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Review of PREVAIL  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
{item:For Days Of Sunshine

Per your request you have been gifted a week of "Days Of Sunshine" 
I hope you have a wonderful day *Smile*

I was both curious and drawn into your poem Prevail by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a poem full of emotion, hurt, honesty, pain, well thought out, well written, clever and most creative.
I really enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great job.
You really do have a way with words as you weave your web or words drawing your readers in and you sure know how to keep your reader's attention. Love that as you paint a very clear picture with your words.
I am giving you very creative poem a rating of five-stars.

Courtesy of "Days Of Sunshine" 


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Review of God loves you  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a wonderful, delightful, honest, a one of a kind, sincere, open, heartfelt and very creative poem.
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great job!
I really did enjoy the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end. Isn't great to know that God loves us? I sure think so.
You really do have a way with words as you weave your web or words drawing your readers in.
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
I am giving your wonderful poem a rating of five-stars.

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for entry "Day At The Zoo" 
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Friday evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Day At The Zoo

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
First, let me say, I love the zoo!! I love tigers too they are my favorite *Heart* and now on with the review...
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... I found this a very warm, delightful, and most creative entry. I know what you mean about looking into an animal's eyes and that they don't look or seem dangerous I would love to pet tigers, lions, and all animals. It sounds like you really did have a wonderful day except for the goat trying to eat your sweater *Laugh* Sounds like a lovely little Zoo. I would love to come and see.

My Favorite Parts:
I would have to say that I loved every bit of your visit to the Zoo and there is no way I am picking just one line of your visit for it is all wonderful.

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating, had you allowed ratings!

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Friday evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Edgar Allen Poe, Kit Kat, Horror

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... I found a very unique, scary but delightful, clever, a one of kind story that you have done with these prompts, and a most creative piece. I really like it!

My Favorite Parts:
The truth is, I enjoyed it all from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single line as it all fits perfectly together! Great job.

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.


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Review of Treat or Trick?  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This completes your week of "Days Of Sunshine" 

I was drawn in by the title and the description and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, action pack, well thought, emotional unique, and very creative story. I love the twist and turn nothing like a Halloween mystery, right? I do hope there is more to come on this story. You really do have a way with words as you weave your web or words drawing your readers in. I did not see anything that needs correction/editing at all. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing no matter what.

Courtesy of "Days Of Sunshine" 


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Review of Mahogany Hilt  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Thursday evening it is} evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Mahogany Hilt.

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... I found a dark deep poem, clever, unique, a one of a kind for sure, full of emotions, and so very creative.

My Favorite Parts:
This line just stood out to me the most: The tip of the knife grazed punctured silhouettes exposing the tortured heart.
Although I really do like the whole poem!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.



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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Thursday evening it is} evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: When Love Goes Away.

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... I found an open, honest, heartfelt, full of emotions, clever, unique, a one of a kind poem, openness and most a most creative poem.

My Favorite Parts:
I have to say that I absolutely like this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and there is no way that I can just pick one line as it all fits perfectly together. Great job!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.



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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Thursday morning. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Twas The Night Before NaNo

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... I found a very well thought out, charming, delightful, full of emotion, adorable, a one of a kind poem, unique, clever and very creative. It fits so perfectly together.

My Favorite Parts:
I have to say that I really enjoyed your whole poem here from the very beginning to the very end and I could not just choose just one line, after all, it really does fit so perfectly together!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.

Courtesy of "Days Of Sunshine" 

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Friday {or whatever day or evening it is} evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review:

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... Also, I have already reviewed chapter One some time ago and I liked that so I had to come and read chapter two.

I was hooked by the first paragraph as you story is full of action and I really like the dialogue and how it really just goes together I like how I can picture what is going on and I love that feeling.

Your piece is clever, unique, one of a kind and very creative.

My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely enjoy the whole story from the beginning to the end and I could not pick just one certain line. Good job!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.

Courtesy of "Days Of Sunshine" 


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Review of Blooming talent  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Tuesday Morning!

I love your C-Note Shop. Very warm and encouraging and full of sunshine! I was wondering if I could add your C-Note shop to my "Days Of Sunshine"  I think it would really fit right in there! Flowers are always beautiful no matter the season, don'tcha think?

Courtesy of "Days Of Sunshine" 
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Review of Hanukkah  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You have been gifted a week of "Days Of Sunshine" 

I was both curious and drawn into your poem by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very charming, delight, clever, unique, a one of a kind poem and a very creative poem. I enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing, great job! You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words drawing your readers in. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. I am giving your poem a rating of five-stars.

Courtesy of "Days Of Sunshine" 


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Review of Winter Fun  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a charming, delightful, full of action, clever, unique, a one of a kind, well thought out and a very creative little story. I like how the story goes and it even brings back some old memories for me. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words drawing your readers in. Great job! Continue using your web of words that you so clever weave. Keep sharing, and most of all keep writing, no matter what. I am giving your story a rating of five-stars.

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for entry "Mamma Mia" 
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Good evening.

I was both curious and drawn into your wonderful piece here.

I thought I would come by this nice Saturday evening and visit. I chose Mama Mia. I have not heard this song in years but I member it *Laugh* Of course I had to go look it up and when they began singing it came back to me. I like this song. The chorus of the song is my favorite part of the song. I love how you have so cleverly written this piece out. Keep being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing. Continue weaving your web of words

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Saturday evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Midnight Psychocat.

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn into your story and as I came on in I found a well thought out piece, clever, unique, full of action and really took me on a journey. What a creative story. Love the way unfolds too.

My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely enjoyed the whole story from beginning to end. Keep weaving your web of words!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative story with a "five-star" rating.



This review is coming to you from; "Talk Place Group Forum" 

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Review of When God Calls  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Saturday evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: When God Calls.

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both drawn into and curious by both your title and your description and so I had to come in and as I did I found you put scriptures in your piece which is always a wonderful thing to do and when God says yes no one can say no or stop it! For only God can open and shut doors! This piece us very uplifting, encouraging and delightful!

My Favorite Parts:
Are you kidding? I love the whole piece from the very beginning to the very end! Keep doing what God wants you to do. Always be a follow of God and not man!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.



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sunnystarr


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Saturday evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: The Infinite Journey

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very heartfelt, charming, delightful, unique, a one of a kind and a very creative poem.

My Favorite Parts:
Are you kidding? I loved the whole thing from the very beginning to the very end!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.



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sunnystarr


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Review of New Beginnings  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Saturday evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: New Beginnings

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
I was drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very charming, unique, a one of a kind, heartfelt and very creative piece that you have here.

My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely love this piece from the very beginning to the very end and I can not possibly pick just one single thing! It's perfect!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating.



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sunnystarr


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Review of Dawn  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Chatterbox Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was drawn in by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a well thought out, clever, unique, a one of a kind and creative poem. I enjoyed your whole poem and like the way it drew me in and the line that stood out to me the most is your last line.
Happiness brimming speaking healing. Something about this one line really just stands out to me. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all, great job.
Continue being creative and weaving your web of words, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing no matter what. I am rating your poem with a five-star rating.

Sexy Witch


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Review of One Soul  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Chatterbox Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was drawn in by both your title and your description and so I just had to come on in and as I came on in all I can say is...

Wow! What a wonderful poem, full of emotion and big open heart. I like the flow of your poem and your rhythm as well. You really do have away with words!

I enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the whole end.

I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all, great job!

Keep sharing, continue weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what!

My rating for your very creative and well thought out poem is a five-star rating.

A really good Halloween Image


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have a group with a few of those things you said at the top and I would love for you to come and check it out at; " Spiritual Talk Place Group "  What a wonderful thing your Pastor is doing. Please feel free to look around and I would love to have you join if you like just let me know if you would like to and I will add you. God is good, God is great! God is good all the time and all the time God is good!
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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Jane Austen Group  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
What a wonderful Jane Austen newsletter as you have a lot of goodies in here and hey count me in to as a Janeites! I would love to be one too! And what a bunch of wonderful images too and what about that wonderful bracelet! "Pride and Prejudice" is being done as a ballet. What? I personally don't see it as a ballet, either. Awe the coloring book for adults sounds cool, glad to know that you enjoy yours! I may just have to pick one up after I get back to working again of course! Hey, I would have never guessed that Jane Austen brewed beer! Wow!! I would love to get all of her movies and plan to do so too along with all of her books! Well, I am not an expert on Jane Auten but I sure do enjoy learning all the things you teach me about Jane Austen! I also love all three of your forms that you have listed in here too... This is really a wonderful newsletter and I really have enjoyed it and I look forward to next month's newsletter as well! Be sure to keep doing all the wonderful things that you do, Keep sharing, and most of all, keep writing no matter what. If you would have allowed ratings I would have given your newsletter a five-star rating and by the way, I would be giving all your newsletters a five-star rating! Thank you so much for all you do. I really have enjoyed learning all the things that you have taught me about Jane Austen and many other things! I will have to do so digging and make it appoint to do so and do some sharing with you though what I find I am sure you will probably already know, although I was really thrown to find out that she brewed beer I would have never ever guessed that one!


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Talk Place Group Forum  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Wednesday afternoon. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Your Poem: The Sower And The Seed.

My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!

My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.

My Thoughts:
Wow! What a wonderful poem you have written here. How nice to let others know that He is just waiting on us to come back to Him and that he is waiting for us right where we left him. Isn't great that he has so much love for us and isn't great to know that there is nothing that He can not do!!

My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed you whole poem from the beginning to the very end and I really loved each paragraph as it all fits perfectly together.

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!


My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.


My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative and well thought out poem with a "five-star" rating.



sunnystarr

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St. Patrick Elf


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Review by Sunny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! What a very powerful poem full of emotion. A heartfelt poem too. Sometimes I think we all feel this way at least a time or two throughout our lives. I enjoyed your whole poem from beginning to end. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. You sure do have a way with words as you weave your web of words which draws your readers in. Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing no matter what! I am giving you a five-star rating for this powerful poem!


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Review by Sunny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, what a lovely poem! What is up there in the sky? I love the image you have at the top of your poem and it looks so peaceful and it also goes along with your poem too. I really enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I really like how it makes me feel as you weave your web of words drawing your readers in for sure. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing no matter what.


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Review of Autumnal Equinox  
Review by Sunny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this as autumn is my favorite season! You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words captivating your readers. I really enjoyed your whole poem from the beginning to the very end. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Continue weaving your web of words, continue sharing and most of all keep writing no matter what!


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