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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a great standalone short story, although there are a few places where the wording seemed off to me. Nothing problematic, just odd. Finally, the ending is a little weird. The way the dragon acts is just weird enough to surprise a reader, but not big enough to contribute to the story.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
This poem (or song) is too repetitive for my tastes. Even if that's intentional, i feel it'spoorly executed. Some of the lines make very little sense to me, like 'Dreaming of true love has passed me by'. To me, this line seems to say that the singer hasn't even dreamed of true love, but that doesn't make sense when you add in the 'experience isolation and loss' line, at least to me
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