*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/sunnie
Review Requests: ON
3,307 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... -1- 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ... Next
1
1
Review of Jesus Loves Me  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. Very creative, unique and clever poem as I thought you might burst out that song 🎵 yes, Jesus loves ❤️ 😍 💖 ❣️ 💕 the Bible tells me so! I love the ways you tell how Jesus loves you.
You really have away with words as you really do draw your readers in well you sure draw me and I love it! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
2
2
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I forgot to do this before and love this wonderful place. It is very adventurous and it was a wonderful tool in helping me to write! Love that!! I love that image at the top and I look forward to doing this adventure again. This is one of the most creative places I have seen and been a part of...

I am donating 50,000 gift points which I will email to you as I don't see here where to place the donation!

Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do!
3
3
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I absolutely love your activity page here your main page. I think it is well thought out and very organized. It is very easy to follow, as the adventure rules are very clear and easy to follow and understand. The magical main castle, I love that castle! Love the gallery chamber this is where I got to know each fairy and it was a wonderful time too! The Key is what you have to get to go to the next portal! I love the details about the keys that you put in your forum as well again very detailed and organized, I love it! Oh, then you tease us with your "rarest trinkets"! And you give details on them as well, Such a charmer! Then there's the map of the magical land, very cool and nice to have too as you also lay out the details of the map as well and it makes it easier to get around. Then you add the adventurers that are doing this wonderful activity and I have to say I for one absolutely love it! Oh yes and then there are the goodies you call "Over All Rewards" which are very generous and you even give the breakdown for the category rewards very cool. Oh then comes the high-ranked fairies ~ And then you were most kind enough to let your adventurers use a blogging image and two reviewing images very cool! Love that too. You also include a very important note for those who want to join in, nice touch. And then at the bottom, you show each location, all of which are very charming and exciting! What a great activity this really is. Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do! A five-star for sure.

Adventurer Review Square Banner
4
4
Review of Other Lands  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good evening! I thought that I would come on by for a short little visit with you and as I did I came across this piece that you call "Other Lands". A short little piece I see you enter for the contest express it in eight. Nice job. I like that you also put the prompt at the bottom of your poem. You are very talented and I really enjoyed your piece full it is a little piece but it is packed with information and your sure did reel me in as you weave your words so cleverly. I see a story here and I would love to know what happens next! Keep sharing and more of all keep writing!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
5
5
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good evening! I thought I would by for a short little visit and as I did I came across your poem you call "The Mythical Village of Luna". And as I came in I found an interesting, unique, clever poem that unfolds like a story as you spin your words ever so clear painting a picture for me to clearly see. Love that. I also noticed your notes at the bottom for all your readers to see as well. I like when others do that and we can see who the contest is for and that way we can check out the place as well. Keep sharing and more so fall keep writing.

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
6
6
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would just come on by for a short little visit and as I came on in I found your clever, unique, and creative poem that you call "My Heart Sinks When I Behold" Your title and your description both drew me in. You do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so clearly that your readers not only feel but also see what you are saying. And I also like the information that you put at the bottom for all your readers to see as well. I do have to say that you caught my attention right from the start. Nice job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
7
7
Review of Mount Vesuvius  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good evening! I just thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I came across your clever and creative poem that you call "Mount Vesuvius". I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end and I like the feel of the poem as well. You really sure do have a way with words as you paint a picture as you spin your web of words for me to really clearly see and also feel. In your third paragraph at the end where it says "all that I could only see in my dreams" may look better if you put that down to finish off that third paragraph, I know it would look better too.

Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
8
8
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would just come on by for a little short visit and as I did I came across your creative, unique, and clever poem you call "Our Journey's End." And I also like your description and they both drew me in. I loved the way it made me feel as you paint a very clear picture for me to see as you spin your web of words ever drawing me in. I absolutely love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I love how it all fits together as well. I would have to say that the last two paragraphs of your poem are my most favorite not to take away any other part of your poem and how fitting for you to end with "His Amazing Grace!"
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
9
9
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a short little visit and as I did I found your unique, clever, and creative poem that you call "Judgemental Eyes." And my first impression was WOW! I can feel your pain and people are so cruel! I love the way the poem does flow and oh how it makes me feel. You really do have a way with words as you spin your words so real painting a picture that I can clearly see and feel. I really like this poem from the very beginning to the very end. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
10
10
Review of Blind Date  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a short little visit as and as I did I found your unique, creative, and clever poem you call "Blind date" As I came on in I found that you really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words even painting a picture that I could clearly see and I have to have I really enjoyed your poem from beginning to the very in and it all fits as it is and I could not possibly pick one line for my favorite. I am assuming this was written for a contest per your note at the end. God is good! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
11
11
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would go on by for a little short visit and as I di I found this creative, unique, and a one of a kind poem that you call "Time For Change - In changing Time..." My first impression is yes! I really enjoyed this poem from the very beginning to the very end. You sure do have a way with words as you weave your web so well as you even draw me in and you have left me wanting me wanting more! I can feel this poem as if you have you pour out your heart and soul into it! Great job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star rating for sure!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
12
12
Review of It's Classified  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good afternoon! I thoght I would come on by for a short little visit as I did I came about this piece that you call "It's Classified".

I will have to say that I was drawn in by your title and also your description ~ "Hand It Over". And as I begin to read your short story you had me from the start as you weave your webs ever so cleverly, uniquely and so creatively by your words. You completely lured me in as I continued to read. I fully enjoyed this little story and the line I love the most is:

What is your name? I'm sorry sir that is classified information! And also when George went around the desk and pulled a plug to which the robot fell over on the desk and the next word George says is: now give me that file! I love it!

You are full of talent and you know how to lure your readers in and you let me wanting more please tell me there is more! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!

Adventurer Review Square Banner






*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
13
13
Review of The Stranger  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good afternoon! I thought I might stop on in for a short little visit with you and as I did I came across this piece that you have written that you call "The Stranger" My first is impression: WOW! I was hooked from the start as you weave your web of words luring me further in as your story unfolds every so cleverly and most uniquely and creatively as you build the stream as you left wanting more yes I see in your description that this is unfinished and must know when it is complete for I must how the rest of the story goes and ends! I love it from the very start clear to the very end as you build my excitement with each and every line! Great job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. I will have to give this a 4 star but only because it is not finished so when you do lemme know I for sure will come to finish reading it and change the rating from a 4 star to a 5 star for sure!

{center:2273290-50%}


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
14
14
Review of Poor Tom  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good afternoon! I thought I would just stop on by for a short little visit with you today and as I did I found this piece that you call:
"Poor Tom" as I began to read I like the feel and the tone of this poem and I love the rhythm and rhyme that unfolds as a story unfolds in this cleverly, unique, creative poem. I really enjoyed this poem from the very beginning to the very end and most of all you left me wanting more! I did not see any errors at all. And I love that you posted a note for more information for your readers to know.
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
15
15
Review of forever falling  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little while and visit with you and as I came on in I found this that you call "Forever Falling" I was into this dark emotional heartfelt part that really had me feeling some kind of way while emotions soared as you really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so cleverly and most creatively as you leave me wanting more and more! There must be more to this poem and I can clearly see it as you do paint this very clear picture for me to see. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
16
16
Review of Coffee Spuddle  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would come on in for a little short visit and I am so glad that I did for I came upon your poem you call "Coffee Spuddle"

My first impression was flat out laughing out loud this was so funny I could not stop! I love love love this poem you have so cleverly and uniquely spun your web of words to make a poem like a story that unfolds and you really do have a way with words as you know just how to draw your readers in and best of all you left laughing and wanting even more!

Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.

A five-star for sure...

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
17
17
Review of Break  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would come by for just a short little visit and as I did I found your poem you call: "Break". I really enjoyed the poem that you have cleverly created as you spin your web of words as you drew me in and you also left me wanting more! You make a good point on what makes summer broken. I really enjoyed your whole poem and I would have to say that the very first line is what stood out to me the most. "You can't call a break something that is not broken." There is just something about that line. I like it!

I also like that you posted at the bottom of your page the prompt information. Good job. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
18
18
Review of First drum set  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening! I thought I would come in for a little short visit and as I did I found this cute little poem that you wrote for one of your friends. I love the title and the description as they both drew me in. I love the style of this poem and the way it rhymes in rhythm and I must admit it made you did make me chuckle a time or time. Yes, I can hear the little boy bang on his drum making a lot of noise and I can see his mom and dad with plugs in their ears as well as you have cleverly weaved your web of words painting a picture for me to clearly see. I also like that you put a little note at the bottom of your poem giving more information on your friend and now two boys.
Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
19
19
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening I thought I would stop by for a little short visit and as I did I came across your poem your call: "I Love To Walk With Grandpa" Your title along with your description "A child's memory of days with grandpa" is what drew me in.

And with your first paragraph, I was completely in. You sure do have a way with words as you paint a clear picture for me to see and not just hear as you spin your web of words so cleverly and creatively.

I really enjoyed your poem and I liked the way it made me feel.

Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
20
20
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning! I just thought I would come on by for a short little visit and I came across your blog folder and had to look inside and I chose to come on in your "The Daily Journey In The Life Of A Writer" Love the title! I looked over your entries and I love how you put videos and all of that in them which makes me feel like I am welcome. I also see you write or have written here for blog city and that is a wonderful group to be in. I especially love this entry: "Novel Factory's Ultimate Character Questionaire and could really use a copy of it! You are very creative and very organized. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.


Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
21
21
Review of Love Mends  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning! Just thought I would come in for a short little visit and as I did I came across your sweet short poem you call: "Love Mends" What a clever, creative little poem you have here I like the way it flows and I like the way it makes me feel. Even though it is short it is to the point and that is all that matters as you spin your web of words so well luring your readers in! Your first line made me think of that song: LOVE HURTS! Isn't that funny? And then you end with Love mends. My thought at least is what they say. But I love how you ended on that line. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.

Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
22
22
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning! I thought I would swing by for a short little visit and as I did I came across your poem that you call: "And Nobody Objected" My first impression: Yes! So true! Bush did a disservice to America and um he was again a republican! They seem to always do what is wrong instead of what is right! Falsehood indeed. You really do have a way with words as your spin your web most cleverly as you weave in the truth so creatively! You even left me wanting more and I certainly do love that! Great Job! Keep sharing and most of all keep writing! A five-star for sure!


{center:2273291-50%}


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
23
23
Review of A rainy night  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good morning! I thought I would come by for a little while and as I did I found your story you call: "A Rainy Night" And I found a story that unfolded really clever, creative, adventure, and my favorite rain! You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so precisely that you left me wanting more and I was so drawn into your story and I could see a picture so clearly in my head as your painted this story so well! Keep right on sharing and most of all keep writing!


{center:2273291-50%}


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
24
24
Review of Offspring  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little bit and I found your poem "Offspring"

My first impression: WOW!

As I came on in I have to have it had me right from the start! As you certainly do have a way with words as you really do paint a very clear picture for me to see and I like how this poem really makes me feel I would have to say that this part is what really stood out the most: the woman veiled in black. How she resembles me, floating beneath the weight of water. But I really do love the full poem in full as it perfectly fits together! Keep sharing and keep writing! A five-star rating for sure!


Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
25
25
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good afternoon! I thought I would come on by for a little short visit and I found your poem: "Toys For Poor Kids" as I come on in I found an interesting, clever, unique, creative, and truthful poem as it is like a little story that also unfolds as you have clever spun your web of words drawing this reading in as you paint a very clear picture that I can see for sure as you really do have a way with words! I do have to say that I enjoyed each and every line and I could not possibly pick just one line as a favorite for all fits perfectly together. Keep sharing and most of all Keep writing!



Adventurer Review Square Banner


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
1,203 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 49 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/sunnie