Personal Note:
I came to visit you this fine Friday afternoon. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Sara's Port Chapter 1. I always start at the beginning!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two!
My Disclaimer:
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful.
My Thoughts:
Wow! I love the way this story opens up and just reeled me right on in as you weave your web of words
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed your whole story here. The way it flows and it is just right on point, but the last line: All he knew was he wanted to find Sara and reach out to her -the sooner the better... really just stood out to me!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job!
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.
My Rating:
I am giving a rating on your very creative Story with a "five-star" rating.
What a good song! You are so right, Secrets can hurt or can be good. And we all have them! I find it is best when people don't really know much about you! Such judgemental people and we all know a few of those kinds of people too!
Thank you so much for sharing I have really enjoyed this entry!
Keep writing and spinning those thoughts and great ideas!
What a wonderful piece you have here and information and educational to those who don't know the things about women. I think it was a shame how women were treated and I am so glad was not not in that time although I do love the dresses and outfits they wore back then. Sounds like you had a really good time dressing up and going to the place that you went to and how nice and cool that men were the servers and so glad to hear that they were really nice too! I also love the pics that you have in here.
Keep writing and sharing as only you can! And let women roar!
Wow what a sad thing to say, feel and live. To bad he doesn't meet the right people for surely not everyone is this mean! I really like your little piece here. It is full of sadness, sorrow, hurt and pain. I was hoping for a better ending but my heart was broken even at the end, to not know what it is like to be accepted, to be welcomed as a friend, to not fit in and how terrible for him to wish the torment would end!
You are very creative and really do have a way with words as you weave your words drawling your readers in letting them see and feel exactly what you are saying.
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing. Great job.
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing no matter what!
What an absolutely adorable story. You have this way with words as you weave your web of words reeling your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you sure can make your readers feel.
I like the whole story from being to end and a meaningful plot indeed. I did not see see any errors at all.
Continue sharing as only you can, keep being creative and most of all keep writing, no matter what!
If you would allow ratings I would have giving this adorable story five stars!
Wow! What a wonderful news letter full of good information and some good tips too. I like that you gave some places for us to look up that is a great I deal.
You are always researching Jane Austen and you do wonderful and awesome with analyzing her novels always!
Love the images too!
Keep writing and sharing. Looking forward to the next newsletter...
I enjoy this song and love it as well. Let me be honest there are a lot of Prince's songs that I really do love thus one reason why I could not stop at 16 and I done 29 and there are so many more I could have put in this list!! Keep writing
I was feeling that part of the movie as well in Purple Rain!! I wish I could find someone that had all that love for me!!! Such a beautiful love song... I am very happy to see that Prince really did touch you and that you are such a big fan well actually he called his fans friends because he said that fan is short for fanatic!!
What a wonderful entry I love it! You really do have a way with words and you know just how to keep your readers engaged with what you are saying! I am so glad you are a fan of Prince and that you have this group and this contest going!
So since my first review was deleted when I came by to re read what I had said I thought I would write another one and let's see if this one stays!
I love your place here! You are so talented and I love the way you think. We think a lot a like and it is no wonder why we think of each other as sisters!
I love all the images that you have in here too. Prince Roger Nelson was very talented and I can tell that you are a fan of his
Keep writing and sharing as only you can!
I wish you were allowing stars because I would give you FIVE And I really mean it!
My Dear and good friend who is more like a sister to me Princess Megan Rose 22 Years I love this book that you have about Prince. I love this contest that you have created for us all to join in on and to be apart of. I love what you are doing and I love the images that you also allowed me to use in my book "Prince Writing Challenge Book " I wish you allowed stars because I would give you five stars
Baby, I'm a star. I don't want to stop until I reach the top. I know there ain't nothing wrong with your ears. Indeed, I'm a star!" Hey! Look me over. Tell me, do you like what you see?
I too love when he sings this at the end of "Purple Rain." And I love his killer smile and beautiful eyes!!!
He really did dance in this song. I love the outfit he wore in this song. I liked what I saw as well! Gurl we sure do think a like!!!!
I love what you have in here and can't wait to read what else you have to say about him and his songs
What a wonderful newsletter. I love it from the very beginning to the very end. You really do have a way with words as you draw your readers in as you weave your words for your readers to keep going drawing them completely in! I also love the images that really do go along with your newsletter. I can't wait to see the next one! Thank you so much for letting me be apart of your newsletters. If you were excepting ratings I would give this newsletter a five star rating.
Sounds like a really wonderful time. "The Christmas Store " sounds like a wonderful place and someday I am gonna have to go there! I am glad that you had such a good time, and a purple hat band with flowers! I love the way that you share this and make me feel like I am there! Keep sharing and keep writing
Good Friday Evening. This review concludes your week of "Days Of Sunshine"
I was drawn into and very curious by and title and your description. And as I came on in I found a very heartfelt, warm, charming, a poem that made me think and very creative. I love how this made me feel and I like how you talk about God our Father! I love how this poem made me feel and how humbling this poem made me feel. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words as you captivate your readers so that they can really see and feel what you are saying. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing n matter what.
I was very curious by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, a well thought out delightful and very creative poem. I also like that you put that this entry is for and contest and that you put the link for the contest so your readers can check that out as well. I also like they rhyme and the rhythm of your poem and I enjoyed your poem from the beginning to the end as well. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all, keep writing, no matter what.
I was curious and drawn into here by both your title and your description as I am on in I was hooked by the first line, what a way to make your readers feel welcomed in right off the bat. I found a charming, delightful, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and a very creative poem. I love how the rhythm and rhyme go in this poem and I like the way it makes me feel too. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words as you captivate your readers in so much that they can see and feel what it is that you are saying. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all, keep writing, no matter what. I am giving your poem here that I really enjoyed and like so well a rating of five-stars.
I was curious and drawn into your poem from by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, charming, delightful and very creative poem here. I enjoyed the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end. I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. You paint a clear picture for your readers to see. Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
Oh wow! What a wonderful time and it must have been so much fun. Dressing up and all the fun time you and your Mom must have had too.
Love the images that you place here in as well as they go with the wonderful memory that you have ~ I would so love to go to one of these, who knows, maybe someday...
I also love the way to tell this as you really do have a way with words as you weave your webs of words to draw your readers in showing them what you are saying making them feel and letting them see what you are saying too.
Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and most of all, keep writing, no matter what!
If you were allowing ratings I would have given your wonderful and very delightful piece here a rating of five-stars.
I am with you I can't believe that it is fixing to be July in two days. Awe... I love the cookie cutters, how adorable
I have not watched "Pride, Prejudice and Zombies" and now to hear you say that you love it, I will have to check it out! Love what you have written about it. So you say that "Lady Susan", the book is better than the movie "Love and Friendship." Hmmm well, aren't all books better than the movies? Although I am with you I don't like movie critics either and I for one am sure that I would love the movie which I am gonna have to go find and get and watch for sure ~ ya may not know this but I am a movie junkie and I have a good collection of movies going on! Since I have been in your wonderful group have been wanting to get all of the books and I have been trying to find movies too.
Cool card games, I bet those are really cool to play too!
What a wonderful, clever, creative, informational, well thought and very newsletter that you have here, I learn something new in every newsletter. Thank you for letting me be apart of this wonderful place!
Princess Megan Rose 22 Years, What a wonderful place that you have here! Very creative, well thought and I love the images or should I say Pictures that you have of the group of ABBA. I remember their song called Mama Mia!
You are very organized with your place here and I can't wait to read every entry that you have in here! Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your webs of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what!
Good evening! I just thought I would come by for a little visit and I was drawn into and curious by your title and your description and as I came on in an enlightening, thoughtful, unique, clever, a one of a kind, well thought out, emotional, hopeful and very creative poem!
I really like the way it makes me feel. I also like the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end. You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words captivating your readers letting them see and feel what you are saying.
I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great job.
I also really like that at the bottom of your poem you put who this contest is for and you put the link to the contest that your poem is from.
Continue being creative and doing all the good things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.
I am giving your very clever and creative poem a rating of five-stars.
I was drawn into your poem here by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very well thought out, a one of a piece, unique, exciting and very creative. I like how each paragraph starts with "It Must Be Summer" very clever indeed. I enjoyed your whole poem. You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words drawing your readers in as you captivate your readers with your webs and have this way of making the feel and see what it is you are saying. I sure hope you win! I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all and I also love how you put that this is an entry for June and the link to the contest in which this poem is for and you also put lines count and word court and that it has no limits!
Continue being creative and weaving those webs of words, keep sharing and doing all the do things that you do, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description. It is really a good title and the description just makes you wanna read more so of course, I had to come on in and I was hooked by the first line and captivated by cleverness of your web of words so unique, honest, emotional, full of light, you're poem is really does fit perfectly together, I really like the feel of this poem, I like the rhythm of this poem as well and I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing in your poem. The image at the bottom is invalid but that does not effect your very creative and well thought out poem!
You really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words as to catch your readers and reel them in for them to see and to feel what it is that you are saying. Great job! I am so a fan of yours and have been for some time! Continue being creative and weaving those webs of words, continue being creative and doing all the good that you do in here, and most of all keep writing, no matter what!
I was drawn into and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in your image you have in here no longer works but I am sure that I would have loved it as I am a sig junkie I love this poem as it is dark, creepy, unique, clever, well thought out, made one think, and very creative. I like the way it perfectly goes together. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and also feel! I also like that at the bottom of your poem you put who it is for although they are not no longer as it says it's an invalid item. No fault of yours! I really like that you do this as it gives your readers knowledge of where your poem is for and also gives your readers a place that they can also check out!
I did not find anything that needs any kind of corrections/editings in your poem at all. Great job! Continue being creative, keep sharing and painting that picture, and most of all keep writing, no matter what! I am giving your dark poem here a rating of five-stars.
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I love this poem as it is dark, creepy, unique, clever, well thought out, made one think, and very creative. I like the way it perfectly goes together. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and also feel! I also like that at the bottom of your poem you put who it is for although they are not no longer as it says it's an invalid item. No fault of yours! I really like that you do this as it gives your readers knowledge of where your poem is for and also gives your readers a place that they can also check out!