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Review of Soul Searching  
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
What a sad piece. It was very touching. You've really used words that move the reader. I like that. My favorite part was this:

"Heavenly beauty that stuns
an earthbound seeking mind,
which only sees a dark night
not his soul welcomed home."

Great work! Keep writing!
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Review of I Will Not Go  
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Great poem. Very inspirational! After your parting comment, I'm left to wonder exactly what the details are regarding this. However, it sounds like a personal matter and I wish you the best of luck. Truth is on your side, my friend. And keep writing!!!
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
This was very impressive. The only part I would question is where you mention the room getting smaller. It sounds like the subject is resigned to his/her fate instead of feeling closed in and restless. But that's just my point of view. Otherwise, it's really an excellent piece. I liked it very much. Good job!
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