Yeah, as usual I enjoyed your story. I think you're a pretty talented writer. I liked the men's reaction to the kiss, which was ever-so believable. I would read a story along those lines, but it might be nice to go into the background of them. "Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. XOXO :P
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/supernatural65
Generated in 0.10 seconds at 1:55am on Mar 04, 2026 via server WEBX2.