and be an active part of it.It's easy to get caught up in the world. I think wgen we slow down and be calm, it gives him the chance to speak to us.If we're willing to listen.
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Review of TAZ Got Lost!  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this. I thought he was looking for the family dog or something to take with him. Emotional support animal or something of the like. This was funny. I love their relationship. I wish real relationships could be more like this. I think more people would be happier if they were.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the premise of this. I struggle at times to make poetry work out at times. Sometimes I can be inspired and make something good. And then to take that furtherand make a song out of it. Takes a bit of talent to carry it off properly. I give props to all who can make this work.
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Review of Childhood Home  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love this, really nostalgic. How we look back on childhood can be a bit biased. Because how you remember it and how it actually was can be different. I like the imagery here. It's very nice and gives good vibes. Nature is fun to use in poetry and I think that you really incorporate the use of nature well.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this. Gave me "Frozen" vibes but also a little of the elemnts, especially fire. Logically,you think,you can't really freeze flames can you? I like that it makes you think a little bit. I like the without you I was inconplete narrative gping on here. I like those and I think you pulled it off well here. Also, rhymes done well. Thank you for sharing.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This makes me think of "Brother bear". It has a similar vibe to it. Some of these stories are really interesting. It's interesting when you look at how certain stories have things in common or have similar elements. I like reading these kinds of things. They can be very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing this.
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Review of Off the Cuff  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Parts of this sound like you could make into a song. Well done getting the rhyme down. Not so easy to pull off all the time. I think you carried this off nicely. I also like the title for the poem. I feels like the speaker is free now and can move forward.
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Review of Don't I Know You?  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a lil bit hard to follow. Idk if it was someone had dementia and forgot or just had been sometime since they had seen each other. It was an intriguing way to lead things. Sounds like it could really pick up from here. If this is a short snippet, I think there's room to expand. If not, it certainly got my attention.
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Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really loved this. Such nice romantic sentiment here. I really like idea of a happily ever after that may actually last. Reality can be a real bummer so I think that may be part of the reason I like a good happy ending. It's noce to see some optimism where love is concerned every once in a while. You carried this off really well.
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