Growing or shrinking fan stories are quite popular, not that I mind, though I often have trouble adding to them myself. This one is interesting, but no real rules per say. Still, A for effort.
An interesting idea, with a lot of options. A few minor bugs I have. 1: The characters are detailed, but, in the section where the rules should be, rather then the first chapter, unless the author wanted it that way. 2: Only one rule, and that's all. Still, I'd go with a 7/10.
Interesting plot line, with a lot of options to pick from. Gotta admit, I've lost interest in Pokemon, if that's what this is based on, but, still, great effort, 8/10.
An interesting idea, though with only a few rules, but ones that make sence. I understand this story has become popular enough for several, 2 I believe, spin-offs. 8/10.
What rules there are make sence. This is based off a previous idea with the character Misty. Rather interesting, with several possible paths to pick from. 8/10.
A great idea. I believe there's a comic series with several alternate versions of Star Wars events. A great effort, 101/10. The few rules put in place make it work extremely well.
An interesting idea, with multiple options, several paths to take. An 8/10 from me. Nothing wrong with it at all from what I can tell, and the rules put in place make sence.
An interesting idea, wiht mutiple options. Not a fan of giant stories, I've tried them, but, can't seem to work with them well. Still an excellent effort. 6/10
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